[High-martial world, a sister (unrelated by blood, one heroine; he finds his sister in Chapter 10), passionate, gods, and a male lead who loves causing trouble (don’t get the wrong idea, he just likes stirring things up)]
My name is Su Qian. I’m from Daxia, I have a sister and a home, both my parents are busy, and I enjoy playing chess.
A hundred years ago, disaster struck the world, foreign races invaded, and the supernatural emerged.
In the midst of the apocalyptic disaster, humans became supernatural beings and gained a companion treasure of predetermined rank and limitless potential: the Heavenly Martial.
God-tier Heavenly Martial: [Gate of Creation].
[Ability: Enlighten all beings. It can control anything in the world and enlighten it into an “alternative Heavenly Martial”!]
[Enlighten Heavenly Martial, chess. Ability gained: Chess Over the Boundless...]
[Enlighten Heavenly Martial, Maybach...]
[Enlighten Heavenly Martial, Mount Fuji in Japan...]
“Hey? I think something incredible slipped in there.”
The strongest squad of seven from the Golden Generation.
Captain: A devoted sister-con with a soft heart
Vice-captain: A funny guy who’s only serious now and then
Members:
The world’s cutest brother-con
An angler who never comes home empty-handed
An older sister who grows flowers
Dora B Meng, Doraemon’s brother in Daxia
A little angel from hell
“I’m the sort of person who holds a grudge. The Japanese wanted me dead, but I survived. Now I happen to have a snow-mountain Heavenly Martial, and I’m missing a volcano to melt it with. Where can we find one?”
“That’s a tough one to guess...”
I haven't read a few chapters, but I quite like the setting.
I clicked on it and found that the author was writing at a very fast pace and was about to enter the academy in eight chapters, and some parts were not explained clearly, such as when the sister's abilities were mentioned, and how could the sister take the exam without identity. Moreover, the protagonist's opponents do not have the calmness of aristocratic families, and they all explode at the drop of a hat. The insults may be fresh and funny for a while, but if you keep watching them, you feel like your brain is missing. Moreover, the author's writing is not like a God's point of view, like a bystander's point of view. Many parts are not clearly stated but passed by. Except for the protagonist and the standard big sister, the other characters are not established. After reading it, it feels like not watching, just like running water.
But the better part is that there is no suppression, no pretending to be a pig, just pure invincibility in the same class, and it is difficult to write a group portrait text well, and it is also very attractive. Having a single heroine as a younger sister is much better than having a close sister and finding another girlfriend. The younger sister is not a burden but a partner. The protagonist is not a poor boy. Many things will be simpler if he has a background. This also speeds up the pace and post-production possibilities.
In short, the author did not write this book to make money. It is really interesting to have this idea. Let's taste it first and see if it will be more logical later.
Chapter 45 Comments
It's quite good to read. Shuhuang recommends it. I think it's a relatively standard cool novel. [Laughs]
Except for the plot of the ex-girlfriend, which is a bit ridiculous, everything else is okay, at least it is not like some other novels where the brain-dead ex-girlfriend drags out the plot. [Angry]
The character design is also pretty good, and the characters who hang out with the protagonist ([laughing evilly]) are quite interesting.
There are too many foreshadowings in the early plot, including Su Qian's past and his "people-eating" sect, Ye Li's "fighting for good people", Su Qiling's ability to help people break through... [Understood]
I hope the author has his own outline. I feel like it should be pretty good if he writes it down. Looking forward to
Comrade Lao Ye has made progress, I'll go, it's a bit interesting, and the pace is much better than the previous one.
Just hurry up and get to the Japanese chapter. I want to see Lao Su lighting Mount Fuji in Japan and playing with Tianwu.
But the quasi-god-level chess piece at the beginning is pretty cool. It's the first time I've seen a chess piece used as a martial spirit [laughing]
(It is more customary to call Tianwu Wuhun, the two are a bit like [face covering])
After seeing the previous plot, which is still very interesting, I think it is very interesting. As long as the author does not do other things, such as the ending is not bad (author, if you dare to knife your sister, I will send you to Thailand and I will send you the blade). Overall, it is still very interesting. Good luck to the author.
Ye Wudao let me say that Ye Wudao is awesome! (Purely voluntary [thinking]) It's really good, the jokes are just right, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope the author can grasp it [send heart][send heart][send heart]
The name Ye Wudao definitely means having a knife [Thinking]
It's really good-looking, that's all. It doesn't matter, it's cute even if it's small [makes a face]
I haven't read a few chapters, but I quite like the setting. I clicked on it and found that the author was writing at a very fast pace and was about to enter the academy in eight chapters, and some parts were not explained clearly, such as when the sister's abilities were mentioned, and how could the sister take the exam without identity. Moreover, the protagonist's opponents do not have the calmness of aristocratic families, and they all explode at the drop of a hat. The insults may be fresh and funny for a while, but if you keep watching them, you feel like your brain is missing. Moreover, the author's writing is not like a God's point of view, like a bystander's point of view. Many parts are not clearly stated but passed by. Except for the protagonist and the standard big sister, the other characters are not established. After reading it, it feels like not watching, just like running water. But the better part is that there is no suppression, no pretending to be a pig, just pure invincibility in the same class, and it is difficult to write a group portrait text well, and it is also very attractive. Having a single heroine as a younger sister is much better than having a close sister and finding another girlfriend. The younger sister is not a burden but a partner. The protagonist is not a poor boy. Many things will be simpler if he has a background. This also speeds up the pace and post-production possibilities. In short, the author did not write this book to make money. It is really interesting to have this idea. Let's taste it first and see if it will be more logical later.
Chapter 45 Comments It's quite good to read. Shuhuang recommends it. I think it's a relatively standard cool novel. [Laughs] Except for the plot of the ex-girlfriend, which is a bit ridiculous, everything else is okay, at least it is not like some other novels where the brain-dead ex-girlfriend drags out the plot. [Angry] The character design is also pretty good, and the characters who hang out with the protagonist ([laughing evilly]) are quite interesting. There are too many foreshadowings in the early plot, including Su Qian's past and his "people-eating" sect, Ye Li's "fighting for good people", Su Qiling's ability to help people break through... [Understood] I hope the author has his own outline. I feel like it should be pretty good if he writes it down. Looking forward to
Comrade Lao Ye has made progress, I'll go, it's a bit interesting, and the pace is much better than the previous one. Just hurry up and get to the Japanese chapter. I want to see Lao Su lighting Mount Fuji in Japan and playing with Tianwu. But the quasi-god-level chess piece at the beginning is pretty cool. It's the first time I've seen a chess piece used as a martial spirit [laughing] (It is more customary to call Tianwu Wuhun, the two are a bit like [face covering])
After seeing the previous plot, which is still very interesting, I think it is very interesting. As long as the author does not do other things, such as the ending is not bad (author, if you dare to knife your sister, I will send you to Thailand and I will send you the blade). Overall, it is still very interesting. Good luck to the author.
Ye Wudao let me say that Ye Wudao is awesome! (Purely voluntary [thinking]) It's really good, the jokes are just right, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope the author can grasp it [send heart][send heart][send heart]
The name Ye Wudao definitely means having a knife [Thinking]
It's really good-looking, that's all. It doesn't matter, it's cute even if it's small [makes a face]
Silver-haired sister [shy][shy][shy]
Ye Wudao is an air force guy
Ye Wudao let me say that Ye Wudao is awesome!