Volleyball Boy: Disaster for Gamers

It feels like it was written by a student. The writing style is a bit immature, but it is surprisingly good. Whether it is the plot or the characters, especially the original plot characters, they are not OOC at all, and the original characters are well integrated.

The male protagonist, Lu Ren, is a typical gamer and a middle school student. He has a very high opinion of the game, talks a lot and likes to talk about game terms. The only plug-in is probably the automatic analysis of the movement trajectory of the volleyball formed by playing games for many years. His early foundation is very poor, but with his "game understanding", he can always predict the landing point of the opponent's volleyball, and his character design is very good. There is a heroine. There is a first kiss in Chapter 67. Her childhood sweetheart is the heroine, named Yazhi. There are not many ambiguous plots. They are usually simple bickerings similar to childhood sweethearts, and the majority of the plot is about volleyball. Other teammates in the plot also suffer from some secondary diseases. You can watch it.

It's quite good. The descriptions of characters, events and other emotional scenes are all very delicate. There are no messy descriptions of women, and the male protagonist is not forced to be a superman. This is a book with great potential.

It's very beautiful, with self-designed characters and CPs. The connection between daily life and competition is very good, and it doesn't feel too abrupt. The writing style is also very interesting, but there are too few. I was fascinated by it, but suddenly it disappeared.

In fact, I am quite optimistic about this book, especially the previous plot and the characterization of the protagonist. However, these days, either the author has run out of ideas or has failed to prepare. The game is either a tie or a tie. I can understand it with grinding them, but Starlight Future's team and grinding them are completely different styles. Can this also be divided equally? To be honest, even if Karasuno loses, I think it's normal. This is how sports competitions are, but I really don't understand what you wrote about being tied with everyone. I hope the author can read this comment, and I'm looking forward to the subsequent changes.

It's good to watch, the protagonist has a distinct personality, and there's no plot that deliberately steals all the characters' roles. The daily line is also well written, and there is no big deviation in the plot line of each character. The addition of the main character makes me feel like Karasuno has his own place. It's very good to watch. I've read a lot of fanfics. The author's book gives me the same feeling as the book of Demon Slayer Iibashira. There is no deviation from the original work but it has its own characteristics. The author will update me with a hundred chapters soon. This is not enough.

It looks good. I hope the protagonist can improve his basic attributes quickly. He has no sense of presence when playing the protagonist against Qingcheng. Well, except for the fact that the 3v3 protagonist at the beginning really didn't have any sense of presence. When he teamed up with the king, he could play a few games, but later he basically had no sense of presence. It felt like he was the same without him. In the latest chapter, he made a mistake in catching the ball and gave the opponent a chance. No, bro, where is your combat effectiveness in 3v3, and your bug-level prediction was eaten by a dog?

It may be slightly flawed in the eyes of many people, but for me, this book is the best sports fanfic I have read recently. I hope it can be completed so that everyone, both the protagonist and the volleyball players, can have a perfect ending.

It's quite interesting, but after graduating from Dadi and the others, it feels like it's speeding up. It feels like the book is almost over, and the protagonist of the book doesn't continue to play volleyball. I don't know how the author will arrange it later.

The only normal sexual orientation volleyball boy fanfic I've seen on Tomato

Ignore the occasional change from the third person to the first person, and it may also be about the psychological activities of the characters without any punctuation or hints. Overall, it is quite good. I feel like I haven't seen a volleyball boy fanfic in a long time.

It looks good, the structure is clear and not obtrusive. I still want to read it after watching it. It's not enough, brother, please give me more

The writing is not bad, but sometimes the interweaving of the first and third person affects the perception a bit. If it is a psychological activity, why not add some symbols to distinguish it? Come on

It's very good. It has the feeling of watching anime. The characters are not OOC. The protagonist does not steal the scenes from Hinata and Kageyama. It has a data streaming function similar to grinding. The transition between daily life and competition is smooth. Also, there is no scene where the protagonist must win. The best thing is that there is an original childhood sweetheart heroine. It is very good. The competition field and daily life are intertwined.

I have watched the top volleyball fanfics, and the foreshadowing is so good, coupled with the interesting character design of the protagonist. People who have watched Little Volleyball simply cannot refuse this kind of protagonist who has a strange talent and a step-by-step growth! Unlike many sports fans who rely on the system to add points to grow, or no growth at all, the protagonist of this book has a strong 0-1 logic. It can be clearly felt that the protagonist's numerical values ​​​​are average, but the state of the mechanical supermodel is integrated into the main line of the original work, and there is a lot to watch!

I haven't finished it yet. It's very good. The protagonist is leveling up in the early stages. Leveling up actually takes a long time. Reading this book directly or listening to the book are both good choices. I have no problem listening to the book. Reading it makes me feel like watching Volleyball Boys again.

A book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it has a strong anime feel, the male protagonist is likeable, and the plot is interesting. The disadvantage is that the professionalism needs to be improved, but this is not something that my colleagues ask for. So the overall shortcomings are not hidden, but I don't know what the original author thinks of the originality of this book. I only commented on one point. I felt that the part about parents was a bit slow, and it was enough to have childhood memories.

Although I haven't finished watching it yet, I think it's quite interesting.

It's okay to watch. I like the protagonist who doesn't know the plot of the original work. But the protagonist's presence is a bit low. I feel like it's only 30-40%? Although I know that the current position of the protagonist is a bug and that the protagonist team cannot easily rise to the top, but since it is set up like this, I still hope to come up with a better solution. After reading 50% of the original plot, the proportion is a bit large. I don't know what will happen next. It's pretty good to watch. The pace gets much better later on, and you can see the protagonist's involvement. Sure enough, volleyball only looks good when you're passionate about it! It's just that a lot of details are not very well-founded. It's one of the rare volleyball articles in 🍅 that's quite readable. Please write it quickly.

The content of the book, detailed descriptions, and plot characterization are all very good. Except for the titles given by some people, the game scores, and the situations or positions corresponding to some names, there are no other problems.

Very complete story! I was really touched when I saw everyone grow up and live a good life and play well in the game😭 (Personally/especially when I see Oikawa Toru still working hard for his dream... Ah, there will eventually be a place for Oikawa Toru on the world stage!

It's okay. The heroine is a manager in Karasuno. I personally feel that there are too many scenes and it doesn't fit well with the passionate sport of a volleyball boy. The rest is okay, and the protagonist's character is good.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's so good that I finished it in one go

It was pretty good at first, but there were some mistakes later on that affected the look and feel, but overall it was pretty good.

I rarely leave reviews, but this is a very good fanfic

I like this style of writing very much. It's a very relaxed style in this theme.

It's not procrastinating, it doesn't have too many words, it's interesting, the main character is not pure and cool, it improves through hard work

Yes, pig's feet have a very distinct personality, a bit like the cat in Tokyo, but they have their own characteristics.

It is a part of the style of video game cafes that has been incorporated into the book. To be honest, I don't understand why you always want to weaken the protagonist team when writing novels. Originally, you were trying to beat them up. Baize Ze also changed from arrogant to confused. Then after the protagonist team strengthened, although they could win, it felt like a bit of a back and forth. It's true that Momozawa in the junior volleyball game was completely ruined. He was originally talented and then was stunned, but he kind of fell in love with the sport of volleyball, and then he went to training, and then he met Hinata, and then he was inspired. This series is a kind of upward motivation, and it clearly describes why these people like volleyball. Then look at what you write now. It feels really weird. I really feel like I have nothing to read in the last few chapters.