A Moment of Peace

Personally, I think the writing is okay, but the emotional consequences in many places are a little overdone. The protagonist's character and behavior are a bit awkward, and his words and deeds are not consistent with his thoughts. There are two main aspects. The first protagonist's personality changes after experiencing the change of seizing the door. Logically speaking, According to the plot of the book, the protagonist should avoid participating in anything. Even if he is forced to participate, he should be lazy and slippery instead of conscientious and conscientious. The story in chapters 20 and 30 makes him almost die several times. He is an honest "dandy" and "carefree". The author writes a Real brothers and sisters respect each other, and the harmonious scene of heaven and family is written with the protagonist's fear and resentment, which creates a very contradictory feeling... On the other hand is marriage, which is similar to the previous one. Words and deeds are inconsistent. It is written that they are respectful on the surface but resist in reality, but the writing is not right. , From the story and language point of view, this feeling is particularly wrong. The writing is more like half-resistance and half-willingness on the surface, but in fact it is respectful and respectful... In fact, there is no problem with the general direction. The problem is that the control strength is not appropriate... Come on, author!

The writing is very good. The misunderstandings in the early stage are indeed unbearable, but they are solved later. The emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists may be less, but the progress is very good. As for those who say that the female channel is nonsense, cheers for the author. I hope the author can add some emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists. Come on!

What about acting in a TV series, a female-driven drama?

It must be rated as 5 stars. No one will say a word when I look at it. I'm in trouble. You should also taste it.

The protagonist likes to be cuckold, pretend to be pitiful, man-machine

Sometimes the content of one chapter can be written in two chapters. The water is real water. Don't let me get into trouble by myself. You should try it too. (Don't worry about how long I spent reading this book, I usually listen to books rather than read)

I've read twenty or thirty chapters, and I must give it a thumbs up to my brothers, Akaishi.

Anchor, anchor, please update 😢😢😢😢

Sometimes they are brothers and deceitful, and sometimes they are harmonious and close to each other. Not reliable at all.

The logic is unclear, the plot is complicated, and many plots conflict with the previous ones. There is no thought at all. There is nothing interesting to watch [awkward laugh]