The King's Avatar: Winds Rise in Happy

Yes, it's good to read. It's rare to find a full-time writer who can stay up late to read it. The author's writing is good, but there are a few problems that can be improved. One is that the writing style is a bit more flexible, and the reuse rate of text and sentences is too high. It looks a bit weird. Although it's not serious, it has a little feeling. The second point is the personal relationship between the protagonist and other contestants. The chat and interaction between people is very dead, and it can be written more richly. The third point is that the emotional description of the protagonist is too sparse, and the emotional expression can be more. The protagonist gives me the illusion of a dead fish with a paralyzed face (I know the protagonist is a normal person who laughs, but there is an illusion). The other authors wrote it perfectly (except for Mo Fan, who was very sad when he died. I liked Mo Fan the most in the original work)

The early stage of the plot is quite good, with flesh and blood and clear growth. The struggle of the characters is well written, but when the protagonist joins the team later, it makes the viewers feel like they are stuck in a loop. Although the content is still somewhat different, the routines, or templates, are similar in form. Discover team problems, improve, reflect, and finally comment or look forward. I give it four stars. The writing at the beginning is really good and will not make people abandon the book at the beginning.

Although you are not consistent with the original work in many settings, such as the account card issue, I can at least watch the plot. The description of the plot characters is not bad. After all, you are just a fan, or a fan on Tomato, so I will ignore your shortcomings. Try your best.

For a full-time fan, the writing is generally pretty good. In my image, isn't Lin Jingyan's profession a gangster?

Please give your comments and suggestions for the new book🙏🏻

Lao Ye's dragon raising his head and hitting the children is gone, One Inch Gray's challenge to two ghosts to knock on the door is no longer taught, the famous scene of Lao Ye falling off his horse is gone, and many famous scenes are gone.

The source of the review is an excellent work, and the writing is also good.

This is the most exciting of the many fanfics I have read

It looks fine for the time being. I'll keep it for now.

Finally found another very good fanfic