The Girl I Control Is Becoming a Great Psychic

Yes, it's a relatively cool article. At least it describes the fourth natural disaster in a strong style. It's arbitrary but also biased toward law. It's very comfortable to read. There are two lines. The writing in the game is better than the reality. It's a bit awkward to watch in reality. It's so fun in the game... Two updates a day are not enough. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. I hope the author will continue to write more without finishing the work.

I laughed so hard, I was very happy to read it, it is definitely a great story with great potential. The concept is very unique. When I read it, I remembered how embarrassed I was when I was playing a wolf [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] After reading more than ten chapters, there is no poison and no trace of AI. It's just that there are fewer people reading it and they are afraid of being cut in half [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's the most comfortable book I've read in the operation flow. There are many reasons, such as the plot is not procrastinating, it does not overwhelm the combat power, the emotional line is smooth, the jokes are interesting, and the pretense is fun. But after thinking about it, in the end, the author showed the protagonist's mentality as a player very well😋

This is an excellent work. It is a follow-up to I Really Have to Control You. It is similar but has indeed gone its own way. Comparing the two, I even think this one is better (the starting point was delayed in the later period, and now the author has cut it off). It is decisive in killing, and the realistic cognitive filter avoids most of the poisonous points. Compared with books of the same type, it can be compared. It is considered a masterpiece on Tomato. Oh my god, someone has changed, right? What happened later was so thunderous?

It's a purely enjoyable novel, not procrastinating, with a compact plot, where it should be pretentious, and where it should be fighting monsters. It's not literary, there's no Madonna plot, and there's not much romance. It's just like playing Soul Games, cutting all the way to the end. You can't go into the plot, so it's good to watch without thinking. There was a game gimmick in the early stage that looked okay, but later it became a bit repetitive and the plot wasn't very interesting.

Objectively speaking, this subject matter is quite new for Tomato. I find the game side very interesting, but to be honest, the real-life side is not very well written. The protagonist is put on a cognitive filter. There are so many strange changes that I have never thought about. There is no problem if I am a neurotic. I hope the author can write less about the real-life side or It is polished and polished, because both sides work together, it is definitely better. As for the game side, it is really good. The heroine's various psychological activities are so cute, including writing a small diary. The protagonist's weirdness is a plus point for me, but it may be a bit inexplicable to those who don't understand the protagonist's plot. To sum up, it is an excellent work and worth watching.

A very good article about the fourth natural disaster! Suggestions: I hope the names of the protagonist and the heroine can be separated when they control the body. For example, the protagonist control is the protagonist's name The heroine controls the name of the heroine Otherwise it looks a bit awkward [laughs awkwardly]

This track is a bit interesting. It combines the online game operation novels of the ancient Phalaenopsis generation, adds the theme of immortality, and then integrates the later two world travel and spiritual energy recovery. Looking at the current path, it will also integrate the electronic girlfriend system again. It is estimated that after the game opens the krypton gold function, there will be a setting where the upper realm's powerful krypton gold interferes with the lower realm's ecology? It's well integrated and doesn't feel stiff when reading. Quite interesting. Hopefully the author will eventually write a complete story.

It's the best action flow I've ever seen, and it's very enjoyable to read. I've just read the latest chapter, but the senior sister's affection is obviously for the female protagonist, and it seems unlikely that she will turn to the male protagonist in the future. The seven princesses should also be very fond of her, so why not marry her?

It's particularly fun. The author is designated as a master of soul travel. Back stabbing, rolling invincible frames, execution animation dodges, and the SL Dafa savior controlling the whole family are so interesting. It's really enjoyable to watch. It's so fun to watch [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] I will fully support the author

This book is definitely a cross-dimensional masterpiece. The most amazing thing is that Xiang Yu and Madara Uchiha fought for 300 rounds on the top of the Forbidden City for Lin Pingzhi. However, Lin Daiyu's pulling method was too outrageous. If not for the long-range harvesting of an Italian cannon by Jess QE's second link, coupled with a blue-silver entanglement, the protagonist would have been directly carried away by the lightning whirlwind from the opposite side. But the most unforgettable part of the whole story for me is the famous line that Luffy said to Liang Shanbo: Simba is so stupid, and the mud duck is so muddy. It describes the confusion when some of your favorite characters in Suri jump out and show you Ciallo~(∠ω<)⌒☆ when you are reading the book. Overall, the plot of the book is full of imagination and can be called a masterpiece.

The setting is very good. I wrote the game text with game thinking. There are also some poisonous points. At the beginning, the items are reflected in reality. I guess it won't take long to become a fairy in reality and start to show off. The first 10 chapters are pretty good

Coming from an AI comic, the fighting scenes and special effects are really exciting, and the setting is also very interesting. Players control the characters, and the characters have their own consciousness. There are many hilarious scenes and lines, and the writing is quite good! Yue Qingwu and Su Qinghan in the AI ​​comic are both very good-looking, and Hua Jieyu's dark-white cheongsam is also very good-looking. Looking forward to the continued updates of novels and updates of AI comics.

