Anime Crossover: It All Began When I Became Eri’s Brother

It must be strongly supported. For now, I feel that there is no need to add other anime. If the characters have more emotional lines, they may not be able to grasp the emotional lines, and the roles will become difficult to distinguish. There are already many female band characters, so focusing on writing the current ten or so characters is amazing.

It's very interesting. The slow-paced daily life is written fluently without much lag, and the conversations with most of the girls in the article don't seem to deviate from the original work. However, Kasumigaoka Shiu's character image feels a bit too mature. She can show maturity at the age of ten, but it should not be maturity itself. When writing about her, you can also write a little scene about her as a little girl. It is right to go too far, and children who are too young will always act too mature and stand out. For example, there will be a series of works that are not in line with the current identity such as Kasumigaoka Shiyu's Reading of One Hundred Years of Solitude. But overall, this novel fits my reading interests well. In addition, I read some comments that the male protagonist is a bit of a dog-licker. But actually I don't quite agree with this. After all, the male protagonist only made contact under normal behavior and environmental logic. In a series of behaviors such as verbal behavior and so on, he did not show any licking. In the article, the relationships between the male protagonist, the female protagonist, and other female protagonists are all gradual, and there are no abrupt or embarrassing scenes. Normal social interaction with girls cannot be said to be a nuisance. After all, one cannot completely stop socializing with the opposite sex before the opposite sex can come to interact with you and like you. Unless you have a very special talent or a handsome face. In the article, the contact with the female protagonists such as Kasumigaoka Shiha, Toyokawa Shoko, Wakaba Mu, etc. Also seems to be quite normal. But it might be better if Toyokawa Shoko's character could be changed. After all, Toyokawa Shoko is only 10 years old now.

It's a very nice new book. When you first read it, you may feel that the protagonist is a little cold or dull, but later on you can feel the gentleness and delicacy of the protagonist. The author has written very well about the protagonist's relationship with different characters and the control of some details. It is very comfortable to read and makes you feel warm and sweet. Come on.

I caught up on the latest gen in one day. Let me tell you my opinion. I have almost never read anime or light novels (I only read good character clips and read them for a few minutes), so it was quite painful to read this novel. I had to search for each character to see what they looked like, their personalities and their stories. But it did not stop me from reading this book. It was well written. I only know that this book had the motivation to read the gen from the beginning of Chapter 1. , The male protagonist is a very nice and gentle person, and the female protagonists have different personalities and are quite interesting. I haven't seen them (anime, light novels) and don't really understand them. Anyway, they are quite interesting to me. By the way, I have read a lot of Yinglili in this one (so I am more familiar with her, the blond tsundere [facepalm]). Lily in this is really cute, not arrogant at all, just coquettish, and the author's recent update is so fierce that it starts with six chapters [Like] [Like] [Like] To sum up, I watched it too much. For me, personally, I haven't found any poisonous points or bad points. I hope it will be a happy ending later and I won't have any regrets! ! At the end of the extra chapter, every female protagonist gave birth to a beautiful baby for the male protagonist [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Finally, I wish the author a happy day, all the best, and good health. The same goes for the bosses. Thank you for your gifts that make the author even more cute [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

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I've just read Chapter 24. It feels bland but I like reading it. It's just that there are people around 10 years old in it, and they all look very precocious. It would be nice if they could change their age a few years older, otherwise it always feels awkward when I read it. I saw Chapter 49. The person in it is Yinglili rather than another vivid girl, but his name is Yinglili. Alas, I have read Chapter 63. It is quite interesting and relaxing, but every time I think about it being in elementary school, I feel a sense of irritability and violation.

The writing and description are so detailed. I felt a strange feeling when I kept reading it (a very irritable feeling). Although it is not my cup of tea, it is still good overall. Maybe it's because I am very irritable! The protagonist is too young and the author's writing is very delicate. As a result, when the protagonist's talent is expressed, other people's reactions are too bland or take it for granted (ah~ not bad, this turns out to be a genius), but the protagonist is only in fifth grade! Based on those performances of the protagonist Prodigy! ? That's basically a monster (referring to talent). Anyway, just looking at it makes me feel weird. Maybe it's because I'm an ordinary person and don't understand or have never been exposed to those geniuses. Anyway, in the book, whether the music teacher or the literature professor, the protagonist or other elementary school students' amazing performances are all like that~ It's okay, not bad.

It's great. The author's control over emotions is very delicate, and the rhythm is very comfortable. It's very comfortable to read. This is the feeling of comprehensive comics, redeeming and changing some of the imperfections in the original works. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

Very good, the author is very good. Now high school has officially begun. But there are too many characters, Bang Bang, Qingyin, Passerby and Shikamaru... There are so many female characters, and in the end, if you want to deal with them well, you basically have to go if. It is unlikely to accept them all, unless there is no concern at all about shaping the character in the previous article, and it is unlikely to accept only a few, which is missing girls. Finally, if the author hopes to finish it. Then a single if would be the most appropriate ending/it would also be nice to remain single. They are all very good. If the plot is not changed much in the future, the multi-female harem will ruin the book. [Blowing kiss]

Comprehensive comic strip, well written I personally like daily stories written since childhood. I can see the growth of the characters, and I can understand the changes and transformations of the characters, whether male or female. When the writing is good, the characters are full and vivid. This is what I think is the advantage of this book. Secondly, the key points were found very well. The career line, whether it was writing or music, was very clear, and there was no problem with the distribution. Although there are relatively few innovations, the rhythm is very comfortable and there is nothing wrong with it. Although the system is the driving force of the plot, it is still handled well. You can see the personality and thoughts of the protagonist, make fewer mistakes and less poisonous points, and keep up the good work. What I like the most is the mature behavior of this kind of male protagonist and the calmness and gentleness at the core. I think this kind of coolness is something that the formulaic Asasi male protagonist and the slow male protagonist do not have (I hope more people write about this kind of thing, it is quite hard to find) But there are still some minor problems. Some plot designs are a bit sloppy. If you think about it deeply, you will find it a bit problematic. There is also the feeling that the general world view of manga authors is a bit distorted, and there is no sense of localized atmosphere that Japanese high-quality products give me (actually, this is not bad, after all, if the writing is good, there is no need to write a manga, just create an original one). You can check more information and so on, and more appropriate terms will not be too dramatic. Finally, there is not much pure daily life in the content (this is not important because I like to watch daily life, haha). Most of them are specific exchanges or plots with clear purposes. I think if the writing is good, you can try it. More of this kind of daily life will be more realistic. To sum up, I should actually give it a five-star rating. I think there are very few variety comics that have a comfortable pace and a good plot that is not toxic, but after all, there is no emotional drama. I hope to see the protagonist's maturity in love and the psychological change of accepting the concept of harem written in a natural way. I have read too many books with good settings but ruined by emotional drama and love (there is a book next door that I am very disappointed with. I hope you can write it well) I wish the author will get better and better as he writes better, his grades will improve step by step, and he will finish the work smoothly (please update more, I am short of books [blowing kiss])