Naruto Mobile Is Awesome!

The writing is alright; there aren't any main characters interfering, it's just a plot change caused by leaked mobile game storylines. But with all that leaked information, many people should be able to learn the Rasengan by now. The key turning point that will cause the plot change is probably the similarity between Pain from Amegakure and the Tiger Skin Card, leading to the identification of the masked man and Black Zetsu's ability to possess others.

The writing is so-so, but the concept is quite good, making it worth continuing to read. —By Rosa

I'll give it a 5-star review first; it's not too late to fix it if it falls apart later. The formula is still quite classic, but there are some changes. The main change is that the focus is not on the game itself, but on other aspects, such as the plot and the reactions of various parties. Also, the missions are not out of character (OOC). This book is definitely worth reading right now. 👍

This book is designed to be accessible to everyone, with over 100,000 words in just 20 chapters. The reason for this is that the author uses a lot of text to explain plot points and original settings. 🤦

I'm not trying to be mean, but I think both of your books are pretty good; there's no need for that. You're trying to attract traffic, what if? Right? Anyway, I won't try to persuade you otherwise. That's true, no matter how well you write, nobody will read it without attracting traffic.

The writing is alright, but the author seems constantly excited, with exclamation marks appearing extremely frequently; almost every sentence ends with an exclamation mark, unless it's a question mark. Also, the narration is a bit unrestrained and somewhat difficult to decipher.

It's well-written, but the author's own complaints and detailed explanations of why they did things a certain way could be reduced. Actually, as long as this kind of writing isn't out of character (OOC), it's generally acceptable since most people are familiar with it.

Keep it up, writer!

The writing style is admittedly a bit weak, but the plot flows very smoothly. However, that's not the main point. The reason I gave it five stars is because the subject matter is truly excellent and captivated me. 👍 I finished watching it, and it had a rather natural, albeit somewhat rushed, ending.

To be honest, I really like Deidara and hope he has a happy ending. My goodness! Is it finished?