Don't Rush, First Emperor. I Have English Class to Attend

The writing style is very good, the plot setting and pacing are very good, and it is very good as a historical novel about Xiang Mengnu. Demining explanation: In this article, male impurity means that the male protagonist and the female protagonist have obviously communicated with each other, so they went to sleep with other women in the harem in the middle of the night, and then took the rouge scent from other women with them, and then ran back to sleep with the female protagonist in the middle of the night [face covering] I always thought that a man who is unclean means he is unclean before he meets the heroine, and then becomes devoted to her once he falls in love with her. Who knew this was the case, ah ah ah, after reading more than half of it, I found out that it was like this. It feels as uncomfortable as swallowing a fly. It's better to be [cover face]... If you can accept that the emperor is in love with someone else while he is truly in love with the heroine, then you can probably watch it [laughs]... A wife-biased type, the heroine has no subjective initiative, she really died for once In romance novels, even if the male protagonist is Qin Shihuang, he can't resist doing this. When I saw this part, I didn't look back [crying]. Although the author's writing is very good, I was still shocked [fear] If you can accept it, just watch it. The plot and emotional delicacy are still very acceptable...

It was my first time to watch this kind of heart-to-heart relationship. I saw that the male and female protagonists were very much in love with each other, and the male protagonist would sleep with another woman. After sleeping, he would hug the female protagonist to sleep with the smell of another woman. I felt very, very uncomfortable. In the past, I had seen the female protagonist not loving the male protagonist, and I wouldn't think anything of it. But this time, the female protagonist really loves the male protagonist. I feel that the female protagonist has completely lost herself, brainwashed herself, and forced herself to understand and accept it. It really hurts my heart when I see it [crying] [crying] [crying]. For the first time, I really hoped that it would be the ending of be, or that the Platonic love would last a lifetime, but the author said it was he, so I could only bear the pain of saying goodbye [crying], otherwise I would be really heartbroken and unbearable. The author's writing is really good!

Good-looking, realistic, and realistic Reading the comments, there are suggestions that the author comments on demining the female protagonist and not deleting it😰 This heroine is no longer a non-heroine, she is just a sadist [laughs awkwardly], especially the small ending suddenly becomes a small ending [laughing awkwardly] I'm talking about being realistic. I feel like the heroine's character is not very realistic [laughs awkwardly] Children from single-parent families generally mature earlier and become more independent. The heroine has a silly feeling of being depressed but generally being pampered and well protected [awkward laugh] I don't see any highlight in the heroine in the whole text. She may have a brighter personality in the early stage. When it comes to the torture part, people who read it have high blood pressure [laughing awkwardly], and she has a kind of beauty that requires hospitalization to treat her mental state [laughing awkwardly] I don't know how it will develop in the later period, but it's really uncomfortable [laughing awkwardly] How to fall in love with a mentally ill person (no derogatory meaning) [Awkward laugh] Let's heal ourselves mentally first before talking about mental illness. This relationship is really uncomfortable to watch. If the focus is not on love, the heroine's character growth line is weird. I feel that articles that satisfy personal preferences (for male protagonists) are only suitable for specific people.

It is well written, and it is a plot that I have never thought of. When I first saw the CP, I thought it was a cliché love story. I did not expect it to be like this. The character of the heroine is so real, it really is the psychology of a 17-year-old girl in a modern peaceful environment. Some of the collisions of concepts, the emotions that I understand but still feel uncomfortable are all too real.

Author, you really write very well! ! The plot is smooth, Qin The characters of Wang and modern high school students don't feel OOC at all, and the characters' conversation is how people of this era should behave. So far, I only see that King Qin has just returned to Qin, and I am looking forward to the next plot direction. I just read the comments and the author said that after falling in love with the heroine, there will still be unclean moments. Will the heroine still have unclean moments after she travels to ancient times, or will she gradually become the only heroine, or will all the concubines in the harem be balanced by the end? It seems that I am being narrow-minded, and I have read many chapters. When Qin unified the six kingdoms, my eyes would not focus on such trivial matters as the harem, jealousy, and purity over uncleanness. It was more about wars, cruel wars, refugees, and dead people. This kind of environment is not something we can understand. If we were not in that era, we would not have any real empathy. Seeing that the heroine was sent back to the Proton Mansion again, I felt that the character of the heroine was a bit inconsistent with modern times. I don't know if it is a change in personality caused by the difference between ancient and modern environments. Because the author wrote it this way, it seems that it can be understood this way, but I did find it a bit unacceptable.

