“She must never find out that I’m a vampire.” / “He must never find out that I’m an assassin.”, Chen Mo / Ye Bing
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To earn the right to live in the sunlight, Chen Mo helps the police and becomes a vampire enforcer who hunts his own kind.
His hands are stained with blood, but the only thing he wants to hold on to is an ordinary, warm future with his girlfriend.
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Ye Bing was adopted by a powerful family as a child and trained to become a top assassin. Moving through bloodshed and conspiracy, she is the family’s sharpest “blade.”
She conceals all her deadly talents, wanting only to protect the genuine, everyday life she shares with her boyfriend.
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Each of them believes the other is an ordinary person, and they do everything they can to play the gentlest lover in the other’s world.
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When a vampire’s fangs meet an assassin’s blade, will this love, born of lies, end in the cruel finale fate has written, or can they join hands and write a brand-new chapter together?
Here are my brief comments so far, along with some suggestions for the author, which will also be helpful for future readers. First, the subject matter is novel and interesting, and the development of the background is good. So far, the basic background and relationships between the characters are clear, and the plot is quite tight, preventing boredom.
There are very few novels of this genre on Tomato. I hope the author can keep going. I don't want a bad ending, I want a happy ending, and I want to see romance. I don't want to see any more fight scenes 😢 The more I look at it, the more frustrated I feel.
The premise is really good, and the progression of the story in the beginning is also very well-structured. However, the author's writing style needs improvement; some words and straightforward descriptions are repeated too often, which becomes a bit jarring. Also, the ending felt a bit rushed. The story of the woman in the red dress could have been explored more extensively.
It's good, and it's a rare subject I like; the characters are very well-developed.
I finished reading it in one go! The male and female leads are just my type. I really hope it has a happy ending, author! 🥺
It's painful, truly painful. The female lead has been captured; who knows what that alliance will do to her? This kind of heartbreak is really painful for me. Sigh, I don't want to continue reading. The male lead's character is already unbearable enough, and the villain never leaves the story—it's so frustrating.
The action scenes were very satisfying, and the emotional scenes were also well done. There were a few minor flaws in the details, but they weren't a big problem. However, the slow update speed was a major drawback. Overall, it was very good; I finally found a gem! 😆
It's great, and very interesting!!!
It's good, and the theme is novel.
The pacing and emotional portrayal are at least in the tier of [85/100 total score] within the platform. Nowadays, if a story isn't a "feel-good" novel, it definitely won't be recommended by the algorithm.