A Puppy Training Manual

It would be great if the male protagonist's smoking could be changed. He smokes too frequently. He mentions it in almost every chapter, and sometimes he mentions it several times, which means he smokes several cigarettes in one chapter. It's really bad. Another thing I feel is that the male protagonist is very emotionally unstable, always having sudden outbursts, which is very scary.

It's very interesting. I read it all in one go. It's a very sweet campus story. Although the male protagonist always calls himself me as me at first, he changed it after being told by the female protagonist. There is no female competition. The mission is also very easy to complete. Finally, I hope the original female protagonist can be with the person she likes. Don't overdo the original plot. It's very interesting. Come on.

I think this book is super warm. The heroine is alone. After the system comes, the heroine has a partner, someone to accompany her, and she slowly develops more emotions. Later, the hero also comes, and they become a couple. The hero will protect the heroine and respect her opinions. There is another person in the world who loves the heroine. The heroine is no longer alone, and will be warm and cozy. The author injects soul into the hero and heroine, making it more vivid.

I always feel that there is an anger hanging in my heart. I always feel that the original male and female protagonists should not or have a clearer line to write the emotional line between the two. Just like Jiang feels to the female protagonist that he may have other feelings for others and questions the original male protagonist's love. I think the original male protagonist can have a sided emotional analysis [→ such as the original male protagonist's monologue] Somehow, I saw that the original male protagonist seemed to have a pale argument when they broke up [I can't find what the scene was]. I felt that there should be a reason, and I felt distressed. Of course, it was not that I ignored the original female protagonist. After all, the original female protagonist was broken up for no reason, and her tone may not be good. The original male protagonist is like a mute who cannot speak, and is indeed a very pitiful little girl. It seems a bit obvious, and I feel that the author may be planning to write about the relationship between the male protagonist's brother and the original female protagonist [I don't know if this is correct or not]. I think some scenes of the original male protagonist can be added to enrich the plot. It may just be that the original male and female protagonists have not been written about yet, or it may be that they are not the main characters after all, but I personally think that since they have been written about, it can also smoothly complete the emotional line. Of course, this is just a small personal suggestion. If you don't like it, just pretend you didn't see it.

It's very good-looking, but there are too many descriptions about the male protagonist smoking, and the plot is also great. When I saw Yanzi leaning on the tombstone and expressing my longing for her, I felt so sorry for her [crying]. Her parents and brothers are gone, and there are bad people bullying her. When she was in the office, the girl's father said that he would rather lose money than let his daughter apologize. You feel sorry for your daughter, and I feel sorry for my daughter. Yanzi is so miserable, and the original male and female protagonists hope that they can separate in the future. Yanyan is doing well, and she is also very good with Su Baichuan.

It's very beautiful. The heroine Yanzi is very cute. I really like the heroine's baby. The hero's preference for the heroine is also unique. The young couple of the hero and heroine are also sweet and reassuring. Please give your best to the author [Love] [Like] [Mark]

"Do you want to have puppy love with me?" Ren Yuyan blinked. This was what she and Nie Chi had said. The picture continues to change, the boy and the girl are together. The two of them walked home, the two of them sat in the car and chatted, the two of them went to the aquarium together, and the two of them experienced a lot of things. The scene changed little by little, and finally stopped at the boy kneeling on one knee in a dark room. Ren Yuyan seemed to feel something, and turned around to look. Unexpectedly, Nie Chi had knelt down on one knee, holding a black velvet box in his hand. Nie Chi's throat kept tightening, he was more nervous than ever and more serious than ever. After feeling Ren Yuyan turn around, he looked up at her with a serious and sincere tone: "Ren Yuyan, do you allow me to marry you?" His proposal declaration was the same as his proposal cartoon. In the proposal cartoon, he described Ren Yuyan as a savior who made his world colorful. In his declaration of marriage proposal, he regarded Ren Yuyan as the superior one and sincerely requested for a chance.

I think it is a very interesting novel, and every character is very vivid. The most important thing is that Dada laid a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. I kept guessing who were the good guys and who were the bad guys, but in the end the truth came out, which really shocked me. Of course, I have worked very hard to fill in every hole. Anyway, I feel that every one of them has been filled in. It's really worth watching!

Why are so few people reading such a beautiful book? ! The body feels warm when I watch it, it's super heartwarming. The male and female protagonists are sweet and like the female protagonist's baby. The male protagonist has always been firmly in love with the female protagonist. Generally speaking, there is nothing sad about it. There is a twist in the plot. The author writes it very well. Thank you very much [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It's just that the male protagonist smoked a bit too much in the front, it would be nice if the female protagonist suffered less👀

The author's writing style is very good, and the descriptions are very delicate. There are many foreshadowings that make the characters more three-dimensional. The male and female protagonists have their own spiritual cores. The characters are not dry and dry, and they are super beautiful [Already planted] [Add one to bookshelf]