I Stay Alive by Spoiling the Plot, Yet End Up with the Protagonist’s Beloved First Love

It's okay. The plot is good and written in detail, but there are too many repetitions and too much unnecessary information that makes it very verbose. Some settings in the book are out of date. The protagonist originally knew herbal medicine but didn't recognize it after meeting the heroine. At the beginning, the protagonist knew the name of the villain Bai Yueguang but later couldn't remember it after meeting the heroine. I suggest the author revise it carefully. First, he should check the settings to avoid inconsistencies. Second, he should delete repetitive and redundant content. I know the author wants to write a slow pace, but slow pace does not mean that one thing should be mentioned over and over again. Many mistakes are often caused by forgetting to mix up the correct ones due to a lot of repetition. The third thing is to re-examine the character creation. Although the protagonist is a waste at the beginning, persistence and self-improvement are important. On the contrary, after meeting the heroine, he is not so hardworking. The previous training and persistence are not mentioned. He is just rushing and being suspicious of each other with the heroine. This does not give people a good impression. All in all it's okay, but there's still a lot of room for improvement, so I give it four stars.

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Isn't it embarrassing to poop when you're on the run?

I cried after falling in love with the other person

Why don't the contents of chapters 26 and 27 match [what] [what] I don't understand. Can the author explain it a bit [face covering]