I Am a Nascent Soul Expert

It's quite good-looking. In my mind, it's all about cultivating immortality. It's all about profit and not the Virgin. It's the kind where you just give resources to women when you see them. The kind of tsundere with a background that makes you feel interesting when you see the protagonist. Finally, it's a normal story, but it's a bit sparse. The characters and plots are very delicate.

The current temperature of the water is suitable, non-toxic, and the sugar content is not high [laughing] You can rest assured that you won't be poisoned, you won't get diabetes, and you won't watch Red Temperature [laughing] The combat power is reasonable, the decent villains are not brainless, and the old monster's IQ is online [laughing]

It's very interesting. He's more ruthless than Han Li but not as bad as Fang Yuan. Gold Finger is very weak and is of no use in improving his cultivation, but sometimes it can play a key role. The novel itself omits the need to start directly from the semi-tape stage because Gold Finger is weak and unhappy in the early stages so that it won't be boring.

The writing is very good. Although the protagonist Goldfinger is weak, he has a good brain. It is worth reading.

It's pretty good. At least I didn't poop my crotch in Tomato, and my combat power was not messed up. At least there was no cross-realm killing, and there was no female protagonist. However, many people in the comment area are people who have spent thousands of hours in Tomato. As soon as the author writes about women, some people in the comment area feel like they are suffering from PTSD. They immediately start to suffer from morning sickness, wondering whether this woman will continue to appear in the article later.

The writing is very good, the realm, and the plot are all reasonable. It would be great if the author could persist a little longer. Many authors take a long time to write before they become popular. Insect Killer only made a few dollars after writing 800,000 words. After finishing the first book, he didn't make much. In fact, the author is writing like this Once the traffic of a book is not good, it will be more difficult to publish a new book because readers like books with a certain number of words. Even if the new book is better, readers are too lazy to wait. This is a book that I have been chasing for a long time. It is a pity that it ended like this. Finally, I hope the author's new book will have good results.

It's so good. I'll love to watch more. The old devil is very cautious and decisive, and the reversal on the front line is something I didn't expect. ૮ ˙Ⱉ˙ ა

I suggest you start slowing down the pace. After all, Yuanying can write very long stories, and the audience is willing to read them. Also, the people and events that Qingyouzi Yuanying met in the past can be drawn out through encounters with old friends and foreshadowing, which can improve a lot of things. Otherwise, although we are in a fast-paced era now, the best way is to attract readers at the beginning of the novel and slow down the flow later.

To be honest, this book is really good according to what I read in Tomato, and the data looks okay. It's a pity that the author can't stick to it, otherwise he would have scored more than 8.5 Points no matter what.

The number of Nascent Soul monks feels a bit too much. We can add more low-level monks to set it off. You can write some dungeons where the old demon hides his realm and then reveals his strength at critical moments. This kind of thing looks very cool. Overall, the novel has a bit of a mortal look to it, I like it very much