Your Majesty, I'm Going Home. You're the One Who Transmigrated

The writing is good and the plot flows smoothly. Although the writing is not good, it is just a problem of the author's lack of accumulation. I find this world and the protagonist very interesting. But I still think that in fact, the female protagonists only need the Empress and Qingmei. If there are others, it will reduce the impression. After all, the original introduction only contains the Empress. It is okay for Qingmei to appear early, but it will be annoying if there are more.

Basically it's okay, I can watch it. The number of heroines is expected to be around 4. Currently, the eldest heroines are Suzaku, Xuanwu, and Baihu. If you want to write an emotional scene, try to live and die with the male protagonist. The male protagonist's character is a bit of a big love. The current shortcoming is that he is afraid that if the male protagonist desperately saves the country, he will be framed in the future. I personally think that it is best to advance and retreat together. If there is a kind of self-sacrifice, boundless love, and heroism, the people you save will always be framed and betrayed by various incidents, and those who do nothing and watch silently, the rescue will be in vain.

Overall, the backend is not bad, but the details are not well handled. In terms of emotions, I think just two female protagonists are enough, not too much. I think the emotional line between the empress and the male protagonist is very well written, but I just don't know how another author would write it? The plot is still very novel. There are a few minor issues at the beginning, but that's fine. The more you read later, the more you get into it. Then there are too few updates. When will a reward mechanism for additional updates be introduced?

Top-grade grass jelly is not a pornographic film. Advantages: So far, it is not poisonous at all. 1. It is refreshing and satisfying. The storyline is not overwhelming and the description of the fight scenes is not simple. 2. There is no plot to give away the heroine. The heroines are all well portrayed. Although the plot of Xiao Qingmei has not yet begun to enter the main drama, it will definitely not disappoint. It's just a matter of word count Highly recommended by old bookworms. If you make any mistakes, just complain. Absolutely top-notch articles. Stacked Armor (Although I don't have senior qualifications in Tomato, I have read almost all of the Japanese manga and comics about Niku, galgame, and I have a deep understanding of various types of Tomato articles.) Personal opinions about the author: The writing in the early stage is impeccable, I hope the plot will be stable and won't fall off in the future. Regarding the role of the president, I think the discussion in the chapter makes it clear. Since she already has the smell of a loser, I feel there is no need to make her the heroine. (About the plot of the president is a personal opinion) Then my suggestion is to have two female protagonists. The two plots are easier to write. If you write too many female protagonists, readers will easily think that it is a stallion story and a plot about giving away the girl. The male protagonist is a very brave general. In his previous life, he was devoted to the empress. In this life, he is also favored by Xiao Qingmei. I am very much looking forward to the contest between the empress and Qingmei in Shura Field. If we write about a female protagonist again, we have to consider whether we can be on the same starting line as the two of them. Everyone agrees that the male protagonist is not a playboy and only cares about beauties. I hope the author will give me a reply after reading it. After all, there are not many articles like this that can make my skin crawl. Come on, author. By the way, I read it early in the morning and wrote the review. There may be some problems in the review. I hope you can understand.

The subject matter seems okay, there are many girls, but I can't tell in the early stage whether this pit will explode in time. Qingmei is quite dangerous, and the author's writing skills are not good, which is a big poison. The update is too slow, and it is difficult to get started as a new book. At present, the actions of the characters are relatively logical.

I don't understand why such a good book has such a low rating. It does give me the same feeling as when I read The Versatile Mage. It's just too short and I'll finish it soon. I don't really want to catch up on updates every day [face covering]

I can't enjoy such a beautiful book alone, and sit back and ward off disasters for me in the future.

The writing is very good, like a great author, but there are too many emotional lines. I suggest you write more about battles and wits. There are basically no surprises and you can read it without thinking.

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The character positioning and structure are indeed a bit unreasonable. It can be seen that the author is not very experienced, but the climax plot is good and has a gripping plot. It is also a book worth reading. I believe that the author who can write such a plot will make his flaws better. It's awesome.