Slam Dunk: the Black Basket Template at the Beginning, Swaying Sichuan Maple in Reverse

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This novel... Is what I have always wanted to read, a novel in which the skills and templates of Kuroko Basketball are used in Slam Dunk or NBA!

The writing is good, but skills control the protagonist and the protagonist controls skills are two different concepts. What I first want to see is that the protagonist works step by step through the system to use the abilities of the Age of Miracles for personal use, instead of being controlled by skills and having to switch templates back and forth.

What do you say? If it was an old author, it would definitely be one to two stars, a negative review. But if you are new, just encourage it. The disadvantages are many. I won't list them one by one. But it's better to say it once or twice. A question of coolness. It's okay if the protagonist is lazy or something. But what is important is that the team does its best. Instead of winning, he fell into a huge headwind, and the protagonist took action. This is enough to change the situation in an instant. Just like the scene in Lingnan. , Seems to have used some skills, seems to have scored a few goals. But the sense of existence is really thin. I feel that the presence of immortality in that period is higher than his. In short, it means dealing with the problem. The physical strength of the protagonist in the early stage is definitely a weakness. So it can be roughly described like this. The team was caught in a headwind. The protagonist comes to the rescue. But don't let the protagonist find his own reasons. He is a salty fish, and his mentality is that of a salty fish. , When the system's punishment has not been used once, and the pain has not been tasted. Don't change this setting. It's up to the coach or teammates to open the door for him to play. Then the protagonist lives up to expectations and turns the situation around in a flash. Can be set within 5 minutes or 10 minutes. After being behind by more than 30 points, we caught up with all our skills and firepower. Then you can describe a physical crisis or something. It can be done as messy as it is, anyway, it is the climax of a period, and it must feel like flying. Not like what you wrote. I want to feel good, but I just can't feel good.

Well written and very detailed. Not that kind of hydrological detail. But the disadvantage is also this, a game is very long, and there is definitely no substitute for chasing books. You can only watch one game after finishing it. Then it depends on the author's update efficiency. He really started to mess with other people's games. The protagonist disappears for more than ten chapters.

Why is the score so low? It's very good-looking, and there's no bullshit heroine or anything like that. It's a good book. One more thing, never have a female protagonist. A person who can't wake up every day, whose physical strength is not up to standard, and who still practices hard. If he only spends 5 seconds talking to the heroine, I will collapse.

Come on, it's supposed to be fun like this, and it's not too over the top to ruin the characters. It's more friendly to fans of the original work. It's cool. It's the first time I feel like this kind of cheating is real. Other types of it are just belittling the original characters, and then it's over the top, and I don't understand it. It's fake and fake.

The more than 240 pictures so far are generally good, and it is a breath of fresh air in Tomato Basketball articles, but there are still problems. In theory, the latest chapter should be said to be in a semi-crushing state from the first leveling game to the present, but the feeling is still not much different from the first chapter. There are obviously many descriptions of training, including Rukawa Kaede's hard training. In Nian and Sakuragi's Awakening, the growth aspect should be theoretically full. It cannot be said that it can crush most teams 100%, but it has to be evenly pushed to the remaining 10%. The results still feel like it is repeating the process of everyone except the protagonist being defeated - the protagonist comes on to show off - and wins the game. At least it has to last until half-time when it is exhausted. Even if you write about surviving a half-time beating and being beaten by 20 points, the protagonist comes in to recover, I think it is reasonable. Also, the protagonist is too pretentious. I really jumped to watch the part when Akashi awakened. It seemed a bit too exciting and written at the top. Many words were used a few times and it was enough. I really didn't follow the update of Akashi's part for several days. Furthermore, I spent a lot of time writing about the battle between the other two schools. I didn't read those 10 or so chapters. They have nothing to do with the main plot and are not considered branch plots. Just watching the battle has no specific meaning. Generally speaking, the rest is pretty good. The use of skills and pretentiousness can be regarded as making full use of various templates. There are not many people who write about black basketball, and even fewer who write well. Come on.

I think it's pretty good. I don't know why the score is so low. It's much better than those 8/9 scores that were painted out in a bunch. You can watch the protagonist draw the pen, and the fight is balanced. The characters are not broken. Sometimes there are daily routines. It's very passionate.

