[Heroine to be decided] [Four brothers sworn as brothers] [Lei Yi has the power of the Thunder God] [No joining the crew, no stealing people] [At first, he’s only here to recruit people, not follow Luffy’s sailing route]
“Hey, Dadan, take this kid too.”
“What?! You bastard, Garp! Do you think this place is a daycare?!”
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“Hey, Lei Yi! One day, we’re going to sail these seas, free as we please!”
At Marine Headquarters in Marineford, just as Luffy faced the Three Admirals to save Ace, dark clouds began to blanket the land.
“When thunder rolls through the clouds and lightning illuminates the earth, I come with the storm, bearing the wrath of the gods!”
High above, within the gloomy clouds, appeared a power capable of turning the world upside down.
“Thousand Lightning Birds! Thunder God’s Heavenly Flash!”
It's so good! The writing is smooth and concise, without any awkwardness or dragging. The protagonist can solo one of the Five Elders by chapter 20, and he's already killed one. And since he didn't eat the Rumble-Rumble Fruit, only absorbed its power, he doesn't have the fatal weakness of being afraid of water. The style is funny when it needs to be funny, and serious when it needs to be serious.
If the story has multiple female leads, could you please include the Empress, Weiwei, Bai Xing, Bonnie, and Uta? If it has multiple female leads, please consider it. If it only has one female lead, then disregard what I said.
Not bad, not bad, a great start. Now we'll see what happens next. Finished it in an hour, so satisfying!
So far, it's been pretty good. The ideas are on point, and the combat power is maxed out, which is very satisfying. I hope it gets even stronger later, although it's still young and hasn't reached its peak yet. It's not just about being a babysitter. So far, the only female leads I've seen are Boa Hancock. I hope we can get Yamato and Shirahoshi too. I like these three.
The camera was quite high, making it a comfortable viewing experience 😄. The male lead likes blue tones; could it be Vivi?
It could be shortened further, ending in 100 chapters, leaving only Im. But judging from the situation, Im won't make it either. So, we might as well head straight to the moon, develop spaceship technology, wipe out the surrounding space pirates, and launch an imperial expedition.
Building your own power requires a strong female protagonist. Powerful figures include the Empress, Yamato, and Reiju. Ain, rewind 12 years. With pure gold, all the peak forms of the old era are instantly usurped, dominating the server. Incredibly satisfying!
It's alright; 6000 hours of reading time is no problem. And I didn't even listen to audiobooks to accumulate reading time. It was incredibly enjoyable. There are still some drawbacks. The writing style is a little amateurish; I need to work on it. This is encouragement for newcomers.
Does it have a Devil Fruit ability? If not, the World Government would be a complete guinea pig! [Shocked]
I should be able to finish One Piece soon, then I can jump straight to the tech tree and go to other planets! 🍉