Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, I Capture a Wild Jingliu

I like this theme. I remember there was a book called Palu. It was about catching black swans at the beginning. I also liked that book, but it's a pity that the book didn't stand up to Shen Hejian. Author, stay alive.

It feels pretty good. Compared with other Bengtie fan novels, it is more readable and there is no feeling of abandonment or impatience. There may be some problems in some details, such as the level of combat power or the performance of Ling Shi does not match his character, but generally speaking, it is easy to arouse readers' interest in reading. It is a good work in fan fiction. I look forward to subsequent updates. I hope to complete the combat power system and improve the character image. If possible, I hope the author can add an aspect of growth to the protagonist's personality, improve the protagonist's personality, and improve the protagonist's combat power. Otherwise, it will look awkward and there will be a feeling that the protagonist is of no use.

That's it (no corner is given to wood) Suggesting that the protagonist train high-level immortals like Meng Ling is definitely not because I am jealous.

It's okay, but there are some minor problems in the first few chapters. The injuries suffered by the Immortal Boat Man are not considered minor injuries.

The plot is very good and the characters are well developed

Not bad, it tastes like that

Really good, like it

Five stars, even though the author is dead

I only have one question. Esta's level is actually higher than that of Kage-ryu, and Kage-ryu is still a commander.

Although I haven't read much yet, I think it's a good book based on my years of reading. 😘