[One Piece fan fiction + ambitious antihero + scheming + political intrigue + no System]
“Admiral Lorne, how would you describe yourself?”
The reporter looked nervously at the man before him, known as the “Emperor of the North Blue” and the “Bane of the Celestial Dragons.”
Lorne glanced at the orderly North Blue technological fleet behind him and the great pirates kneeling to beg for mercy, then broke into a kindly smile.
“I’m a simple man.”
“I’m greedy because it’s expensive to maintain an army.”
“I’m a womanizer because marriage alliances can stabilize the political situation.”
“I kill Celestial Dragons... because justice must not be defiled.”
This is the story of a rebellious, corrupt, and absurdly powerful “scoundrel” in the Marines, who gradually sidelines Marine Headquarters and toys with the entire sea as if it were in the palm of his hand.
(The synopsis doesn’t do it justice. Read the story to see how Lorne redefines “justice”!)
The Cursed Blue Fruit grants immortality, which should be a fundamental ability—likely a basic power of demons. It should also allow the user to absorb the moon's gravity, similar to how the Cursed Blue Fruit absorbed magic power on the moon. Each planet it touches gains access to its gravitational pull, much like wielding power. Beyond that, it should also possess some magical abilities.
This style is somewhat similar to Darren's book. I've read 60 pages so far, and I don't know if the author can handle it; it's quite challenging.
The writing style is very similar to that of the naval scoundrel. So far, I would give it five stars.
So far it's great! It's just that the author is lacking! There's too little content, not enough to read!
It's okay, the writing is alright, but it's too similar. Add some new ideas.
That's well written, keep it up!
Brother, I eat at a school, Department of Industrial Management
Keep it up, it feels pretty good.
Well written, keep it up!