Li Pin's First Book

As a novice author, this Douluo fanfic is very complete. The adaptation that breaks away from the setting of the original work is very successful. Not only does it not feel inconsistent, it actually makes the plot more innovative and more interesting than conventional writing. In particular, the emotional lines are delicately drawn, the characters interact naturally, and the emotional foreshadowing is well done. Although some setting details are different from the original work and appear a little immature, they do not affect the overall reading rhythm and the creative intention can be seen. Looking forward to polishing it further and continuing to update. To put it simply, first of all, the word count is very good. Point 2 is particularly complete in terms of plot. The third word. At least I feel it. It has a lot in it, and the settings are in line with my ideas.

Except for not having half a cent relationship with Douluo, everything is fine.

I think it's well written, and for someone like me who hates slow development, it's very suitable for me to read. Come on, author

The plot is delicate, non-toxic, and the pace is fast