In a high-martial urban world after the apocalypse, Xia Mi is the unluckiest person alive.
As the older twin brother, he is ruthlessly abandoned by his family simply because he awakened the bizarre “husband-bringing good fortune” ability.
Then his romance-obsessed younger sister elopes at the last minute, leaving him no choice but to take her place and get married for her!
He thinks it's a desperate marriage of convenience, only to discover that the “husband” he is supposed to marry is actually a ruthless female war goddess, reborn from the future.
Even more absurdly, his husband-bringing System fully awakens. If he wants to get stronger, he has to rack up wife points like crazy!
He doesn't know she's a woman, and she doesn't know he's a man. Both think they've fallen into a forbidden romance.
A hilarious fake romance kicks off in the apocalyptic city!
【Everything's turned upside down】【Strong heroine carries him to victory】【A story about education and training】【What a beautiful lily flower】【This lily can have babies】
The completion rate of 100,000 was revealed, 3.35%, Which also shocked my jaw. It's such a low completion rate...
I personally feel that this story is pretty good, but there must be a reason for such a low completion rate. After reflection and analysis, I found that I seemed to have stepped into a big pit in the subject matter, and I couldn't save it. The setting of proxy marriage should be an emotional comedy that favors women. The male protagonist is weak and cute at the beginning, but I chose it as the end. I want to write a story about a male protagonist who becomes stronger step by step, and a strong female supporter. However, the comedy of emotional dislocation is inconsistent with the story line of cruel survival in the apocalypse. In this way, the positioning of the reader group seems to be unclear... So that the completion rate is so low, it is too embarrassing...
I'm still not prepared enough, I stepped into such a big trap...
I originally wanted to re-open it, but after two days I finished it and read it at 4.7%. After reading some comments from readers and friends, I thought about it and realized that I wrote it more because I had the creative passion. I wanted to give Xia Mi and Jiang Che a happy ending... So I continued to persevere...
Readers and friends can put forward any suggestions or comments...
I need your feedback so I can improve it...
In fact, I really want to know whether the few friends who are chasing the update are chasing the end of the world, or the comedy setting of substitute marriage, and whether they are readers of romance novels, transformation novels, or doomsday city passionate novels...
Everyone is welcome to share your views...
OK, no poking. The sweetness is okay, and the pseudolily is delicious.
One chapter is 1,000 words, too short
I saw the unfortunate notice when I first came here [crying], but I still want to give you some encouragement [like] and look forward to the next work [adoration]
It's super good. I've been looking for a long time and finally found a novel that I can read with a theme I like. The characters written by the author are particularly cute.
The completion rate of 100,000 was revealed, 3.35%, Which also shocked my jaw. It's such a low completion rate... I personally feel that this story is pretty good, but there must be a reason for such a low completion rate. After reflection and analysis, I found that I seemed to have stepped into a big pit in the subject matter, and I couldn't save it. The setting of proxy marriage should be an emotional comedy that favors women. The male protagonist is weak and cute at the beginning, but I chose it as the end. I want to write a story about a male protagonist who becomes stronger step by step, and a strong female supporter. However, the comedy of emotional dislocation is inconsistent with the story line of cruel survival in the apocalypse. In this way, the positioning of the reader group seems to be unclear... So that the completion rate is so low, it is too embarrassing... I'm still not prepared enough, I stepped into such a big trap... I originally wanted to re-open it, but after two days I finished it and read it at 4.7%. After reading some comments from readers and friends, I thought about it and realized that I wrote it more because I had the creative passion. I wanted to give Xia Mi and Jiang Che a happy ending... So I continued to persevere... Readers and friends can put forward any suggestions or comments... I need your feedback so I can improve it... In fact, I really want to know whether the few friends who are chasing the update are chasing the end of the world, or the comedy setting of substitute marriage, and whether they are readers of romance novels, transformation novels, or doomsday city passionate novels... Everyone is welcome to share your views...
OK, no poking. The sweetness is okay, and the pseudolily is delicious.
One chapter is 1,000 words, too short
I saw the unfortunate notice when I first came here [crying], but I still want to give you some encouragement [like] and look forward to the next work [adoration]
It's super good. I've been looking for a long time and finally found a novel that I can read with a theme I like. The characters written by the author are particularly cute.