“She must never find out that I’m a vampire.” / “He must never find out that I’m an assassin.”, Chen Mo / Ye Bing
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To earn the right to live in the sunlight, Chen Mo helps the police and becomes a vampire enforcer who hunts his own kind.
His hands are stained with blood, but the only thing he wants to hold on to is an ordinary, warm future with his girlfriend.
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Ye Bing was adopted by a powerful family as a child and trained to become a top assassin. Moving through bloodshed and conspiracy, she is the family’s sharpest “blade.”
She conceals all her deadly talents, wanting only to protect the genuine, everyday life she shares with her boyfriend.
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Each of them believes the other is an ordinary person, and they do everything they can to play the gentlest lover in the other’s world.
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When a vampire’s fangs meet an assassin’s blade, will this love, born of lies, end in the cruel finale fate has written, or can they join hands and write a brand-new chapter together?
After reading so far, I will simply make some comments and make some suggestions for the author. It will also make it easier for future book friends to read. First of all, the subject matter is novel and interesting. The background is developed well. So far, the basic background and the relationship between the characters are relatively clear. The storyline is relatively compact and will not make people feel too boring. The specific situation will depend on the author's further development. The characterization of the characters is also good. However, from the current reading of this book, the emotional line should be parallel to the fighting and story lines, and the emotional line does not necessarily account for 50/50. It is estimated to be 46 and 37. The hostile forces in the storyline are too strong, so it is destined not to focus on emotion. In fact, the author's emotional description is good. As far as my personal hope is concerned, I hope that the battle line will be ended as soon as possible and the investment in the emotional line will be increased. Enter, I think most people should click in after seeing this special CP combination, or it can greatly balance the balance of strength. At least it can allow the male and female protagonists to compete without paying a huge price. This will also make the emotional line more beautiful. For two scarred hearts, I hope they will not be separated and endure new pain. (The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment)
There are very few novels on this subject on Tomato. I hope the author can stick to it, I don't want a bad ending, I want a happy ending, and I want to watch an emotional drama. I don't want to watch the fight scene anymore [crying]
The more I watched, the more frustrated I became.
The setting is really good, and the progress of the previous story is also very layered, but the author's writing style needs to be strengthened. Some words and straightforward descriptions are repeated too many times and it will be a bit off-kilter. Then the ending of the story is a bit hasty. The story of the woman in the red dress can be expanded more. I hope the author can work hard.
Oh, and as for the vampire setting, I think that if we want to expand it, we need to think carefully about the construction of the entire vampire ability system and the life experience setting of the male protagonist. Intellectual games should not be hastily done just to advance the plot. For example, why a thousand-year-old vampire couldn't think more and was killed hastily.
It's beautiful, it's rare, it's my favorite subject matter, and the characters are very three-dimensional.
I finished it in one go. The male and female protagonists are very suitable to my taste. I must have a happy ending. The author is so awesome [I almost cried]
It's uncomfortable, it's really uncomfortable. The heroine has been taken away. What will the alliance do to her? Such a knife is quite uncomfortable for me.
Alas, I don't want to pursue it anymore. The setting of the male protagonist is already uncomfortable enough. The villain never goes offline. It's so frustrating. If he doesn't go offline, the female protagonist cannot be saved. She is threatened again and again. This makes the female protagonist a pure burden. Moreover, there are still some differences in the latest chapter. According to the theoretical setting, the trolls and snipers are not extraordinary weapons. The bullets are special. Their performance will be greatly reduced if they enter the sea water. There is no description of their performance degradation in the article, and the bullets in the backpack must have been wet. It is too unreasonable.
The fighting scenes are very comfortable, and the emotional scenes are also very good. There are some minor flaws in the details, which are not major problems, but the update speed is a flaw. Overall, it is very good. I finally struck gold [laughs]
Beautiful and very interesting! ! ! ! !
Beautiful, novel subject matter
The rhythm control and emotional description are at least in the echelon of the platform [85/100 total score]
If it is not a cool article now, it will indeed not be recommended by the algorithm.
After reading so far, I will simply make some comments and make some suggestions for the author. It will also make it easier for future book friends to read. First of all, the subject matter is novel and interesting. The background is developed well. So far, the basic background and the relationship between the characters are relatively clear. The storyline is relatively compact and will not make people feel too boring. The specific situation will depend on the author's further development. The characterization of the characters is also good. However, from the current reading of this book, the emotional line should be parallel to the fighting and story lines, and the emotional line does not necessarily account for 50/50. It is estimated to be 46 and 37. The hostile forces in the storyline are too strong, so it is destined not to focus on emotion. In fact, the author's emotional description is good. As far as my personal hope is concerned, I hope that the battle line will be ended as soon as possible and the investment in the emotional line will be increased. Enter, I think most people should click in after seeing this special CP combination, or it can greatly balance the balance of strength. At least it can allow the male and female protagonists to compete without paying a huge price. This will also make the emotional line more beautiful. For two scarred hearts, I hope they will not be separated and endure new pain. (The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment)
There are very few novels on this subject on Tomato. I hope the author can stick to it, I don't want a bad ending, I want a happy ending, and I want to watch an emotional drama. I don't want to watch the fight scene anymore [crying] The more I watched, the more frustrated I became.
The setting is really good, and the progress of the previous story is also very layered, but the author's writing style needs to be strengthened. Some words and straightforward descriptions are repeated too many times and it will be a bit off-kilter. Then the ending of the story is a bit hasty. The story of the woman in the red dress can be expanded more. I hope the author can work hard. Oh, and as for the vampire setting, I think that if we want to expand it, we need to think carefully about the construction of the entire vampire ability system and the life experience setting of the male protagonist. Intellectual games should not be hastily done just to advance the plot. For example, why a thousand-year-old vampire couldn't think more and was killed hastily.
It's beautiful, it's rare, it's my favorite subject matter, and the characters are very three-dimensional.
I finished it in one go. The male and female protagonists are very suitable to my taste. I must have a happy ending. The author is so awesome [I almost cried]
It's uncomfortable, it's really uncomfortable. The heroine has been taken away. What will the alliance do to her? Such a knife is quite uncomfortable for me. Alas, I don't want to pursue it anymore. The setting of the male protagonist is already uncomfortable enough. The villain never goes offline. It's so frustrating. If he doesn't go offline, the female protagonist cannot be saved. She is threatened again and again. This makes the female protagonist a pure burden. Moreover, there are still some differences in the latest chapter. According to the theoretical setting, the trolls and snipers are not extraordinary weapons. The bullets are special. Their performance will be greatly reduced if they enter the sea water. There is no description of their performance degradation in the article, and the bullets in the backpack must have been wet. It is too unreasonable.
The fighting scenes are very comfortable, and the emotional scenes are also very good. There are some minor flaws in the details, which are not major problems, but the update speed is a flaw. Overall, it is very good. I finally struck gold [laughs]
Beautiful and very interesting! ! ! ! !
Beautiful, novel subject matter
The rhythm control and emotional description are at least in the echelon of the platform [85/100 total score] If it is not a cool article now, it will indeed not be recommended by the algorithm.