Clan Cultivation: Starting with My Father Attaining Golden Core

Well written and based on Xianjian. It describes the layout and vision of the top cities. The only flaw is that the male protagonist is a bit average. Not like a hero, with a faint smell of diaosi. When I encounter a female supporting character, she looks more like a bear [grieved] The female supporting characters have their own characteristics

Very nice. This is a novel that you need to read slowly. The various designs and descriptions are very good! ! The setting of the realm is very novel. The world view is also huge. One place is millions of miles away... There are countless virtual worlds (small worlds) There will be a plot of conquering the virtual world (the first time I saw this in a novel about cultivating immortals) The golden elixir has a lifespan of 5000+, which is very powerful. The protagonist is a genius, not a traditional loser. The author's writing is also very good. There aren't many protagonist roles in the early stage, and it's a bit more of a group portrait. But the characterizations that appear are all very good. There are also various moves, place names, and people's names that are very good. Feng Chun Ferry, The Other Shore Decays, Withering and Prosperity Sutra, Qing Yu Tian, Qiu Yan Chengyu Tian... Yu Qinglin, Ye Zhanqiu... Great support! ! ! ! I hope the author will update soon!

I also give myself an encouragement [laughs]

The setting is pretty good, and I have a feel for it, but there is no setting supplement at the beginning, which is a bit difficult to understand. Later, there is an explanation, and it is well written. When I was watching it, I thought that the Wang and Xie families had surrendered to the Sima family, and I was still thinking about how to overthrow Jin in the later period. However, when they rebelled later, the two of them also rebelled. It was a bit funny to me.

I have a broad mind and rich vocabulary, but sometimes I am confused and feel that writing a million words has a place in Tomato.

Does the protagonist of this kind of world dare to trust his own system [face covering]

The writing is good, with few vernacular words, suitable for educated people

It's really okay, but I'm a little tired from reading it. I suddenly opened this book on Tomato, which made me feel uncomfortable. It's okay. The rating shouldn't be so low.

It's good-looking and full of stuff. Come on, author. This is a really good novel. As an old bookworm, I have read a lot of books. Many novels about cultivating immortals are very cliche and hard to read. This novel is very eye-catching and difficult to write. The protagonist has the means, talent and background. The system of cultivating immortals is also very different. I like this system of cultivating immortals very much. It is more formal and traditional. It has a sense of orthodoxy. I hope the author will keep writing. It is really good.

Very well written. The settings are pretty good.