The Cultivation World’s White Moonlight? Just a Jade Pendant Wholesaler

First of all, I gave it four stars because of the mechanics of Tomato, which is actually worth five stars! Then I have Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I just want to read 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. It must be highly praised and supported. The plot is awesome. The characterizations are all awesome by Claes. The author is awesome and the author ended the game. It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

I enjoyed reading it. The author wrote it well. The relationship between the heroine and the harem is very exciting. I am looking forward to how Xiaoxing, the owner of the divine bone, will treat the heroine. But it seems that Xiaoxing is the deputy CP. Hey, I quite like this setting, but it is a pity that he is not the heroine's man [laughs] It's just that Lin Fan's plot is not very well written, but the subsequent plot is still okay, the author, please keep writing.

It's very interesting. The author's writing is very good. I also like the heroine's character. I just love this kind of thing [laughing] [admiration] I wonder if the author can write less about female competition in the plot below. Female competition is really not in the public's taste right now. I hope the author will listen to my opinion. If you have time, can you revise Lin Fan's performance earlier? I feel that this character is not very comfortable.

The others are really good and I didn't find any major flaws, but Lin Fan is so annoying that I deducted one star. The heroine has been being plotted and beaten all the time, and she feels a bit aggrieved.

It looks good. As for Lin Fan's early performance, I'm a bit dissatisfied.

Many people criticize it, but I think it's pretty good. Every author will slowly improve in the writing process, so don't be too harsh. Each character has his own personality and growth line. If the whole thing is fine, there is no need to hang on to one or two words. For example, Xiao Liu Ya, his setting (or appearance) is that of a child, so he can't be forced to be rough. The rebate setting is also quite interesting. If you are pursuing the ultimate pleasure, you can go to the male channel next door and read the male protagonist's article. It's better to be more patient and look back. The heroine is already good enough, and there is no need to worry about Zhou Xiaoxiao who is different from her, let alone target her. Lin Fan is indeed a bit annoying in the early stage, but looking back, you will find that he is actually a loyal dog character, and the heroine has many other CPs. I have read Chapter 102 so far, and there is no plot similar to Lin Fan's early stage. Everyone is loyal to protect the heroine. As for the female competition everyone mentioned, in fact, Twilight Yue later turned to the Lily line. The book also hinted at Twilight Yue's own growth and independence. The plot is constantly changing and growing. Come on, author. Seeing you explaining Lin Fan all the way, I can feel that you have carefully polished the story and characters. The subsequent plots are becoming more and more attractive. I look forward to the next content!

This book is really good. The heroine's character is well developed. Don't be dissuaded by Lin Fan. You can find from the beginning that Lin Fan is a gentle person at heart, similar to central air conditioning, so he has those troublesome things. The world view in the back is very grand, and I especially like that the male protagonist is a female protagonist. The woman is also the heroine, and there are not many deputy CPs. At present, there is only Yun Jiusi × Yun Qingxue, and there are not many scenes. After all, it is not easy for the heroine to steal someone who already has someone she likes. Overall, it is very good. She quite likes Gu Chong, and everything is fine. The author keeps it up. In fact, I really think that the male protagonist is very happy. Is it possible that the female protagonist is planning the plot and just being a tool? It's not just the male who enjoys it, the female protagonist is also very happy, okay?

It's really beautiful. I've seen a lot of people say that the heroine is the hero's blood bag, and they think it's aggrieved. But actually I think this is also a refreshing point. After all, the fiancé originally wanted to have a harem, but for the heroine, he is constantly growing and changing, especially people who like the fiancé have fallen in love with the heroine [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [blowing kisses] How can it be aggrieved? It feels like the fiancé is more like a tool. It's so cool to let the girl who was originally his harem get to know the heroine out of jealousy, and then be impressed by the heroine's personality and fall in love with the heroine. [Adoration] This fiancé is more like a middleman introducer. [Laughing and crying] The author writes about the process of getting along with other sisters, this fiancé is entirely for the sake of the heroine. The main character is preparing to open a harem later. I have read many books about a female protagonist opening a harem before, in which the fans feel sorry for a certain male protagonist and hope that the female protagonist will be with him forever. This book is perfect. No one feels sorry for a certain male protagonist. The only one everyone loves is the female protagonist. It makes the heroine and other male characters get along more harmoniously. It is completely refreshing.

Not to be underestimated, it's pretty! ! ! It's like the feeling of happiness when you open a bucket of instant noodles and it turns out there's really a bucket of braised beef inside~ Just this male-female thing, just this investment in raising gu, just this my standard, just this genius flow (sesame stuffing) is so cool! ! ! Slightly routine, but fragrant but not greasy. After all, the reason why a routine is a routine means that it is durable and can stand the test (provided it is well written) 👍 Neither the mother nor the mother is scolded, there is no plot where the heroine is attracted by one day and becomes sour tomorrow, and there is no ambiguous charm for the male supporting characters. So even if there is a slight concession of neutral words, I feel that the flaws are not concealed, because the author is really unattractive! Regardless of whether you are a destined girl or a destined man, everything is for Song Wanqing. No matter whether you are a scumbag, a "love rival" or a villain, you all shine for Song Wanqing! ! !

It's very interesting. I highly recommend reading this book. I can't stand it anymore