
After I Wooed Angel Yan, She Took It Seriously
攻略天使彦后她竟当真了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 338k Words
- Genre
- Two Female Leads
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
97Chapters
112Reads
5Listens
5.3kReads · all time
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Reader comments 2
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What I quickly browsed was not a story with two heroines and no emotions. Only Rose appeared in the Xiongbing Company. The system had no sense of existence after Yan was shut down in the front. The first half was about Yan training the protagonist. The second half did not understand Yan's existence at all. I don't know why a person went somewhere. I couldn't understand the whole article. There were too many trainings and the words were too dense. I completely skipped [what][what][what]
The theme is too forceful and may lead to loss of ground, the execution is not decisive enough, and the long-windedness is a bit harsh and green. The author's efforts are definitely worthy of respect. Personally, I feel that it doesn't sound good. Maybe I'm too talkative. I definitely acknowledge the author's efforts. It's not easy to write. If you don't want to listen, I apologize. It's my fault. But I want to say that as we work together in the future and learn from each other, I seem to be looking in the mirror and work hard for improvement!