It should have the Ultraman spirit, protection, no romance, and a blazing start from Chapter 7! I promise not to use AI or pad the word count. The challenges will be plenty tough, but hope will always emerge after despair!
The protagonist will gain the ability to transform in Chapter 10 and reach God Tier 4 within fifty chapters. If I fail, I’ll livestream myself eating... meow.
And although Ling Nai is a girl, she’s a warrior too. There will absolutely be no disgusting, degrading romance!
And it won’t just be the Nexus world. She’ll transmigrate to other worlds as well.
When Ling Nai wakes up, she finds herself in an extremely strange world.
In this world, humans turn into dark creatures when consumed by intense hatred. Meanwhile, Space Beasts, which once fed on human fear and hunted people, have become the best companions, devouring negative emotions and keeping humans from turning dark.
Gumen Ikki, who beats his wife, drinks, gambles, and brawls, while endlessly taking advantage of Riko, who loves him.
Jun, who should have fought for humanity and been devoted to the light, has become a calamity that brings war and conflict.
Rei, who once looked toward hope and remained optimistic, has grown dark and obsessive, wanting to kill every child before they grow up.
Others have changed as well: the gentle and understanding Nagi Saijo; Kazuki Komon, whose convictions are firm and whose heart turns toward the light; and Hiroyuki Misawa, the good-hearted older man who protects children's dreams and wants to bring light to the world.
This is a twisted, blasphemous world...
(This is my first time writing fan fiction, and I’ll do my best to write every character well. Problems that need solving will be solved, without dragging things out! The protagonist won’t be put through misery. Although the challenges may be a little difficult, I won’t force needless suffering on her. I’ll save everyone who deserves saving, protect everyone who deserves protection, and stop everything that needs to be stopped!)
It's good that the author has ideas, but I personally feel that reversing the character's personality is a trick. Through character reversal, the author can directly create a new personality for the original character to avoid OOC situations. However, this approach also causes an extreme separation from the original work. The characters have basically nothing to do with the original work except for their names and abilities. For example, in this book's Gumen and Zhun, it feels that they just have the same name as the original character. Although Zhun has the same occupation as the original work, the profession of photographer does not particularly represent Zhun (after all, Zhun only appeared in a few clips during the photographer's period, which did not leave a deep impression on the audience). You can add some iconic character settings, or stereotypes, etc. On top of the reversed personality.
At the same time, this book also has the characteristics of being too fast-paced. It feels like the heroine was attacked on the train and joined the Night Raid team in the blink of an eye. There is nothing particularly worthy of attention. I don't like this style very much.
The above is the conclusion I came to after just reading a few chapters. You are welcome to point out my loopholes and I wish the author can write better stories in the future.
It's not a dummy protagonist, and the plot pace is fast and not draggy.
It's pretty cool, but why does it feel like there's no one there?
It looks good, it looks good, it's very novel [laughs evilly]
I also happen to be writing a Nexus fanfic, so I'd like to give it a five-star support.
The book is pretty good, why is there no one here?
Very good, what is the situation in that alienated world? I have seen similar illustrations on Douyin
It's very well written and I hope you can stick with it.
I'll go, it's so good, a great book, but too few people read it, 🤔😨😆
Watch and cry at Billions of Pseudo Austrians [crying]
It's good that the author has ideas, but I personally feel that reversing the character's personality is a trick. Through character reversal, the author can directly create a new personality for the original character to avoid OOC situations. However, this approach also causes an extreme separation from the original work. The characters have basically nothing to do with the original work except for their names and abilities. For example, in this book's Gumen and Zhun, it feels that they just have the same name as the original character. Although Zhun has the same occupation as the original work, the profession of photographer does not particularly represent Zhun (after all, Zhun only appeared in a few clips during the photographer's period, which did not leave a deep impression on the audience). You can add some iconic character settings, or stereotypes, etc. On top of the reversed personality. At the same time, this book also has the characteristics of being too fast-paced. It feels like the heroine was attacked on the train and joined the Night Raid team in the blink of an eye. There is nothing particularly worthy of attention. I don't like this style very much. The above is the conclusion I came to after just reading a few chapters. You are welcome to point out my loopholes and I wish the author can write better stories in the future.
It's not a dummy protagonist, and the plot pace is fast and not draggy.
It's pretty cool, but why does it feel like there's no one there?
It looks good, it looks good, it's very novel [laughs evilly]
I also happen to be writing a Nexus fanfic, so I'd like to give it a five-star support.
The book is pretty good, why is there no one here?
Very good, what is the situation in that alienated world? I have seen similar illustrations on Douyin
It's very well written and I hope you can stick with it.
I'll go, it's so good, a great book, but too few people read it, 🤔😨😆
Watch and cry at Billions of Pseudo Austrians [crying]