Wc, this is the real cool article, it's very comfortable to read

The little ass has praised it, where can I find such a soulful and refreshing novel? [Explore] The soulful jokes and refreshing sweetness are all up to standard. There are some problems with the logic, but the flaws are not concealed. It is a very good sketch. To be honest, I usually abandon the sketch after reading a hundred chapters. This one is really good [Note]

Read 🍅 novels and enjoy a life of making money from the haystack. From this point of view, I can't write four or five hundred chapters. I hope it won't become a running novel later. It's fun all the way. After playing the Myth of the Ring of Magic and the like, it should seem more relatable and interesting. Then the writing style is also good, so I clicked on the author to take a look. It turns out that I have read the previous novel, and I suddenly jumped to writing fantasy. Fantasy novels such as Crossing the River are not unique and the writing style is good and refreshing. It is difficult for people to accept it. Come on, author, [please update].

Not bad, good, good looking and funny. Much better than Chen Huaian's one. I remember that one had a score of 9.2. It seems that this book is very good so far. If it doesn't explode later, it should be 9.0. It should be fine. I'm optimistic about it.

It's great. The biggest failure of this type of novel on the market is that after the male and female protagonists meet, the author can't wait to push the emotional track of the male and female protagonists into a romance novel. However, many authors do not handle it well and end up like guilt literature. So far, this book is very good, with everything it should have, and the rhythm is still that of a game. As for the emotional aspects of this kind of article, it must be delicate, but the difference between a good book and a commonplace lies in whether the emotions are gradually accumulated and harvested or have sudden and abrupt turns. So far, the author's writing is good, and it is comfortable to read.

It's very interesting to watch. Most of the battles in the game are fun. There are very few realistic plots. The real-life protagonist seems to have a cognitive filter and is unaware of the anomalies in reality. He gives away some of the rewards in the game. However, the protagonist's real-life combat power is far ahead, which should not be considered a poisonous point. At least I don't care. There is no disgusting plot. He keeps going back to the perfect route.

The battles are very good and exciting. The protagonist is decisive in killing and has the most basic moral principles. There is no boring emotional line. Even the villains are tool men. You can see that they have their own characteristics and have reasonable motives for their actions. However, the characters are still thin, especially the decent characters are a bit stereotyped. The author knows how to tell stories, and the narrative rhythm is relaxed and smooth, and he can always bring out new points of interest when he is about to get bored. It is very interesting to see the two parallel lines of reality and game. I hope the author will not ignore the line of reality. The integration of the two lines will recycle the early foreshadowing. It is also a test for the author to make the story interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It is very good until more than fifty chapters. The psychological description and emotional portrayal of the characters are very good. It is a rare masterpiece. But in the future I feel like I have to start writing about the revival of modern spiritual energy. My personal suggestion is to focus on remote control cultivation of immortality, otherwise it will be easy to lose both sides.

I give you a five-star review to express my support. To be honest, I personally hate copying poems. On this point, I personally want to deduct more than one star from you. The second point is that I personally think that playing games, writing novels and writing diaries have different feelings. I personally hope or prefer a real world of cultivating immortals, using a game. The writing method is wrapped in a shell, but the text gives me the feeling that it is a game, but it wraps up a real person in the world of immortality. At least until I read the latest chapter, every time I saw him rewinding, I felt like it was a game. Every time I was very involved, very serious, and very immersed in reading, and suddenly gave me an answer, it was very dramatic, and the sense of immersion was lost by half in an instant. For example, when you choose good guys, bad guys and fun people for the first time, and later when you choose to save the people around the female character to achieve a perfect ending or plot option, you can write out the tragic plot of the female character in one or two words. I think I handled it very well when I lived here. I am very embarrassed. I'm afraid that the author will write a novel. I kidnapped the timeline and said it over and over again. The different directions of the same thing, the precise blocking plot and the execution QT all remind me of the memories of those games back then. Although I am a handicap, I hope the author can update it quickly so that it does not crash.

In terms of genre, I refer to the book "Roast Goose" to a certain extent, but this one will be more on the game side. There is currently weak interaction between the male and female protagonists. If you like the game flow, you can see that cultivating immortals does not take up such a large part. It is more like the feeling of soul-based reverse water cold plus cousin. If you like game novels, you can take a look. The immortal cultivation part is still more traditional when considering the cultivation of immortals.

It's very beautiful, perfectly integrating the game features with the plot of cultivating immortality. This is not a fake game like before, but a single-player game that can be rolled back (the heroine's memory cannot be rolled back) In a word, it is the best novel of this type.

The writing is really good, at least between 8 and 9 o'clock. But when it comes to supernatural beings in novels, in fact, either you don't write about it or you don't want to be deceived and restricted by those people. Every day you see the protagonist being prostituted and working for free.

