A Pirate's Journey from Scratch

I have been following the author since the last book, and now Qiu Sheng's New Beginning, I have to say that the author's writing has improved significantly. I was still regretting that the article ended like this, but the more I read, the more I feel that it is worth rewriting. It's just a pity that few people have read this book and there are only a few comments. I hope the author won't give up because of this [crying]. I prefer to stock up more and read it again, but I will comment more to encourage the author.

I really think it looks good Readers who have seen my book review can come in and take a look. The protagonist/is a girl. She is the light of everyone (I think it is, because a small and inconspicuous thing leads people to move forward and have goals), a very dazzling sunshine. Although the protagonist himself doesn't feel it.

From the break to the beginning, one can feel that the author's writing skills are improving, and that the author is taking Qiu Sheng's life seriously, which makes readers look forward to it. After meeting Lu Jiu and living in the navy, Qiu Sheng gradually became flesh and blood. Looking forward to the follow-up, which belongs to Qiu Sheng's own life.

It's particularly beautiful. I really like the way the author describes the changes in the heroine's mentality. He makes her change from an emotionless person (?) To a warm and soft core, so that she no longer feels that bonding with others is a "troublesome" thing. The heroine is still a leader and a witness. It is really difficult to play such a strong and gentle character. I don't like it🥰In addition, the part about the heroine and the adjutant is also very well written. The adjutant's adoptive mother saved the adjutant and influenced her to become a marine who worked hard for the people like her adoptive mother. The adjutant saved her little assistant, and the assistant worked hard to become a person like the adjutant. This kind of spiritual inheritance from generation to generation is so touching🥹

Nice! I haven't read a few of them yet but the writing is very good! ! And the setting is interesting! And from what I've seen so far, I don't think the character is OOC. I will continue to watch it. Why is no one watching it? Come on, author! ! !

The heroine has an invincible flow and prefers daily life. I really like the daily interaction with everyone...

Yes, starting from the "old times"!

I remember reading another Qiu Sheng book before. Was it deleted? [What]

Good-looking but too little

A very novel angle, very beautiful, but a little lacking [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]