
The Apple of His Eye
命根儿
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- Completed
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- 132k Words
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- Unknown
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- Updated
- 7mo ago
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- Fanqie
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Life's Tough. Give Me Some Quality BL Stories
Any Normal Romance Between Two Men? Please, I'm Begging You
Nothing with those over-the-top descriptions of someone being breathtakingly beautiful right from the start. Keep it realistic; I get embarrassed easily 😗. And no instant love like instant ramen 😘. Thanks!
Two Male Leads, Unfailingly Gentle
Younger Men! Younger Men!! Younger Men!!!
I want a younger male love interest!!! A younger boyfriend with a dad-like vibe!!!! Wow, I've been so obsessed with shipping couples lately!!
Looking for Novels With Gentle Prose and Lots of Memorable Lines
Don't ask. The answer is that I ran out of material for my essay quq
Any BL That’s a Little More Realistic, Just About Ordinary Life? Mostly Looking for Sweet Romance
Looking for BL! Younger Top!!!
Looking for books similar to Help! My Tearful White Moonlight Is Trying to Kill Me. Any genre is fine, but something with a growing-up arc would be even better 😻😻 Please!
Two Male Leads, in High School: One Is a Quiet Top Student Who Radiates Academic Excellence
A laid-back, streetwise guy who looks like he’s terrible at school but is actually a top student.
Give Me Some Sweet Campus Romance for the Kids, Preferably BL
If anyone has stain remover, send me some too. I’m running out at home▄█▀█●
A Male Lead Who Is Sweet on the Surface but Dark Inside, a Younger Wolfdog, Who Gets It?!
I refuse to believe a book like this exists, unless it falls right on my head.
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Chu Mingyuan, the "silly and cute brother who likes his brother very much" and Shen Manzhen, the charming brother who knows how to coax his brother, really poked fun at me (◍ ´꒳` ◍). The clumsy affectionateness of the elder brother and the active teasing of the younger brother are very sweet. The elder brother is really like a little human machine. He retorts to his sister with a serious face. He is not stupid, but very cute. This character is also very three-dimensional and unusual. The perfection of the character. He has a strong personal color and is not feminine. The character of Xiaoyuan's sister is also very good. Her life has been difficult since she was a child, but her parents' disrespect is like a mountain. But she still climbed over it on her own strength and flew to a wider world. But I think she needs a year to love her because her life is too bitter and her secret love is too bitter (˃̣̣̥o˂̣̣̥) The plot of "Chili Fried Pork" made me sigh again that this little Chu Meng really cares about her younger brother. The focus of the story is on the two protagonists, and the presence of other supporting characters such as family and friends is a bit low. This makes the protagonist's emotional choices lack pressure from the outside world and weakens the sense of reality. Whether it is the elder brother's ambivalence of "being disgusting and not enough" when reading love poems, or the younger brother's personality changes at different ages, they are all well portrayed. "17-Year-old Shen Man really didn't answer the 19-year-old him, but the 24-year-old Shen Man really hugged the 26-year-old him." The weight of time and the progression of emotions are instantly filled ヽ(=ˆ・ω・ˆ=) The space is limited, the narrative is a little hasty, and the plot lacks many key plots. For example, how the relationship between the two breaks through from "cousin" to lovers lacks sufficient foreshadowing and transition. Some plot twists are slightly abrupt, with a "stop at the right moment" rush. It would be better to add more at the end (◍ ´꒳` ◍); This is a sweet pet article that is perfect for "healing" and "relaxing". If you are a reader who likes the themes of "reunion", "gentle redemption, fast-paced short stories", this novel will be a good choice. But if you are looking forward to a grand story with strict logic and rich plot, then it may leave you feeling unfinished●スv●
Hehe, rate yourself higher. Hey, recommendations are now open, here is a reading guide for you guys, (the plot in the first few chapters is slow-paced) I'll give you a question. (The prize for the best answer is limited to 7 days.) 1 Chu Huixuan's character: 2 Shen Manzhen's character: 3 Chu Liuqing's character: 4 Lin Xiangshen's character: 5The relationship between the four people: 6 reasons why this book is called lifeblood: 7What is Lin Yushan like:
It's very interesting to watch. There's nothing bloody about the plot. It's quite bland. The older brother is cute like a mini-human machine and the younger brother is a bit fishy. The ending is rushed and boring, so you can watch it to pass the time. (I don't know how clq and lxs will end up, but they hope to be together)
In the first few chapters, the water flows slowly, but as it goes on, it starts to become sweet and salty.
Friends and relatives, I am here to support you! ! ! ! Come on, I feel like there are still die-hard fans out there. It's okay. If it becomes popular, be sure to send me a signature!
[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] There's been a lot going on lately, hehe, five stars
I think it looks good [laughs][laughs][laughs]
It's pretty good to watch, but the ending is a little rushed, and there's nothing very exciting about it. It's bland, and the water flows slowly. Both people are good. All in all, it's okay. It's worth watching.