My Gentle, Older, Virtuous Wife

It is true that Li Wen has the sense of taboo and the essence of it. The aunt is portrayed so well. It seems that Li Wen is pursuing Mu's unconditional preference and tolerance. While taking into account this, aunt also has the enthusiasm and unrestrainedness of a big sister, never being pretentious, and even has the innocence and shyness of a little girl. She is simply the perfect lover. My aunt said she had been to that couple's slope before? I hope it's not Lei, I really just want to watch sweet love! The male protagonist is also quite likable. He is not the kind of bulldozer who falls in love with everyone he meets. He is quite bottom-line, but he is too real and fits the characteristics of a young and ignorant college student. He is always rough. Brother, the author, will there be a career line for the male protagonist in the future? I hope he can become a mature and stable real man, otherwise he is still not worthy of his aunt. Secondly, there are many plots where the male protagonist is jealous, which made me feel a thorn in my heart when I saw it. In any case, thank you to the author for his contribution, this is a good work It's time for the male protagonist to step up [Sending Hearts]

The pleasure of poking someone's finger is worthy of being the moderator's overseas student [Admiration]

It's super, super good-looking. It perfectly fulfills my fantasies about my older girlfriend. There's no overly long ambiguity. The heroes' fates have been tied together since they were young. I love it so much! I believe you can update faster [blowing kiss]

The writing is really good. I don't know if you like reading some Internet articles that have been completed for 7 or 8 years. There is really no need to describe the feeling of sadness. "Shuangwen" was originally a derogatory term, but now it has become a hard-to-find complimentary term in Tomato. It has gone through many changes. If a fluent article is about plot and writing style. An article with charm depends on whether it can be written into people's hearts. Characters are like prisms, and the author shines a beam of light into it, scattering different aspects of a character, but the essence remains the same. The first person is really rare in online novels. Logically speaking, the sense of substitution in the first person should be stronger than that in the third person, but this time I felt some distance. I don't know if the heroine is too beautiful, the plot is too heart-warming, or something else. But I think this is an article worth reading with your heart. Author, I just read this far and you give me such a high evaluation. You can't slap me in the face. Come on.

Five stars for waiting and watching, good luck to the author, the writing is good, and the psychological activities are also written very well. If you want to make the male protagonist more mature, my comment is in the comment on the paragraph in the last chapter of today that you asked about the book to study. My humble opinion. Never write the male protagonist as someone who can only stress Aunt Xuan and who can easily fall into heat. The first part is fine. Although I got into an ugly show of jealousy and even got into a quarrel and got drunk, it was all resolved. Try not to write the following part. The kind of person who got into a big fight out of jealousy and drank unconsciously, like a junior high school student. The male protagonist should act more mature in this situation. You can drink or be sad when you are in a bad mood, but you should exercise some restraint. If you want to be mature, then you also wrote that before, after a quarrel, the heroine admitted her fault and tried to coax her. In turn, did the hero grow up and the heroine feel a little surprised? Or if you really feel that you are right and don't want to admit your mistake, then if you want to drink after leaving home, find a restaurant, order two dishes and a bottle of wine, and send her a message telling her what you were doing there. When you go back later, you can write about the male protagonist's psychological activities and persuade yourself to go back and admit your mistake. When the hostess comes over, we eat together. If she doesn't come, we buy two more meals and take them back to her, and solve the problem while eating. After all, there are many men and women quarreling now, and the woman will say I want to go back to my parents' house, right? Don't play missing for no reason

How awesome, with encouragement, my auntie is the best. By the way, pure love must not engage in the act of coming out of the closet.

(The following is my personal opinion. You are right if you criticize me.) The setting has met all my expectations. The writing is pretty good, and the emotional drama is also well done. A little bit of a knife is more in line with the setting of this book. When it should be sweet, it should be sweet and when it should be sharp, it is very good to write about Su Yule's growth process. The bad taste from time to time is the best part of this book. The finishing touch is that the relationship between Aunt Xuan and Su Yule, which is set off by a little Shura field, is more vivid. The foreshadowing is also recycled relatively smoothly. There is no abrupt emotional development. It makes people look very comfortable. The foreshadowing is very good. The unique setting is refreshing. It is a good book worth reading (if you are paying 4000+) The only flaw is that the scope of the male protagonist's jealousy is too wide. Of course, this just doesn't feel good to me. Maybe it's this setting that makes me feel that this kind of emotion is in line with my xp.

The part about loving people is like growing flowers is invincible. It is really well written. The rating is too low. Why is it only nine points? I think it should be nine point five. The description of my heart is also very delicate. The characters are three-dimensional and deep, and the story is emotional and warm. I was really healed. , But I may not often read single female protagonists. I always want to read Shen Man, An Ran, and Song Qing. I have read 300 chapters and I really think it is good. I usually don't comment. I really can't help it. I can just go in without thinking. Finally, the author will update it quickly! !

The writing is so good, especially the characters' inner struggles and contradictions between human nature and love are intertwined very well. It seems very real and makes people feel deeply involved. Halfway through the book, I don't suddenly feel that the plot description is too novelistic, which makes it a drama. The writing is very good and it is smooth and comfortable to read (I am not trying to be a culprit, I really feel that this book is so good [laughs])

I have read relatively few books with the male protagonist in the first person, and the author has good control over psychological description. The writing is relatively smooth, and the length of the male protagonist on campus is more appropriately controlled. In the previous part, the part where the male protagonist accidentally gets jealous several times feels a little flawed. I can't explain it clearly. I feel that the trust between the male and female protagonists is a bit weak in that part, but the author may have dealt with it this way. A crisis of trust? But the faults do not hide the faults! I also read the novel after reading the book reviews. I read it at 6pm yesterday, and now I have finished it at 12pm. I read it for several hours and it was very enjoyable! ! ! Come on, author! You will become strong! !