This article... Emmm... I don't know what to say. Its advantages are really obvious. From the beginning when Brother Zheng traveled through time, Brother Zheng's personality charm was vividly described by the author. Then after traveling through time, Prince Dan was a proton, and his inner depression has always been suppressed. His powerlessness and helplessness were also written very well and in place. After Brother Zheng appeared again in the follow-up, his personality charm remained the same, and not only Brother Zheng's charm as an emperor through the ages, but also his charm in love as a romance hero when he interacted with the heroine was also fully reflected. But here lies the problem. In many cases, the male protagonist's personality charm is described by suppressing the female protagonist's personality charm. The heroine's growth has stagnated since she met Prince Dan after traveling through time. The heroine encountered many things along the way. From the beginning, she transformed into a refugee and walked to Handan, suffering from hunger all the way. She was almost forced by the refugees because of her appearance. She followed Yan Dan back to Yan. However, because of a small invention she made, Yan Dan was caught by Yan Dan's political enemies, and Yan Dan was driven to the Qin State to be denounced. (Although Yan Dan was also used as a hostage by the Qin State in history, this article is really because the heroine's little invention was caught.) He gave food to a little girl on the way, which resulted in the child being killed by other hungry refugees... Not to mention many things happened when he arrived in the Qin State. However, after going through so many things, the heroine's views on many things are still superficial. She complains to the hero and waits for Brother Zheng to accommodate her or patiently explain to her before she suddenly becomes enlightened... Every time after doing this, I really think: Wow, Brother Zheng is so handsome, domineering, revealing and smart, and he is doting and affectionate towards the heroine. He is so charming that I really fell in love with him! But... But the heroine's personality charm is completely gone! The whole characterization of the heroine now gives people the impression that after experiencing a lot of things, she still has no vigilance, is careless in doing things, treats problems superficially, is careless and dares to say anything to the hero, and sometimes speaks very childishly, even stupidly. Anyway, it feels like I don't know why Brother Zheng is so accommodating to the heroine and loves her so deeply [face covering] Then let's talk about the shining point that the heroine has shown in the few stories, kindness. At the beginning of the time travel, the heroine met an old refugee woman who took care of her along the way. Later, when she arrived in Handan, the heroine was picked up by Yan Dan and she casually asked about it. Yan Dan said that after giving the old woman a large amount of money, the heroine completely ignored her. There is also the child who was indirectly killed by the heroine. The heroine also collapsed on the spot and was sad for a while. There was no mention of it later, and the heroine did not grow at all because of it... Are you the only one who said that the heroine is kind? She was indeed kind, but she didn't make any efforts or changes when her compassion arose. Every time she mentioned it, felt sad, thought about it in her heart, and then the matter passed, so that the heroine's little sparkle seemed very superficial. Then there is another small problem: the relationship between Yan Dan and the heroine. Yan Dan doesn't know why he is so confident that he has saved the heroine, and the heroine is a native of Yan country and can be used by him. The heroine doesn't know why she is so confident. She has always been PUA by Yan Dan. Yan Dan didn't teach her to read or read, treating her as a piece of porcelain or an object. She can still maintain absolute trust in Yan Dan without any doubts. She even saw the women in Brother Zheng's harem being given away as gifts. She doesn't know anything, but she can be confident that Yan Dan will not treat her as a gift to Brother Zheng. Emmm... Anyway, having said so much, the advantages of this article are obvious, and the shortcomings are also obvious. I really liked this article when I read the chapter "Brother Zheng". The character creation of Brother Zheng is really charming, and the author's writing style is also very delicate. I felt really comfortable reading Shihuang Chui. But as the plot of the heroine's time travel slowly develops, the creation of the heroine in this article is really a failure! It's a very typical kind of person who can't do anything and has no ability to grow. She can only rely on the male protagonist and cannot live alone. You don't know why the male protagonist loves the female protagonist. Anyway, she is in love with the kind-hearted little white flower vase-type female protagonist in ancient novels. Damn, I just finished writing the long review and turned around to see Da Lei in the next chapter. Although there are some problems with the characterization of the heroine, I really like Zheng Ge's characterization. The author's writing style is also more delicate. The dialogue between ancient kings and politicians is not a big problem for me, a political loser and a loser of history. But it is quite interesting... As a result, I just finished the review and turned around to see the heroine dying. She obviously decided to accept Yan Dan as a gift to the King of Qin, but as soon as the First Emperor expressed his agreement in the main hall, the heroine immediately broke the guard and shouted to an ancient feudal monarch in front of all the ministers and envoys, "You can't do this!" "I should have thought that you are Ying Zheng, you are a tyrant!" ... Wow Wow? When I saw this paragraph, all I could think of was wow... Girl, are you not afraid of death at all? Do you only have love and love in your mind? [Pause face] Sure enough, those who are favored are confident? ... I vaguely thought I was watching some kind of bloody Mary Suven movie produced in 2010. This part is really too poisonous and shocking, I really can't stand it [face covering] I read the comments and some people said that they felt very depressed, and felt that the heroine was losing her personality as a modern person a little bit, and was integrating into the ancient feudal society that eats people... No, just the heroine's words, is this a sign of integrating into ancient society? [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

