Dragon Raja: A Promise for a New Age

The writing is quite good. I think the relationship with Nuonuo is handled better. He firmly pushes her away from the status of a lover and maintains a normal relationship with her as a friend of the opposite sex. It is better than those articles about beating her to death or getting entangled. The senior sister has her charm and is a friend worth living with and going through life and death with. It is good not to accept such a choice.

Not bad, a fanfic with a Jiangnan flavor. Lu Mingfei didn't pretend to be cool after traveling back in time. He continued to play the role of the funny loser, but his temperament and perspective on problems are still not the same as before. Cassel's answer to the last question in the interview was very touching and well-written! There is no pretense in the early stage, and it does not count after the novice protection period

It doesn't feel like a big problem, but the part where Mingfei goes to find Constantine alone is unreasonable. Because Lu Mingfei had been under surveillance since he moved to his uncle's house, even if Chu Tianjiao disappeared, someone would continue to monitor him. So Cassel would have reacted from the moment he came into contact with Chu Zihang and exposed his sword skills that he shouldn't have mastered. Therefore, it was impossible for him to run to the Three Gorges without alerting anyone.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I realized that the author is an acquaintance. The author's first book was a bit childish, and the second book was a bit pretentious, but this one balances the first two books into a very comfortable range, which looks smooth and won't make any drama. I hope to continue the writing style of the previous part of this book

I have read more than 20 books about Dragons, and this one is the one that I feel the best. I am looking forward to the plot of the little monster in the future.

No, I'm just talking about how this book is written so well to my liking, and the setting is a bit similar, co-authored, these books are all written by you, they are all on my bookshelf [face covering] The writing is so delicate, is the author so great? Update two books at the same time

I have read a lot of Dragon Clan fanfics, but this one looks really comfortable, the characters are not OOC, and the plot is not as stupid as other articles. I think the quality is top-notch among fanfics, but can it be done faster? [Laugh]

It's very beautiful, but I feel like there are a bit too many adjectives. Everything else is fine. Come on, author.

It's a very good fanfic. It's totally acceptable to read the book on my bookshelf. The writing style is very clear and logical. It can be said that it is very popular with Jiangnan Zhenzhuan (I hope there won't be another eunuch, there are already two eunuchs)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, I have always wanted to read this kind of thing... I don't really like most other fan fiction settings and can't even read it, but this one is really nice ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh