After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Became the Villain’s Wyvern

The writing is very good, but my brother's eyes are dark, dark, dark, dark, dark, dark, dark, dark, dark. Why don't you brighten the eyes? The Yalong is always bright and the Black Dragon is always dark. I think you two deserve to be a couple, hahaha

The setting is still very annoying to me, but after reading the whole story, I know that I want to give Gong Li a gentle persona, but the word gentle appears most often, as well as a gentle smile, and some interactions are also gentle touches. I can use other words to describe it. It was okay at first, but after reading more, it will feel like a deliberate description. But overall it's still ok. [Sending Hearts]

I think it's super pretty! I couldn't comment when I used my watch at school, but now I can use my phone to grade when I get home! Later, when I saw the explanation of the world consciousness of Zhao Zhao's "meeting" and "conversation" between the two worlds (although they could not see each other), Zhao Zhao and Wen Shuming burst into tears 💧 6 [almost crying] a little sad but so warm and happy! The "dead man" from high school has come back to life. I like it, I like it, I like it, it's a god (anyway, I like to read this kind of setting, and I feel there are not many of them on Tomato). Come on, the book will definitely get better and better. I hope it can be read by more people!

The whole book so far is really sweet, but one thing is that I feel that Xu Zhao is becoming more and more coquettish and silly in the future (?) In the beginning, Shou was a sand sculpture with his own thoughts, but in the later stage, he was a bit silly and Baitian turned away from the spoiled wife character.

It's still a nice little couple and their interaction is very heartwarming, but I personally feel that the writing is a bit intellectually degenerate (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) If you ignore the plot that lowers your wits, it's actually a bit of a knife at the end. Fourth edition, fine😶fine

From the little dragon egg to the little silver dragon, he raised his lover with his own hands. Why are dragons so romantic (except for the golden one). Every step of the love between Wen Shuming and Shen Xuzhao was unexpected and reasonable. It was so sweet that I rolled on the bed. What the original protagonist suffered was really bad, but no one can blame it. You have to bear the consequences of the path you chose. The original protagonist was pure evil, proud and incompetent, and felt that the world should revolve around him. A dog-like man is a perfect match, so he should be locked up and stop harming others. The big black dragon really loves his own little Yalong. The original Xiao Yalong and the college student Xu Zhao's treatment are also very reasonable. I feel warm when I see the corpse. I hope that Shen Xuzhao in that world can also be happy. The article's three views are correct, but the original article is all evil. In the middle of the article, I saw that it was just a small gift for the winter vacation. It only had more than 300,000 words, but it might exceed the limit. The sky fell when I said, why is it progressing so fast? Please write a longer version! ! The author's words are like a gurgling stream, flowing warmly, without edge, but with penetrating power. After reading, it feels like a refreshing breeze, with a long aftertaste. This is not the boldness of the pen, but the meticulous embroidery work. Every stitch is filled with compassion, weaving the softest poetry. I can't imagine what a gentle girl she will be. (Other characters are also very good, each with their own merits) When I saw the front part, I felt it was sweet, and when I saw the back part, I thought it was suitable for being made into a movie. The large-scale description of scenery and details does not take up too much of the film's time but makes the film more refined. The overall plot is not so attractive but makes people warm and comfortable. Every step of the character has the meaning and reason for his/her/its existence. Everything is reasonable and not obtrusive. Every picture imagined in the mind is amazing. ——Following Comment It's over, I'm so reluctant to let it go, and there's so much I want to say [I'm about to cry] "Mr. Xu Zhao and Mr. Wen must be happy. I wish you happiness forever. When Xu Zhao is wronged, he goes to Da Hei Long and asks her husband to fight him back. Mr. Wen, don't always keep a straight face and act coquettishly with Xu Zhao. He likes this the most. Although Da Hei Long is extremely powerful, don't forget that you are Xu Zhao's safest harbor. You One of them is the ideal in the world, the other is the moonlight in the heart, and they must live their lives in a way that everyone can envy. If Xu Zhao loses his temper, please coax Mr. Wen more and don't talk to him. He knows better than anyone else. If you dare to make him red-eyed, be careful of the dragon's tail throwing you against the wall. I'm kidding, I know you can't bear it. The two of you have been through the fire and the rest of your life will only be sweet. Remember, you can't miss a good morning kiss every day, keep your bedtime stories gentle, and talk about misunderstandings in person. If you are not happy, I am the first to say no. I really can't bear to turn to the last page and say goodbye to you. Therefore, your world in the book must always be sweeter than sugar and longer than fairy tales. Just continue this sweetness for me." - To Shen Xuzhao and Wen Shuming. I don't know who can see it. The author can't see it, Xu Zhao can't see it, and the readers can't see it. Who can understand me? There are really very few books that I can read through.

The plot is not bad, the writing is not bad, I personally don't like men, it's acceptable, it's worth reading, it's a very good book It's a bit sweet for the sake of sweetness, it's too deliberate, and there's also a common problem with this kind of writing, the original male protagonist is forcibly reduced to intelligence, which looks very awkward.

I can't help it. The corners of my mouth kept looking up. The author is so good at writing and describing the little dragons that are so cute. Hahahahahaha. I'm going to faint from the cuteness. Oh my god, I was protected from lightning. The protagonist originally had relatives and friends, but his body was penetrated by others. His mother became someone else's mother. His friend became someone else's friend...? What was going on when it was originally well written and caused such a huge scandal...

The writing is so beautiful and sweet. I thought it was over at first, but it turned out to be just a little bit, which is not enough. The baby dragon is so cute, and the character is so cute. I hope you won't enter the entertainment industry in the future. Please, don't enter the entertainment industry (๑• . •๑)

Oh wow, it looks good, the characters and plot are all online, I can already imagine how sweet the two of them will be. A lot more fuel, hahahaha!