To be honest, it was a bit boring at the beginning, and I thought about giving up the article in the middle, but after reading the title of the table of contents, I persisted in the end, and I am glad that I did not miss a good article. The subject matter is very new. Maybe someone has written something similar before but I haven't seen it. In the beginning, it was a journey from ancient times to the present, but it was not always in the modern era. In the early stage, I kept studying and there was no sign of feelings. The progress was too slow. I thought that was all. As a result, the heroine's illness broke out later, and she also traveled to ancient times. The heroine's mother is really good in this part. I thought she didn't like the heroine that much, but it turned out that she is really good and maternal love is great. The heroine travels to ancient times and wanders all the way. The writing is actually relatively perfunctory, but I prefer to watch this fast-paced story, including the fact that the heroine needs to cover up her beauty, or she is not hungry, and it is too rare for an old woman to treat her well. When I arrived in Handan, I didn't get better so quickly. It turned out that relatives were just relatives. In the end, the heroine was taken in by Gongzi Dan. I also know it was because of the jade pendant. This was originally the author's foreshadowing. I also know that the reason why he took the heroine in is that he wants her to work as a spy for King Qin. I know that, so I am even sadder because I know you will fall in love with her. To be honest, I was still a little disgusted after seeing the latest. Maybe modern people's minds can't stand the male protagonist coming back to hug the female protagonist after sleeping with someone else. . . And often. . . Even if you fall asleep, don't come back. Just stay there. Feeling good about the heroine day by day

It is a masterpiece in the middle and early stages. The words and sentences are concise and very comfortable at the same time. Especially the part where the male and female protagonists are in modern times is simply amazing; Unfortunately, after the assassination of the emperor, the heroine had too much inner drama, and the writing began to become flat and straightforward, giving the impression that iced Coke turned into flat Coke. In addition, the book's portrayal of the emperor's personality and aura is very three-dimensional (although there is an abstract plot of drilling into a box, but the overall flaws are not concealed), and the description of the supporting characters (Zhang Liang, Li Si, etc.) Is also remarkable, without turning him into a tool man. The last interesting point is the author's description of the operating logic of the emperor's harem, which is very novel.

I read it with novel ideas at first, but after reading it I was surprised that the author's writing is good. Emperor Qin fits my imagination very well, including his attitude towards love. I have a small suggestion. I hope that the author can make the heroine grow up more in the future. Although the character design I want is not very consistent with the heroine's character, I am thinking that if the heroine can be less soft-hearted, can she avoid being sad? If you can understand the situation, can you see Yan Dan's selfishness from the beginning and be less hurt? Of course, writing this way is likely to result in the heroine finally becoming a member of the ancient times and being swallowed up by the ancient times. But if the heroine only changes part of it, and her inner thoughts that truly belong to the new era are not corroded, will she live better there?

It is the kind of book that I want to have that is both logical and emotional. The heroine is a high school student who can better bring the idea of ​​a peaceful and prosperous world to the First Emperor. It is both realistic and ideal. I like it very much [Already Planted] [Add One to Bookshelf]