Tales of Honghuang: The Four Pure Ones and Thirteen Ancestor Shamans Are All Me!

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Hongjun: Author, I give it to you. Can Five Star want me? Stop being a villain, it's so tiring. Being a villain, especially a big villain, is so tiring. I think back then I was the incarnation of the Great Dao, but now I don't even know what I am, so I beg you, author, I give you five stars, don't ask me to be a villain anymore.

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I think it's pretty good. Well, it's quite a special kind of prehistoric novel, but it's probably because of the male author. Some of the adjectives for women could be changed, which would make it more friendly to us female readers.

The writing style is natural and the charm is long-lasting. The narrative has ups and downs, opening and closing in a moderate way; The layout is exquisite and the foreshadowing is long. The writing is vivid, both physical and spiritual; The imitation of scenery is subtle and full of artistic conception. The diction is elegant and harmonious with emotion and reason; The plot has twists and turns and the thread is well organized. Open the book to indulge in intoxication, cover it to reverie, Miao ๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊ ๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊ ๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊ ๊pen้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้ masterpiece, ๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋ ๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋ ๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋ ๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๊ ๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊ ๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊ ๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊๊Flavour้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ ้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้้ infinite! ่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่ ่่่่่่่๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋๋่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่่

It feels pretty good. The numerous minor changes may make this book a bit different, but personally, it is still a very interesting idea. It is more in line with the prehistoric background than some articles that make huge changes inexplicably or can still follow the original trajectory. Another advantage is that there is no inexplicable and detailed description of the psychological activities of the N-side forces. It can be said that it gets rid of a major crux of the Honghuang-ryu novels [Thinking] If the description has not been polished by AI, it will be relatively good. Unfortunately, it feels that the repetition rate is a bit high, and the word count is suspected of being low (x There are some minor flaws in some details, but overall it's not insignificant. In addition, the overall progress is a bit slow, but accordingly, the narrative is more detailed and there are many scene descriptions, each with its own advantages and disadvantages. In short, I hope the author can complete this book (

It would be better if the characters of each of the twelve ancestral witches were more distinct. For example, after having the soul, the ancestor of gold, Wu Pingshou, could be proficient in weapon training, the ancestor of wind, Wu Tianhao, was proficient in formations and advanced to the twelve capitals of the gods, and the ancestor of wood, Goumang, could cultivate spiritual roots. Later, the ancestral shaman of fire Zhurong can contact the Phoenix tribe, the ancestral shaman of water Gonggong liaises with the dragon tribe, the ancestral shaman of earth and the earth creation queen can contact the Qilin tribe, etc. To make the image of each ancestral shaman fuller, otherwise there will always be 12 together with no individual characteristics.

It's good, it's good-looking, the pace is tight, and it's not too draggy. It doesn't pay much attention to describing how others see it. This is a very good point. Most of the prehistoric novels I've read focus too much on others. It's better to describe the scene more to try to figure out other people.

It's okay. There's nothing unreasonable for the time being that doesn't fit my impression of prehistoric times.

The writing is quite good and I read it well, but the volume is small. I can't do it without reading books. I am considered a slow reader. I read more than 30 chapters and finished them in two days.