The Smiling, Proud Wanderer: Reborn as Yue Buqun, the Deliveryman

Nanny Wen, any of his disciples can touch his nose or eyes. "There were several times when Yue Buqun "accidentally" "forgot" the sword theory book he wrote in a prominent place, and Linghu Chong "accidentally" read a few pages. The kid scratched his head and scratched his head, and came over and asked: "Master, what does this book mean by saying 'no move to win, only one move'?" Yue Lingshan in the original novel didn't even dare to practice the Zixia magical skill that she stole, but now she even dared to peek at it, and even asked him in person after reading it.

It was well written before, but suddenly he went to Fuzhou inexplicably and without any logic, and followed the plot. The person died, and the blame for warding off evil spirits was placed on him. Lin Pingzhi came to Huashan, and got close to Yue Lingshan. Will he still misunderstand that the Dugu Nine Swords are for warding off evil spirits, and start the master-disciple betrayal to kill Yue Lingshan? Then it's better to just read the original work. I talked about changing my destiny before, but now I'm doing these things for no reason, and I'm going to let my daughter be tortured and die? Simply sick

I quite like it, although there are definitely some problems in the plot, but because I like Ning Zhongze, I think this one gives Ning Zhongze a good ending, and his relationship with the protagonist is pretty good, so that's enough, hahaha. I hope that I can write more about Ning Zhongze in the future. Good luck, author👏

It's okay, but it's almost meaningless. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is less written. Zuo Lengchan can find so many masters, and he can still find someone with similar skills to him. He has to keep an eye on the other sects, and even wants to kill them all. The way I look at it now, then he is still the leader of the chicken-feather alliance, and he has a few uses. Go for a sneak attack, find someone with similar combat power, and kill two disciples with yourself. Why are you looking for so many people to kill? Why are you making trouble? Kill them all. As the leader of the Jifei Alliance, I actually want to give two stars, but what Liu Bei wrote before is okay. Others are average. Of course you are stubborn and you are right. Do you understand?

The emotional aspect is very well written, especially the emotional life of the male protagonist and his wife. The ending is really touching. Many authors of male novels nowadays are not good at writing emotional scenes. It is rare to see it here. Full marks.

It shouldn't be called forbearance, maybe it's the calmness of a strong man? ! After watching it for a while, I didn't see anything interesting! After the magic was accomplished, one of his apprentices was crippled, and none of the people in Songshan died [laughing awkwardly] It was all about the wife and children being on the hot bed, and then the rest followed the original plot! In terms of development, I only see it happening in Huayin County [cover face][cover face]

The book is okay. But the protagonist's brain is not very good. Isn't Lin Pingzhi's matter very simple? As the senior brother of Huashan, Linghu Chong was directly accepted as his disciple. Doesn't this solve it directly? Or why don't you let your daughter leave Huashan in the first place and make arrangements to go there?

Martial arts novels, the past life is always on the lips, what happened in the past life, there is also a spa, and it is also a hot search

I heard that two stars is the best

This version of Yue Buqun is a real man! The wife and children are on the hot bed together + making money and getting rich. The hypocrite turns into a real hero, and he is so happy that he stomps his feet!