You Were Supposed to Redeem the Witch, Not Capture Her Like a Fairy!

It's a pity that female videos are just too beautiful and almost sublime.

The plot of Se Se is pretty good, but the other plots feel very average. I thought it was about traveling across the world to catch elves, but it turned out to be just virtual.

Except for the driving aspect that attracts readers, the rest of the book is a bit below mediocre, and there are still quite a few poisonous points. For example: 1. Give the protagonist wisdom The protagonist caught an important person created by the Blood Moon Sect, and kept asking others (after asking the Blood Moon Sect, he asked the people around him) why they were targeting him. Extremely speechless, everyone should know why, right? Is it okay to give the protagonist some intelligence? 2. Deliberately shaped, the plot is "not smooth" The plot of getting along with Ye Wuyue is too unnatural, and the character is always deliberately shaped. Many plots are "unsmooth" and even a bit embarrassing.

It's good to watch, the driving skills are good, and the plot is also good to watch.

It took off immediately while driving, and the plot was not bad, but it was a bit overwhelming. Two women were waiting to get in, but the male protagonist still had an ordinary body. The combat power is not clear either, it is probably only about one level. The male protagonist has not been upgraded and strengthened. It obviously looks wrong. The male protagonist's body cannot withstand the battle between Erying and Lu Bu.

It's very good, the pace is very steady, the author will keep up the good work [blowing kiss], and will add the last star when it's finished [laughing], that is to say, there are people like me who thought of Blood Devouring Attack when reading the novel [stunned]

The author writes very well, and the description of driving is very good. , But the description of the plot is average, but it's actually okay. After all, the main focus is SS and comedy, and the human side is very powerful and the rear is very stable. However, I still recommend that the author writes less SS. I think it looks good. I really want to follow up. I really don't want the author to stop writing after being locked up in the dark room. But thinking about it, the protagonist has reached the top at the beginning. He can't count words unless he opens a new world. Well, here it is. I hope the author will write better as he writes.

The previous writing is quite nice, but I personally suggest the author not to write too stream-of-consciously. In some places, it feels very empty, and it feels like I was writing something out of a dream. I suggest you read it again from a reader's perspective before posting.

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