Reborn and Clinging to Him, I Beg My Husband for Cuddles Every Day

I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to read 200 chapters every day. This thing is awesome. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author. Doubao tells the boss tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. It's also very fast to see, okay. It must be highly praised and supported, it's not annoying at all! That's awesome, okay. I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

Overall Rating: Flaws do not hide the merits Overall, this book has a very good look and feel, and is highly recommended overall. However, there are still some minor problems at the front. For example, it is too slow to get to the topic. The introduction of Shen Ciyu's past life is summarized in one and a half lines, which is only 27 words. The main text does not directly rebirth at the beginning. Instead, it describes in detail the past life of Shen Ciyu's persecution, which is almost 20,000 words. If it is to let readers understand the causes and consequences, I feel that it is not very good to write like this. First of all, after reading the introduction, most people must be looking for the reborn sweet pet, so it is best to start the chapter directly by saying that the protagonist is reborn, or simply describe what happened to him before his death. I feel that one or two chapters is almost enough, and the remaining specific details can be filled in the protagonist's memories of his previous life after his rebirth. This is also more interesting. If you keep narrating in sequence, no matter how good the writing is, it will feel like a running account. It would be better to use flashbacks and intersperse past life memories with the plot after rebirth to narrate the story. After all, this is a love cookie, so the overall length of the article will not be much longer, so it will be a bit top-heavy. I just clicked in and didn't see the plot I wanted to see, which inevitably made me impatient. I almost quit because I didn't get to the main topic and it felt very boring. The past life content of the first seven chapters can be summarized in a few sentences, so that it will not appear too lengthy. Once you get through the first seven chapters and get to the main point, it becomes very interesting. I give this book full marks for its writing style. It's very comfortable to read. The overall article seems to have a writing framework. There is no particularly abrupt plot. The flow is smooth and flowing. It is indeed very sweet! The writing is really good, it reads smoothly and naturally, it's really comfortable to read, and the narrative is very clear. I'm a bitch and I love reading sweet stories like this about rebirth and atonement. It's actually a little unreasonable to delve into the logic, but it's still fun to read without thinking, and the writing can make up for it. The interaction between the two people is very sweet and cute. Generally speaking, I recommend it. The main reason is that there are not many male-male novels on Tomato that are so well-written. The plot is a common routine that everyone loves to see: reborn as a scumbag, and then doting on the lover who was misunderstood in the previous life. This kind of plot coupled with good writing is really enjoyable to watch every time. I hope the author will continue to update! The writing is really good🥰

It's super pretty! Both of them have long mouths! Daily life is very dull but it doesn't make people feel boring [Sparrow Food Masterwork] [Grass Has Been Planted] I like it! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's really super nice [like][like][already planted][already planted][already planted][already planted][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]

I can't do it anymore. I've already tied it. It's so good. There's such a delicious novel. The two of them are so sweet and feel at ease. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development of the deputy cp. The author needs to work hard! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Sweet! ! ! I hope it will continue to be sweet in the future!

Come on✊, I believe you can do it, boss Yes, I'm here again. Overall it's very good. I suggest the author refine the language organization system and simplify it for the better.

Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤, but the rating is so low, what a pity, don't miss this article! ! !

Approximately how many chapters does the author want? The daily life of the two is really fascinating (//∇//)

Wouldn't it be a little pitiful for me to be controlled by a serial? 🥹