To be honest, only those who have watched Slam Dunk can understand how vivid the images in the author's words are. The author's description of those scenes in this novel always brings to mind those famous scenes while watching Slam Dunk. The author is so awesome [Blowing Kiss] His writing skills are really good, and he made up for our regrets. I really don't understand why the rating is so low? For those who really don't understand, go and watch Slam Dunk before watching it.

8 Points, a book of food and grass Commenting after reading is the best recognition for the author besides giving a reward. The sports category means that I have skills but you don't, I am faster and stronger, and I am not satisfied with all kinds of defeats. The author's advantages are that he only wrote one round, and it is not too long. Secondly, the growth and changes of the overall characters and the plot development of different original works can be seen. Thirdly, there is only sports and no romance, but the number of words is not high. I recommend reading it. There are definitely some shortcomings. Others have said that if you are curious, read other reviews. However, this is a book that has just been completed and has not many words. You are welcome to give it a try.

The writing is good. The description of the game and the creation of the characters are excellent, but the novel is almost finished. I remember the comic ended after just one national competition. Is the same with the novel? It is still an original plot.

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Very nice! Come on! But I would like to see a little more of the protagonist, even a daily one! Very warm daily life (*^▽^*)

Personally, I think it's very cool and good-looking, and I really like the protagonist's character who is lazy but handsome when he's handsome. It's really cool to pretend to be B. I haven't watched Slam Dunk, but I don't know what the original plot is like, but the author wrote it very interestingly, and it was exciting and funny to watch. It's just too little and not enough, I hope to stick with it and update more.

I've read 100 chapters so far and it's quite enjoyable. I haven't watched Slam Dunk, but I have watched Kuroko's Basketball. The plot aspect is still very fresh to me. The author has written the kind of youthful passion that belongs to anime.

The writing is very good, and the daily and competition distribution is reasonable. [Like][Like][Like]

It's good to watch. I like the character of the main character very much. It's a novel. The main character doesn't need to work hard. He just has to hang up and it's over. It's very enjoyable to read.

The characters in the novel are very well restored [like it], especially the original protagonist Sakuragi. Although the protagonist is cheating, he is very restrained (except for the last game, and there is no salt). The writing is a little green, but it really makes the regret of watching Slam Dunk come true [crying]

I really burst into tears when I saw the final victory [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Akagi's regret, Mitsui's regret, Rukawa's arrogance, Sakuragi's nonsense, Ryota's perseverance, watching Slam Dunk for the first time seems like it happened yesterday, Shohoku - the national champion! ! !

It's good to watch. I've watched Kuroko but not Slam Dunk. The author has a good grasp of the pacing and the protagonist is so cool pretending.

Really really really super super super beautiful! ! ! Although I don't know much about basketball, it's really fun. Lin Bei is really good. Everything in this article is very well written. I cried to death when I saw it yesterday [crying] [crying] [crying]

I just finished watching the Kanagawa Competition. The minimum score is 8.5 Or above. The group portraits are well written, the characters are well drawn, and the daily life is relaxed and humorous. It's a rare Slam Dunk fanfic. It's hard to imagine some people giving it a low score because it's not fun enough. The author's writing rhythm is just right for readers to see the Five Tigers of Northern Hunan growing up with the protagonist. A real Slam Dunk fan wouldn't want the entire book to be about the protagonist cheating and becoming invincible all the way. Those who accompany us in our youth are all experienced babies used to set off the protagonist. I rarely write book reviews, but I feel that this one is not as popular as it should be.

I really like the plot of a lazy genius who takes note of his teammates' efforts and then works harder, but there are so few of them. I don't know when laziness was equated with that kind of elegance. Anyway, there are no books similar to this one now.

Weakened physical ability. The skill has been weakened by you. It feels like a child holding a big knife to me. It won't last long if you don't take advantage of it.

Just watch it, no one will say a word after watching it

In fact, the special training before the national competition can be strengthened for Mitsui Miyagi. If he can't open two zones, he can also learn the five-pointer and thunderous dribbling, so that he will not be reduced to a background version and basically have no role.

I'm the only one who thinks it's good-looking and fun [laughing] The protagonist is in line with my spiritual current situation.

The writing is very good, and it's only rated this much. It's really beautiful [like]

It's nice to read. I love reading it. I think the writing is very good overall and it's very nice to read.