Harry Potter: The Reborn Chosen One Refuses to Lie Flat

Very exciting! I really like fanfics that are group portraits. Earlier, Hermione noticed the existence of time and saved Pansy with her oblivion. It was really cool. I could also feel the oppression of Lao Fu. In short, I was always interested in watching it. It didn't retell the original work too much and there was always something new to see. Big Deha and Little Deha each have different flavors, but because they are both of them, I think it is very consistent with the personality of the characters I understand with different experiences. In short, they are all delicious. I hope the teacher can write the ending (I enjoyed eating a hundred chapters in my dream)

It's a very interesting setting, and the characters are well captured. What's rare is that there are no big cheats in the "rebirth" setting, and the new plot is very interesting. The most important thing is to feel the author's love for the original work. Some authors start arrogantly criticizing and preaching about the plot of the original work as they write. The current content of this article can feel the compassion for the fate of the characters, but it is too short, and the subsequent plot does not collapse. An absolute masterpiece.

I think the writing is very good. It expresses each person's emotions very delicately and truly. It is really touching. It also fits the characters of the original work very well. The plot is also very novel and the story line is very smooth. I personally think it is a very good book among the Harry Potter fanfics that I have read [Sending Hearts]

It's good-looking, very philosophical and logical, and everyone's IQs are online. The progress is fast, the plot is super novel, and the transitions and changes are not abrupt at all. All in all, good looking

The author is very powerful, and the writing is wonderful. It can make people deeply understand the powerless despair under the control of "time". Everyone's IQ is online, and the plot is novel and attractive. Come on, author (^∨^)

Looks good, looks good, looks good! Everyone go and see it! Really good-looking!

The teacher put this red egg together with so many knives! (Ahem, it's just good-looking anyway😭

No more comments, it looks good so far

Very good idea. Neville Longbottom is also very brave and the writing is very good. This is my first fanfic to be added to my bookshelf. The author works hard.

How did you manage to make me cry and laugh at the same time in both articles [laughs]