[Urban Fantasy + Everyday City Life + Modern Countryside + Two Heroines + Painful Romance + Ex-Wife Chases Husband to the Crematorium + Love Triangle Drama + Adorable Kids + Brotherhood + Putting Nasty Neighbors in Their Place]
While discussing a business deal with a client, Ye Fan unexpectedly catches his girlfriend of three years going on a blind date behind his back!
“It's over!” Faced with her cheating, he breaks up with her on the spot, without any hesitation.
Before he can even recover from the fury of being betrayed, a call from a friend back home leaves him reeling: his father is critically ill!
Hit by both blows at once, Ye Fan decides to drive back to his hometown, both to clear his head and to visit his father. But the moment he opens the door, a shocking secret leaves him completely stunned.
It turns out that five years ago, after he and his first love argued over their differences and broke up, he went away to work and lost touch with her.
Little did he know that after their impulsive breakup, his first love did something outrageous: she secretly had a beautiful little girl with him and threatened everyone not to tell him...
I saw a lot of people watching and reading, so I went to Brain Iron. This is my first time to rate a book very well👍👍 I hope everyone will recommend this novel to haters [laughing][laughing]
I have read a lot of great novels, and I am very happy to pretend to be cool. In this novel, I can only say that the male protagonist is very strong and excellent. I even want a boy who looks like this in real life. In fact, I also want to fall in love. The male protagonist is very charming. Goldfinger does not describe a lot. It is a more realistic novel, including the fact that the first girlfriend went on a blind date behind his back. It is real. One of my best friends' boyfriend's mother did not agree with the two of them, so she asked the man to go on a blind date, and later they successfully married. Instead, my best friend hurriedly married someone else because the bride price could not be negotiated. Within a few years, she got divorced and remarried.
Comprehensive evaluation: Food and grass, you can watch it.
There was indeed a problem at the beginning, hiding the fact that my first love was pregnant for so long.
But it's actually understandable. First of all, it's for the development of the plot, and secondly, it's true that people can be particularly stubborn sometimes.
Generally speaking, it is acceptable, especially since the matter was not delayed for a long time and was resolved soon, and the family was happy. I didn't say that I wrote it over and over in order to deliberately increase the number of words. The author has a good sense of proportion in this aspect.
The second advantage is that the author has his own ideas about the plot development of the characters and does not deliberately create conflicts. Whether it is the protagonist seeking forgiveness from his first love or the reconciliation with his father-in-law, mother-in-law and brother-in-law, everything is resolved quickly, making people feel that the two families are rushing to solve problems rather than venting their tempers.
Of course, there are also some deliberate plots in the article, such as the protagonist meeting the heroine on a blind date and breaking up without listening to anything, the protagonist's appearance rising and being entangled by the bridesmaid, etc. But later the author also gave an explanation. The reason for the breakup was because his girlfriend had not changed and listened to her mother for three years, and her girlfriend had not considered the future at all. The protagonist was entangled by the bridesmaid and solved it immediately. There was no misunderstanding with his first love, and the next plot was immediately introduced - getting the certificate.
Overall, the author handled it well and it's worth reading. Hope to keep up the good work! There are too few now, not enough to watch [adoration][adoration]
This book simply touched my heart. It is so good that everyone should read it. It's definitely a sweet little white text. The protagonist is smart and intelligent. Very responsible. [Like][Like][Like]
Well written, I like the plot
In fact, 200,000 a month is relatively high in China, but it is possible that people in the city look down upon it. My girlfriend actually defaulted to finding a new wife without telling me about the blind date. I am right. Personally, I think the biggest disadvantage is that it took five years for my childhood sweetheart to find out that she was pregnant and had a baby. I sent letters to everyone including my childhood sweetheart, my childhood sweetheart, and the father of the hero. It is better to write that I broke up with the villagers and went to the big city to live in the big city and found out that I had a child. Generally speaking, it is okay. Let's see how to write later.
The book is quite good, but the system is a bit of a curse. I guess the chapter where the system appears has dissuaded a lot of people. The system's presence is not so strong later on, so it's very comfortable to read. If there was no system, the book would be perfect. The character descriptions are very realistic. It's ok, come on.
The male protagonist has a very good personality. When will his ex-girlfriend show up? I'll wait for more updates.
Does it look good? Does it look good? Does it look bad? Does it look good? Does it look bad?
I saw a lot of people watching and reading, so I went to Brain Iron. This is my first time to rate a book very well👍👍 I hope everyone will recommend this novel to haters [laughing][laughing]
I have read a lot of great novels, and I am very happy to pretend to be cool. In this novel, I can only say that the male protagonist is very strong and excellent. I even want a boy who looks like this in real life. In fact, I also want to fall in love. The male protagonist is very charming. Goldfinger does not describe a lot. It is a more realistic novel, including the fact that the first girlfriend went on a blind date behind his back. It is real. One of my best friends' boyfriend's mother did not agree with the two of them, so she asked the man to go on a blind date, and later they successfully married. Instead, my best friend hurriedly married someone else because the bride price could not be negotiated. Within a few years, she got divorced and remarried.
Comprehensive evaluation: Food and grass, you can watch it. There was indeed a problem at the beginning, hiding the fact that my first love was pregnant for so long. But it's actually understandable. First of all, it's for the development of the plot, and secondly, it's true that people can be particularly stubborn sometimes. Generally speaking, it is acceptable, especially since the matter was not delayed for a long time and was resolved soon, and the family was happy. I didn't say that I wrote it over and over in order to deliberately increase the number of words. The author has a good sense of proportion in this aspect. The second advantage is that the author has his own ideas about the plot development of the characters and does not deliberately create conflicts. Whether it is the protagonist seeking forgiveness from his first love or the reconciliation with his father-in-law, mother-in-law and brother-in-law, everything is resolved quickly, making people feel that the two families are rushing to solve problems rather than venting their tempers. Of course, there are also some deliberate plots in the article, such as the protagonist meeting the heroine on a blind date and breaking up without listening to anything, the protagonist's appearance rising and being entangled by the bridesmaid, etc. But later the author also gave an explanation. The reason for the breakup was because his girlfriend had not changed and listened to her mother for three years, and her girlfriend had not considered the future at all. The protagonist was entangled by the bridesmaid and solved it immediately. There was no misunderstanding with his first love, and the next plot was immediately introduced - getting the certificate. Overall, the author handled it well and it's worth reading. Hope to keep up the good work! There are too few now, not enough to watch [adoration][adoration]
This book simply touched my heart. It is so good that everyone should read it. It's definitely a sweet little white text. The protagonist is smart and intelligent. Very responsible. [Like][Like][Like]
Well written, I like the plot
In fact, 200,000 a month is relatively high in China, but it is possible that people in the city look down upon it. My girlfriend actually defaulted to finding a new wife without telling me about the blind date. I am right. Personally, I think the biggest disadvantage is that it took five years for my childhood sweetheart to find out that she was pregnant and had a baby. I sent letters to everyone including my childhood sweetheart, my childhood sweetheart, and the father of the hero. It is better to write that I broke up with the villagers and went to the big city to live in the big city and found out that I had a child. Generally speaking, it is okay. Let's see how to write later.
The book is quite good, but the system is a bit of a curse. I guess the chapter where the system appears has dissuaded a lot of people. The system's presence is not so strong later on, so it's very comfortable to read. If there was no system, the book would be perfect. The character descriptions are very realistic. It's ok, come on.
The male protagonist has a very good personality. When will his ex-girlfriend show up? I'll wait for more updates.
Does it look good? Does it look good? Does it look bad? Does it look good? Does it look bad?
Not bad, just a little bit weird