Not bad, it's okay. Maybe I've read too much of Poison Resistance. I feel like the problems mentioned by others are okay. The realistic part is handled well. Those who say that they are official nannies have not finished reading it. In fact, they have only been official twice so far, accounting for less than 3 chapters. They are all passed in one go. As for the realistic part, the plot of the woman eating the protagonist's baby is also a common problem in this type of novel. The protagonist does not know what the thing is and thinks it is. So I shared it as a snack. If I had said it before, I would have thought it was very poisonous. But now that I have read so many novels, I feel that it is okay. At least the protagonist does not understand everything. At least the protagonist still sees something is wrong later on. The novel has not yet written about the protagonist discovering the truth of the game, and there is really very little in the realistic part of this novel. Compared with similar novels, the perception is much better. Overall, it deserves a rating of more than seven points.

Very nice novel that made me spin. As a player of Dark Souls 1, 2, 3 and Circle of Magic, I like it very much. Finally the pleasure of executing the boss behind your back without having to go to jail yourself. I experienced it by reading the novel. Come on, author, I rely on you to quit the soul-based game. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

"Yue Qingwu, Yue Qingwu, you can't do this" - When the cold swordsman was infected with the "fourth natural disaster", he decisively killed This chapter can be called the most exciting collision of "character awakening" and "player mentality invasion" in the fairy tale. The author cleverly used the dual settings of "game controller (Lu Li)" and "controlled NPC/apprentice (Yue Qingwu)" to complete a highly tense psychological portrayal and plot advancement in a closed and depressing scene like a prison. First of all, from the perspective of the plot rhythm, this chapter presents an extremely comfortable "feeling of refreshment". Faced with the vulgar provocation of the demon cultivator in the prison, both Yue Qingwu's instinctive reaction and Lu Li's idle operation abandoned the routine of traditional immortality novels in which the villain talks nonsense while the protagonist holds back and accumulates strength. The Xingyu Sword was unsheathed, and the head flew up, cleanly and neatly in less than a breath. This logic of "swear when you open your mouth, and die when you scold" perfectly fits the current readers' aesthetic expectations for "rejection of mental internal consumption and direct physical transcendence". Secondly, the core focus of the article lies in Yue Qingwu's psychological transformation and self-doubt. As the Nascent Soul Dao Master, she originally had her own moral principles and bottom line of behavior, but subconsciously, she had been deeply imprinted with the behavior of "Senior Li". When she found out that she was not out of righteousness, but simply because she "couldn't stand being scolded" and went on a killing spree, her complex emotions, from coldness to confusion, to her face turning blue and white, were deeply portrayed by the author. "Yue Qingwu, Yue Qingwu, you can't do this." This muttered sentence is not only the soul torture of the character, but also the inspiration of the entire chapter. It breaks the stereotype of NPC and gives Yue Qingwu a real "human touch" and room for growth. In addition, Lu Li's "player mentality" also adds strong interest and contrasting cuteness to the story. Faced with a massacre that might turn into a Shura field, his focus turned out to be "put some food on your stomach when the takeaway arrives" and "hang up for a while and let the character solve it on his own." This sense of relaxation, like a dimensionality reduction blow, not only alleviates the bloody oppression of the prison scene, but also makes Yue Qingwu's "forced assimilation" appear more logical and dramatic. Overall, this chapter uses humorous meta-narrative techniques to deconstruct the traditional opposition between good and evil while showing the cruel laws of the world of immortality. It allows us to see how charming the chemical reaction is when an absolutely rational and decisive "Fourth Natural Disaster" player meets an originally cold and self-sustained disciple of the Sword Immortal. This is not only a one-sided killing, but also a soul reshaping about "what is oneself". Looking forward to how Yue Qingwu will repeatedly jump between "sticking to his true heart" and "assimilating from his predecessors" in the future. This is undoubtedly one of the biggest highlights of this article.

Standard cool article. Cool writing standards: 1. It's fun to guess. Logically predictable means boring when the pace slows down. The writing is fast-paced. It's good to keep things guessing. 2. The moral logic is refreshing. In many articles, the protagonist seems to be a normal person in three aspects, but then he is embraced by others but does not reject it, etc., Which makes this feeling of pleasure very awkward. It must be said that the charm is not enough, but there are too many people around, and the morals are not matched. Over time, it will become distorted and you will not be able to read it. This article is clear. 3. The jokes are reasonable and cool. Meme culture is the fastest way to locate and gather the same people, but online, some memes are vulgar and some are inappropriately applied. At least, I think the plot of this article is quite reasonable. When I smile knowingly, I feel like playing Star Iron or The End. Relaxed and happy.

I quite like it. It's rare that I come across a novel that makes me grin from the corner of my mouth to the back of my ears. The jokes in it are all about classic games and old classics on cultivating immortals, which made my aunt laugh. It's a little troublesome to write about the real world. The combat power levels are not equal. In the world of cultivating immortals, a person who practices Qi is equivalent to a very powerful character here. Later, I will write about how to integrate the Mahayana ascension into immortality with the real world. I understand that there must be this stage. The two sides have to merge, and the biggest boss known now is The game company can give the male protagonist this ability. At present, the male protagonist is a puppet, similar to the one where I upgrade alone. I am given the ability and then do something. The protagonist team must unite to fight. The combat power of the two sides is not equal. I am looking forward to how the author will do in the follow-up. I hope that no female protagonist will come and see that the male protagonist is a useless person.