After Failing to Redeem Upper Moon Two

The writing is really good, the plot is not obtrusive, and the emotions are not obtrusive. She has a good impression of Xiao He, and liking Xiao He is as simple as breathing. After all, she is the sun herself. There were no cheats in the early stage, so the value of force was not outrageous. Like like

The heroine has a very good personality, and I feel sorry for her experiences with Tong Mo and Yi Wo Zuo. Although she was hurt later, she is still very kind to everyone, and she is still a very kind little girl. She gets along well with everyone, and it feels very warm. What is surprising is the line with Yanzhu Aoyue. Few fans write about them. The big family is particularly loving, maybe because of watching Ma Ao. I have a lot of Yue, and I have a different kind of feeling for him. I hope that the Demon Slayer Team is in order. The butterfly sisters don't die, Saneya's mother doesn't die, Tantan's family doesn't die, and everyone can be happy and kill Muzan together [crying] Of course, it's also delicious to flirt with Muzan [laughing] I think it's a bit confusing, but it's just one sentence, it's beautiful and I love watching it! Come on, write more! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The heroine created by the author is really touching. It's not that you like her out of nowhere, but like running water, it slowly flows into your heart, making people love her from the bottom of their hearts. The author is very careful in describing every story. The emotions of the protagonist in the main story are natural, and the character is also very full. She is a sun-type heroine [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Small stones are not the type that are stunning at first glance, but like the gentle wind in spring and the warm sun in winter, they slowly infiltrate the heart with the gentleness of long flowing water. Her charm lies in just the right amount of toughness and softness. In the world of demon slayers with swords and shadows, she protects those around her in the warmest way. This "slow warmth" actually makes her image more vivid and moving. The author is equally attentive to polishing the story. The main plot of the rescue journey and the emotional context of the side characters flow naturally without any deliberate dramatic conflicts. The growth arc of each character is clearly visible, and the emotional advancement is smooth, allowing readers to truly feel the character's courage to choose gentleness in desperate situations. This work not only fulfills the expectations of Demon Slayer fans, but also uses a gentle and healing core to make us believe that true salvation is always like the sun shining through the clouds, dispelling the haze bit by bit.

This book is really, really well written, and there is nothing OOC in the book. I'd rate it as the best book I've ever read on Tomato. The character traits of each character are written vividly (especially Zhuo Yue! I used to hate Zhuo Yue very much. He is selfish, conceited, and does all kinds of evil in order to survive. But hateful people also have pitiful points. This is the first time I see the world from his perspective. Although he is hateful, he is also very pathetic.) (By the way, the teacher really didn't plan to write a separate book about Zhuo Yue! How can the writing be so good!!!) It's not a loss if you invest in it! Our Xiaoshi is loved by everyone! Forgive me for confusing the logical order orz. Anyone who doesn't watch Demon Slayer can give this book a try! If the teacher is willing to publish a single book to redeem Zhuo Yue, I will really open a hundred trumpets to support it! [Love] [Love] [Love] It's simply a miracle! [Love][love][love] The teacher really, really, really doesn't think that one day in the future, I will suddenly find out that he has actually opened a miracle book for Zhu Yueshan!

A very nice Demon Slayer fanfic. I really like Qinghe and gentle people. I was recommended by others when I was in a book shortage, but why did this book only have an 8.4 Score when I read it? Is this book rated at least 9 points or above? ! ! (Personal review, don't criticize if you don't like it) I stayed up two days and nights to read it, but it just wasn't enough, so now I'm in a book shortage again [crying] [crying] [crying]. The author's writing style is also very good! So can you release hundreds more chapters and scare me to death [shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Damn it, I didn't see it, the rating is now 9! I'm so happy for you [Blowing a kiss]. After reading the Demon Slayer fanfic written in large letters, I feel like I'm going to be recommended by everyone. It's well written. Everyone's emotions are sincere and full. Falling in love with Xiao Shi Qinghe is so simple [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Super pretty, I especially like the younger sister, the heartthrob is so sweet 😋😋😋, Yuanyi will become Master Xiaoshi's dog 😋😋😋, I'll spank you if you don't obey, and the boss will also accept Mu Pai 🥵🥵🥵, the writing is so refreshing and bitter, accept everyone in Demon Slayer 🥰🥰🥰, by the way One mouthful, when will Yan Sheng have a role? The role of the third brother is also very exciting🥰🥰🥰, the puppy who obediently waits for its owner to come home, the male preference is in full force😚😚 😚, so astringent, so astringent, spank spank spank🥰🥰🥰, the fragrance is so confusing already😚😚😚, can't wait for the main story😘😘😘😘, come on, boss

The second creators eat glass shards and spit out diamonds. After all, they have spent their whole lives looking for an eye that sheds tears for their works. Oh my god, teacher, it is so beautiful. There is nothing superfluous in the portrayal of the heroine. Falling in love with the heroine is as easy as breathing. The whole story is very rhythmic and there is no sloppiness or Mary Sue. Teacher Demon Slayer fandom is amazing like you! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such clear and refreshing writing. I've never written a review for any book on Tomato. Your writing is really great! ! ! !

It's really super pretty! Qinghe is a succubus (for sure!) And the interactions are adorable! Watching this makes people's hearts feel as warm as if they were covering themselves with blankets and warming themselves by the fire in winter, holding a bowl of sweet but not greasy and stomach-warming ginger soup in their hands, sipping it in small sips while squinting their eyes comfortably, www. Qinghe is the angel who deserves to be favored! (Again!) Although there are some knives interspersed between the warmth, it also enriches the character of Xiao Shi Qinghe. She is strong, brave, and quirky with a gentle undertone. But when she came here, when she came to a world that was completely unfamiliar to her, she was just a child who had to go to the hospital to pass the pediatrician exam. She got an A in English for the first time - hoping to be praised by her mother. She is just a child with rewards and recognition... She will also be afraid and cowardly, but I can witness the growth of Qinghe in the process of watching and reading between the lines. Qinghe, Qinghe, has never been forced to grow, but a child who has been watered and grown up by love. She uses her own way to redeem others and loves others the way she is loved, just like the breeze, gentle and tough. So I hope the author can keep writing! Because it's really super pretty! (Ps: Actually this is my first time to write a long review... There may be some word order inaccuracies, please forgive me) (ps: As long as the author doesn't give up, I will keep reading! Hmm!)

The plot of this book is really delicate, but the title of the book written by the author is a bit confusing. At first glance, it feels like a traditional complete redemption novel, but the author's writing is different. The author's entire plot is very new, and the writing style is good. It does not have an overly exaggerated heartthrob aura. It reaches just the right point, has the right emotional extension, and the characters are not OOC. It is indeed in line with the direction of the author's redemption novel. The main reason is that the author's descriptions are really good, and many of the sentences describing the protagonist are very suitable. All in all, it is very beautiful and exciting. If you want to read it, you can try it. The main reason is that I really think it looks good.

Generally, I don't read much about the books of Shen She Lian (I haven't read this one yet) and Koma Lian. Unfortunately, I passed by the bookstore too many times and I was amazed by just one bite! What Tianlaosi wrote is so delicious! I watched a lot of All have serious OOC, but this one is very natural and the emotions are handled very delicately. Whether it is sticking with the pillars or hating the ghosts and the sea, it is very fragrant~ What I like most is the narrative rhythm of Rouse. The memories are interspersed and the transitions are very suitable for every place. The montage technique and the accumulation of emotions make me feel so happy and delicious! ! Looking forward to the update of the boss (holding bowl. JPG)