Global Survival: I Start by Raising Bees in a Famine, and Evolving

There is no problem with the cards! License verification is over! I can only say that what I have written so far is really good. The most basic point is that there are no meaningless water chat channels. There is no invincible start. It's not too rubbish, it's at the level of a top-notch expert. Good.

Another normal book written by a normal person, great. (Applause) (Stacked armor) First of all, I sincerely hope that there will be more normal people and books like this, so I will do my best. If this makes everyone, especially the author, very unhappy, please ignore me. Common problems with this type of book: 1. The time transition is too short, and the overall combat power develops too quickly, resulting in nothing to write about in the later period and the story finally collapses (there are already signs of this, I hope the author has enough overall story ideas) 2. When the protagonist is sufficiently ahead, another person who is more ahead suddenly appears (the solution is to provide enough character foreshadowing or extend the story time to give other characters more growth stories) 3. All good things are attributed to the protagonist, making other characters completely unnecessary. However, in this type of story, other characters must exist to highlight the contrast. The final result is that the protagonist either becomes a "nanny" or a "god". (The author has already begun to figure out the solution, although it is not yet complete. It is to highlight the characteristics of each character, especially the protagonist, and not make the protagonist an all-powerful character to effectively avoid this kind of thing.) [Writing this, I found that this kind of story is more suitable for group portraits? I really hope there are more normal books written by normal people like this! ! ! Finally, this is an encouraging review! Above.

Overall, it's pretty good. The talent is considered to be growing, so it won't be easy to cheat in the first few days. Moreover, there is a wife at the beginning and there are no various female characters. The description is okay and not very embarrassing. The author needs to consider some aspects, and the writing is a bit bland. The content is about 4-4.5 Stars, and +1 star encourages writers who write survival articles that are not about supermodels. The charm of the game, the delicacy of the operation, the pressure of the brother, the deception of the details, the reward of touching the head, the secret of the end, the victory of the game, Nagato's ultimate intention, the secret of resisting the war, the traces of the family, the rhyming emperor, the agility of dodge, the miracle of reversal, prediction The trajectory, the sharpness of the attack, the fighting spirit with remaining blood, the perseverance in desperate situations, the rhythm of breathing, the torrential rain of combos, the surprise of critical strikes, the suffocation of wide open, the trick of ridicule, the trajectory of counterattack, the tacit understanding of the bond, the fateful hostility, the appetite of Laoba, the bigness of carrots The land, Luoluo's adventures, listening to English, the sharpness of weapons, the firepower of weapons, Xiong Er's honey, Xuewa's apprentice, SF express, the secret of watching the sea, the pressure of pigeons, Coke's territory, the gloomy weather, the fragrance of jade feet, the ancestral graves Secrets, girlfriend's best friend, single aunt, the mystery of wearing a threesome, Mamba's elbow, eldest brother's beloved wife, sweet memories, fun-loving younger brother, the mystery of the substitute, the emperor of ANBU, stepmother's secret, girlfriend's best friend, sweet-hearted Loli, Yang Mi with a face-changing face.

Although it is bland, it is indeed considered to be a good book written in Tomato. At least the poisonous points that should be avoided are avoided. After all, many authors think that many poisonous points are not poisonous points and insist on feeding them to readers.

This book avoids many pitfalls of famine-themed novels. The core setting is innovative, but it needs further polishing in the plot rhythm and character portraits. It is a survival novel with potential. 1. The golden finger setting is novel: there is no exclusive system of traditional cool novels. The global universal system is fair to all characters. The protagonist's advantage only comes from his own developmental talent. The supporting characters (such as Yang Teng with golden talent) are more like the male protagonists of conventional cool novels, breaking the routine of "the protagonist monopolizes benefits". 2. The tone of the plot is pragmatic: the writing style is more "normal", there are no puppet-like supporting characters, nonsensical storylines, and the advancement of the overall survival line is logical.

Overall, the look and feel is pretty good (personal feelings, too lazy to comment on each other): 1. On the golden finger setting: the system is for everyone First of all, there is no puppet-like, cerebellum-wrapped, nonsensical, pig-raising golden finger system like other Shuangwen. If I really want to say "Goldfinger", it is the talent of the protagonist! Developmental talent has begun to take shape. If I really want to say it, I think that the golden-talented Yang Teng is the male protagonist of a refreshing novel in the conventional sense.

It shouldn't be such a low score. A biased novel. Overall it's pretty good. The traditional "log house survival" novel is combined with famine, and the imagination is quite good. There are no big bugs or poisonous points, it is written with care!

Five-star recommendation! As a reader who has never played "Don't Starve", there is no reading threshold at all, and the world view is extremely smooth. The setting of the two regions with poor resources, and the couple using their talents to develop across regions, makes survival a satisfying experience. The plot has a tight rhythm, and the map change design after the seven days of fog is a genius, directly breaking the boring feeling. The characters of the protagonist group are likeable. They are neither virgins nor extremely self-interested. They understand survival and management better. Watching them develop from beekeepers step by step gives an overwhelming sense of empathy. The details of the san value setting are also in place, the logic is self-consistent, and five stars are awarded!

Supporting role recruitment post: Book friends who have ideas can write it down, and supporting characters will be selected as needed. Don't be too outrageous, which will affect the balance and make it impossible to write. Format requirements: Name: [Talent: The stronger the effect, the stronger the negative effect] [Initial item:] [Shelter Type:] [Character background and personality:] Is there any book lover who would like a supporting role to appear? [Pause face], I think the talent and ability will make me bald.

Shennong It's well written, with a gentle pace and appropriate diction. Having a wife at the beginning can eliminate a large number of inappropriate descriptions of female characters. The protagonist does not instantly become the survival protagonist in the traditional impression of online novels after entering, but there is a smooth and smooth transition. So far, we haven't seen any stupid villains, and there are no magic tricks either. Overall a good survival flow article so far Do you feel like you should develop the protagonist's career? The presence of the bee is a bit too low, or should it be changed to a profession like a craftsman?