My name is Yan Ying. After my parents passed away, I was taken in by one of my father’s colleagues.
I have a System!
Wait, where the heck have I ended up?
The man in front of me is clearly just my godfather, so how did he become my adoptive father?
Since when did the Los Santos Police Department turn into the Six Fan Gate?
What? My adoptive father is Xie Xun?
Day One: No matter how good your kung fu is, bullets still hurt. Keep a low profile, stay calm, and don’t take risks!
Day Two: The world’s martial arts are invincible; speed alone cannot be beaten. Who’s next!
Day Three: I’m going to be an elder of the Miaoyin Sect. Who’s for it, and who’s against it!
Day Four: I’m claiming Chuanbao. Not even Jesus can stop me!
Day Five: Sword, come!
【I Alone Have the Power】【Invincible】【Mismatched System】【Urban Novel】
Well enough. There are too many descriptions of the characters' appearance. When viewed on mobile phones, most of them describe appearance. Moreover, there are too many descriptions of women's appearance, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to eat.
Overall it's a good book.
See Chapter 39. When will the protagonist have the strength to seek justice? Always discovering problems shows how difficult they are to solve. If you don't solve the problem, it will be very uncomfortable.
All in all, there is hope. When people and laws are useless against animals, the protagonist has the ability to solve the problem on his own.
For example, using martial arts, combining martial arts with firearms, poisoning, etc.
I hope my comments are useful to the author.
Third review: So-so. The center is unclear and there is no main line. Basically it is written around system tasks. There has been a trend of triggering other system tasks during system tasks, layer by layer.
The plot is conventional and the progress is a little slow, but sometimes the description of the new female character seems to be playing with butter. Important female characters will be shown in close-ups first.
If you want to have a harem in the future, sell Qi massage and life extension classes, refine medicine, buy land, open a sect, and build a private city.
It's very good to watch. Although it has martial arts as a hook, it doesn't seem to be too dramatic. The author obviously has a certain American reading experience. Anyway, the content makes me feel that it is very American, and it is not a direct application of the routine to the United States.
It's a very good novel. Although the protagonist's behavior pattern is not in line with the national conditions of the United States, and the combat power is insufficient, the excitement is not enough, but the plot design is reasonable and the rhythm is tight. It is written with heart, not an AI product. The real drawback is that one chapter a day is too little. At this speed, as an online article, it is easy to lose popularity and become less popular.
It's okay. In fact, the content of AI describing female characters can be less and focus on the plot. Come on author.
I only gave it 4 points. I guess it was polished by AI. There are too many complicated descriptions.
A good book, the plot is fluently written, and the protagonist has his own persistence in his views. I just hope that this boy's skill will be completed soon.
No matter how beautiful the female character is, can we not draw hundreds of words to describe it every time? I suspect this is AI
The writing is very correct, which is rare in Tomato, Grain and Grass
Tomato is pretty good. The moral standards are quite high. The plot is not too exciting. It would be better to make waves every once in a while. Updates are a bit slow.
Well enough. There are too many descriptions of the characters' appearance. When viewed on mobile phones, most of them describe appearance. Moreover, there are too many descriptions of women's appearance, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to eat. Overall it's a good book. See Chapter 39. When will the protagonist have the strength to seek justice? Always discovering problems shows how difficult they are to solve. If you don't solve the problem, it will be very uncomfortable. All in all, there is hope. When people and laws are useless against animals, the protagonist has the ability to solve the problem on his own. For example, using martial arts, combining martial arts with firearms, poisoning, etc. I hope my comments are useful to the author. Third review: So-so. The center is unclear and there is no main line. Basically it is written around system tasks. There has been a trend of triggering other system tasks during system tasks, layer by layer.
The plot is conventional and the progress is a little slow, but sometimes the description of the new female character seems to be playing with butter. Important female characters will be shown in close-ups first. If you want to have a harem in the future, sell Qi massage and life extension classes, refine medicine, buy land, open a sect, and build a private city.
It's very good to watch. Although it has martial arts as a hook, it doesn't seem to be too dramatic. The author obviously has a certain American reading experience. Anyway, the content makes me feel that it is very American, and it is not a direct application of the routine to the United States.
It's a very good novel. Although the protagonist's behavior pattern is not in line with the national conditions of the United States, and the combat power is insufficient, the excitement is not enough, but the plot design is reasonable and the rhythm is tight. It is written with heart, not an AI product. The real drawback is that one chapter a day is too little. At this speed, as an online article, it is easy to lose popularity and become less popular.
It's okay. In fact, the content of AI describing female characters can be less and focus on the plot. Come on author.
I only gave it 4 points. I guess it was polished by AI. There are too many complicated descriptions.
A good book, the plot is fluently written, and the protagonist has his own persistence in his views. I just hope that this boy's skill will be completed soon.
No matter how beautiful the female character is, can we not draw hundreds of words to describe it every time? I suspect this is AI
The writing is very correct, which is rare in Tomato, Grain and Grass
Tomato is pretty good. The moral standards are quite high. The plot is not too exciting. It would be better to make waves every once in a while. Updates are a bit slow.