Hogwarts MOD Legend

It's pretty good. It didn't completely take away from the plot. It's just that I thought it was nothing about liberating the elves with Hermione, but after watching Darwin [smile], so it's four stars.

I want to know how many people were deceived into it because they read the introduction and thought it was Shuangwen?

It's okay. If possible, please add a single heroine or multiple heroines in the introduction. Otherwise, if you like the novel without a heroine, you will suddenly feel ambiguous when you are enjoying the book. I opened the comment area and saw that there is a heroine. At first, the protagonist said that he was only 11 years old and thought it was a novel without a heroine. He thought it was a novel without a heroine. Then he was so close to Hermione. There will be a feeling of disappointment. I always see this kind of novel.

Make up for regrets? It has always been written from the author's perspective, which gave me the feeling that there are a lot of things missing in the middle, and many operations are inexplicable. Although the author's book reviews, there are a lot of things like inner transformation, but you didn't write them out. The summary is the plot and a lot of feelings 💙💙💙💛💛27.92. 💙/💚/💚💚/💙/💚/💙

The writing is quite good and interesting, but the mod should add more magical things. It should not only be about the world of Harry Potter, but add more interesting things.

The writing is quite good, and we can't be too demanding. After all, the protagonist is only in the first grade. I was thinking about a Pokémon MOD for Animagus (Groudon [laughing]), but unfortunately the author didn't agree and I was worried about it. However, I still hope that the author will lengthen the timeline and the story line (write more and update more, and the updated version is not enough to read [laughs]). The original plot is less involved. To be honest, everyone knows that Voldemort is one every year, but the original plot is unknown to everyone. It looks novel, but other books are supposed to kill Quirrell in one year and basilisk in two years. It doesn't make much sense whether to add a protagonist or not. Voldemort will die whether there is a protagonist or not. Why do I want a protagonist? This is pretty good, the King of Fighters in the first year, a dueling bracelet in the second year (the bracelet refreshes simulated monsters, and attacks with an alchemy wand, safe), three years of sword MOD real-life games, four years of Pokémon solo online games, five years of Warcraft large-scale alchemy online games, six years of StarCraft, seven years of forming a team to kill Voldemort, graduation and starting magic alchemy technology, 20 years later, at the age of 38, time travel to Marvel and start learning magic at Karma Taj, and time travel after becoming a god The collapsing iron and alchemy star train broke through the dimensional wall to build a channel, and invited Angel Nebula (there are many people who are beautiful, obedient, easy to use, and have a long lifespan. Everyone has their own computer). Beloberg formed a company to develop tourism. Returning to Hogwarts, Marvel invited a group of friends to travel, Pokémon contest, invited fairy rituals, fairy boat martial arts, organized a group to play World of Warcraft, devoured and perfected the system of laws, opened up a world in the cosmic sea, and became the top human interdimensional force. What's my process like?

Overall, it's very good, but sometimes the drama is a bit too much, and the child pretending to be a miserable child is a bit deliberate...

I hope the author can write better and better, but some settings feel weird. There is nothing wrong with the MOD triggering, but there is a problem with the currency used by the MOD and the acquisition of credits. Shopping mall MOD, forging MOD, exploration MOD, fashion MOD and feeling credits are incompatible. You can't just graduate and re-attend Hogwarts just for credits. Currency should be used. Even if you really need system currency, you can create a special MOD, such as the Scholar MOD, which rewards credits as long as you learn something, or earns new knowledge and researches new knowledge.

The creativity is not bad, but the translation accent + Conan-style disguise is uncomfortable. Come on.

This book perfectly integrates the magical world and MOD settings, and reconstructs the new legend of Hogwarts from a unique system flow perspective. There are no rigid cheats. Skills are unlocked and the plot is advanced layer by layer. It has the feelings of the original and the original feeling. The protagonist grows up step by step with the help of MOD, becoming passionate and healing. It is not only a love letter to Ham fans, but also an epic dedicated to game lovers. It is full of immersion in reading.

This book is truly impressive. Judging from the content, it seems to have carefully constructed a fascinating story world or provided unique and in-depth insights, which is one of the important signs of excellent works. The author's language style may be both smooth and expressive, allowing readers to easily immerse themselves in the situations depicted in the book. In addition, the characterization of the characters and the development of the plot are well arranged in the book, which increases the pleasure of reading and the space for thinking. In terms of layout design, the layout is clear and the fonts are moderate, which is conducive to reading for a long time without feeling tired. The cover design is also quite distinctive, if it can attract attention and complement the content of the book itself, it is

After seeing 150,000 words, it's quite interesting [smile] [smile] [smile] I'll give it a four. But I do think we can add some other magic tricks, such as elements, or magic circles, etc. Of course, it might be more interesting to create something yourself [Chigua]

Relaxed, the protagonist is childish, but not brainless, and is eloquent. It's worth a read, it's one of the best among HP fanfiction.

Well, from what I've read so far, I'm still looking for Laifu, which is the power of summoning Laifu. Well, I have a few questions now, that is 1: I think why is it called Levi and not Levi? 2: The protagonist rejected Professor McGonagall's invitation to become a family member. To put it simply, he refused to be adopted as an adopted son. Did he not want to eat soft rice? [Laughing evilly] 3: I haven't thought about this yet. I'll ask again later.

The plot is pretty good and makes people watch it, but I have a small question. The currency is credits. How can I get them after graduation? In other words, the protagonist's growth period is only 7 years? After all, gold coins can't buy good things. Although the content of the story is probably not told until 7 years later, I just can't complain (๑--๑)

Writing a very Gryffindor character and then sorting him into Ravenclaw - is this some weird bad joke? Or is it a rebellious mentality? Forget it, come on

First of all, there is the matter of Pokémon. The Pokémon here are almost the same as ordinary pets. I don't know why I have to label them as Pokémon. Then there's Hermione. The main character just needs to be electrocuted. And I read other reviews that said the system was also explained to her, which is very toxic, I think. There is also the strength of the protagonist. He has already started to rub the magic tower in the first grade. If he is in the seventh grade, who will be the next God of Magic? ? Let's look at the rest later, give a mark first

Harry Potter is relatively unpopular. Unless the author's writing can be compared with Badger Academy, otherwise it is usually within 300 chapters and can only get a score of 7.0 At most.

There is a golden finger, the subject matter is novel, and it is quite interesting.

You can read this book whether you have read Harpo or not. It is so immersive that you can read it without paying attention.

Happy New Year, I send you a five-star review. By the way, the plot of this novel is the most interesting plot in all the HP fanfics I have read. Please do a good job, author.

Make more money, buy land, build a castle, farm

It looks like there will be an original plot in the future. I like this second version of Harry Potter with one or two hundred chapters per school year. I look forward to resolving the conflict between ordinary people and wizards.

It's okay after reading Chapter 77, keep it up, come on.

I really like the "Holy Glory" spell in it [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Okay, okay, I just want to ask if there are more female leads [eating melons]

Not bad, not bad. At present, in my mind, it can be ranked among the top three in the Harry fan series. Come on

A rare good book, I read it in one sitting, the pace is just right.

Red and hot, in a trance, hahahaha

First of all, the heroine should be Hermione. The woman the protagonist sees in the Mirror of Erised is the protagonist. The protagonist has to be on guard at every turn, which is a bit frustrating.