Clan Cultivation: I’ve Joined Forces with the Rats!

It looks good, but I feel that the author is very bold in choosing this theme. On the one hand, everyone who cultivates immortals defaults to fighting against heaven, so things like family and family, and some stories even say that some writers ascend to sects in the later stages, are set as objects outside the body. So how does the family combine with the immortal cultivators? I want to see the follow-up development. I don't give it full stars because the drama conflict is not that strong, like watching the heroine open a restaurant in the world of immortality, and there are some minor flaws. I know little about being a researcher at the age of fifteen. Is it true that researchers are so young? Or is it because the author made the heroine smaller for the convenience of writing about the psychological activities of the heroine? Except for e-sports players and athletes who are very young, I have not come into contact with scientific researchers of this age in daily life. On the one hand, I feel that the author's knowledge storage is very rich. On the other hand, as I read, I felt that the relationship between the heroine and her family members was a bit thin. I hope to write more psychological descriptions in the future. And why the heroine chose to study these things during her lifetime, so what path will the soul take after surviving the time traveling to the present, interacting with family members, and everyone's personal background and so on. Anyway, it's still very interesting. If there's anything I want to say later, I'll leave a comment. Cheers, author.

Give your worries to the moon, leave your fatigue to the bed, and repair yourself in sleep. Tomorrow is another day full of energy, so can the author update more? I'm almost finished reading it! Hurry up and wait and see

It's a bit too modern, and there are fewer female characters who appear in more scenes now, but it's still interesting [note]

It's a pity, the feeling can be popular! ! The creativity is very good, the writing is very warm and has its own style, which is suitable for farming. Those fights, intrigues and the like actually hide the advantages (personal thoughts, not writing guidance)! Didn't the author really realize that there is really no need to emphasize the fighting scene? It's really interesting that you wrote about various animals from the immortal world to assist farming. To be honest, there is really no need to write about conspiracy and conspiracy. There is absolutely no problem in transforming immortal farming into big fires, but small fires! ! ! ! She is obviously a warm-hearted person, so there is really no need to join those conspiracies and the heroine is not going to be invincible upgrade stream? In fact, there is no problem with the invincible upgrade, but half farming and half fighting makes people feel that they don't know the main direction of the heroine's story? I'm not a writing instructor, so I'll just tell you my opinion. I really don't want to give up on this article! ! !

There are more and more modern terms, and people in them never question that they all understand [face covering]

Very good very good very good looking

Not bad, pretty good-looking.

Watched a little bit, interesting