A Moon Accounting Journey Starting at Company H

Overall, it is good, with a humorous and interesting style. The book starts with black beasts, which is novel enough to arouse interest in reading. However, the writing style can only be said to be average and needs further polishing. The transition of some plots is a little problematic. The development speed of the plot is a bit urgent. Many things are mentioned in one stroke. You can add a little more description, but not too much.

It is a very beautiful novel. The author's writing style is not good, but his cleverness makes up for this. Moreover, although there is no label of porridge in this book, the shadow of porridge is revealed everywhere. The protagonist is Mulseth's flow type ability. She is powerful but not very showy [Punch Out]

Overall [thinking] this book is pretty good to read [laughs] What a pity: [covering face] The title of the book is "The Monthly Planning Journey Starting from H Company" But the protagonist's combat power increased too quickly in the early stage [face covering] almost quickly passed the most distinctive part of the book, jumping directly to the Lobotomy Corporation period [eating melon] [Reminder: The following content contains minor spoilers] I think the most distinctive part of this book [thinking] - becoming a black beast and a blood demon, and discovering that you can avoid the price (the protagonist's golden finger) The author did not ask the protagonist to further his studies in this area... I think that if he has this kind of ability, he should specifically collect blood constitutions and self-improvement methods that have side effects, but in the end he didn't... [Grievance] So much so that later in the smoke battle, the protagonist almost died, and the author temporarily cheated and gave the protagonist a water form (immune to physical damage, can be cloned) [rolls eyes] There are also content that can become the characteristics of this book: the protagonist seems to be quite interesting in telling stories (making the tuner and minions curious about the ending of the story) (when becoming a minister, you can focus on describing the chat between the protagonist and the lock mother) [smile] The middle protagonist who becomes the commander of the smoke war can also be well described. (But this is more or less a test of the author's ability [eating melon]) Finally, five-star praise, please encourage me (after all, it is still a new book, and the data is quite important). Come on, author! [Love][love][love]

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of m4s would have died if they hit A1 and strafed. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the description of the characters is very good! This book has an interesting plot and a clear system. The writing is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing the gourd boy to save the Transformers. The excitement and fear in Kong's heart are vividly displayed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song is right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone over the cliff to fight a hot battle with Linghu Chong, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting.

As a newbie, the writing is very good, at least it looks like a city. I can write more original plots in the future, and more [Thinking] Although the protagonist is growing up a bit too fast, I can use a little more knife, and I suggest you give the protagonist a bit of sharpening. The protagonist is not brainless, I am already very happy [Chigua]

This novel is great, I like it very much Then I can make a wish. I hope the heroine has Lock Mom, Angela, Xiao Tang, I wrote here first and I didn't expect the others.

The overall writing style has a sense of black humor, the kind that can make you laugh out loud. I also feel that it contains a lot of memes. I don't know many of them. Anyway, it's very good-looking and worth recommending.

Good reviews. After reading so many time-travel novels, I finally have a reasonable one. Just kidding, one second you are in the city, and the next second your minions are at your door. I still don't understand how those time-travelers escape the surveillance of the spy! Let me give you a reminder here, it is another book with the main plot.

A+, your works shine like urban stars. The starry sky that shines in the city cannot describe your creative power. Even ring finger masters have to stop and appreciate it. Ring Ring will remember this moment.

It's hard to imagine that the incredible extent of a book lies not in its content, but in the fact that its author has ascended to the level of a god. Let's talk about the conclusion first: People who like surfing and have fun can easily read the content of this book. Others who prefer detailed descriptions and high-level portraits can stay on the sidelines and think twice before taking action according to their ability. People's words: The level of ordinary online writing, the author's epic meme volume. If you don't like it, you can run away first. If you like the writing style, you can run away now. Whether it is from the chapter release or the specific content, we can find that the plot line has always been in a helpless state of wanting to do more but the protagonist does not have a second one. It is undeniable that filling in the knife is the obsession of fan authors, but as long as you want to fill it in, you have to throw away the setting first. The author probably felt this later and let it go completely. As a companion of the plot, he moved for the sake of movement / As long as I pretend to be dead, the main setting will not be lost jpg. /It's a pity that the transition is not enough. I hope the quality can be higher in the future so that I won't criticize the writing problem. ^_^