The Paranormal Has Taken Over the World: An Ancient God Dwells Within Me

Emm, I've updated it now after reading it. To sum up my feelings, it's a bit novice but okay. The setting is good, the writing could be improved, and the world view is okay, but it's not too huge. The following is demining: 1. The protagonist has no cp or ambiguity, and other people don't know about it. The group favors Xiao Shen, and the seven group portraits can be considered to have their own characteristics. 2. The plot line is relatively smooth, but the recurring leaders and supporting characters are a bit monotonous. 3. The story line mainly revolves around Xiao Shen's experience and growth. The original plot was not that complicated, but because Xiao Qi appeared in the latest chapter, and Xiao Qi's words can be said to be fate in the past and present life, etc., It can be seen that Xiao Shen's background is still somewhat mysterious. 4. The most important thing is that I feel that the change of relationship is a bit awkward. I can understand Xiao Shen and Xiao Jiang, but for example, Xiao Xie and Xiao Shen are not very understanding. It feels a bit stiff, but after watching it, I got used to it, and it seems to be okay. There's not much else I want to say. If there is anything else, I'll add it later…

I am an i person. . I almost never post book reviews, but this novel is very good. For me personally, I don't know what other people think of it, but it is very good. It is a group portrait and everyone is nice. Hmm... I suggest you practice your writing more. It may feel a bit stiff in some places, but I believe it will become good. I hope the author won't suddenly run away halfway through writing [I'm about to cry]

Author, I want to read every one of your books [laughing]