Transformed into a Cool Beauty: Awkward Days of Urban Pure Romance

Innocent and proactive puppy VS strong outside, gentle and mature big sister is the most delicious😋

Tomato's high-quality changing marriage novels do not have the classic procrastination and pulling plot, and the protagonist is not a girly kind (the other changing marriage novels I have read, to put it bluntly, are just women's stories with the label of changing marriage, and I can't read them). This one is unique. Anyway, I haven't read other books. If there are other genres, you can recommend them. Three small ads every day support the author! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Oh my god, it's so beautiful. It's been a long time since I've seen such a long, rhythmic, ambiguous and tumultuous emotional line. I stayed up late and finished reading it in one go. It's so beautiful. The writing is smooth and natural. It's more realistic. It's a very healthy adult love. The title is so catchy. The naming style of Yang Persimmon almost made me miss this good article. The two people have very upright views. You can also see the author's thinking in the article. He must have some experience. The words I can write, the feeling of narrating them is very warm. Lu and Mo, the two characters are so three-dimensional, so well matched, so good. I fell vertically into the pit of sister-brother love. Whether they are older or younger, they have a sense of life and sexual tension. The author has just the right touch of the ambiguous and warm atmosphere in their daily relationship. As the protagonist of the story about changing marriage, Mo Yanqing is very, very charming, and I completely fall in love with this soul. When I watched the end, I felt that Mo was so unique. His charm could not be defined by gender-related words. Lu Ye said that he loved the soul inside him the most. I like their sincere and profound love so much. In the middle of the night, the more I watched, the more energetic I became. It's so good, so good, no need to say more about its greatness. I have read hundreds of novels in the past 26 years, and the emotional line of this one is my favorite. Both of them are very considerate of each other, communicate and resolve conflicts head-on, and can feel their strong love for each other from every move they make. The most awesome thing is that the writing of "Spreading Dog Food" is very natural and does not make me feel embarrassed. On the contrary, I feel more and more energetic. I particularly like this young couple. It's so healthy and wonderful. I really like this kind of realistic cookie. I still want to read their daily life of 100,000 words. I look forward to the follow-up. Can I still wait for the update? The wedding has not been held yet, and the biggest secret has not been revealed. I also want to read their daily life after the baby is born. I hope the author will update this book again in my lifetime.

It is really a very good work, very warm and loving. Although the title of this book is very greasy and has the feeling of female romance, but after reading it seriously, I found that the author's writing style is very fresh and very touching, especially the heroine's character creation and plot psychological control are really very powerful. It is really a good book that was delayed by the title! Highly recommended.

Objectively speaking, the writing is fluent, relaxed and relaxed, the description is delicate, the writing style is excellent, the plot arrangement is complete, the relationship between the characters is handled in accordance with basic logic, and the characters have distinct personalities, and there are no repeated characters. It is a novel worth reading among the novels about changing marriage. Subjectively speaking, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet! And the heroine really feels like a mother. The author directly asked the heroine to raise her young sister as a daughter, which is not poisonous and directly gives the heroine the trait of motherhood without affecting the rhythm of the writing. Moreover, many details in the article show the gentle maternal qualities of the heroine. I can only say that this is a woman who can be my mother. To be honest, Mo Qingyan is completely on top of my xp. (I would like to add here that the heroine's character is very well created, she is gentle, firm, resilient, maternal, reliable, and independent, but she is also carefree, nervous, and open-minded like a man.) Then there is the issue of the heroine's good brother. Before watching it, I was worried about how to deal with this point. As a result, the author marginalized him from the beginning and would not mention him except to provide an opportunity for sexual transformation and to make him appear when necessary to ensure logic (for example, the heroine would let him appear in her mind when she was in urgent need of money). After the heroine and the hero have basically established their relationship, she will explain his affairs and arrange a partner for him. This completely avoids the problem of everyone looking at this good brother and thinking about pairing him up with the heroine. Then there is the heroine's sister, her apparent daughter. She is very cute, super cute. Just by looking at the description, you can tell that she is cold and cute. This kind of obedient, sensible and precocious child is the most lovable. In addition, some of the supporting characters are very charming, not industrial saccharine, and there are no living people except the male and female protagonists. In this book, you can feel the vitality of people other than the male and female protagonists, such as Lin Xiyan, a cross-dressing boss, and Fang Xinyue, a tough-talking girl who talks about wanting money to find a rich husband, but in fact only dares to bribe the little boy downstairs with starch to talk to them.

Yes, the overall feeling is pretty good to me. The female protagonist is older than the male protagonist and brings a mature charm. The male protagonist is a bit childish, but the contrast is there. There is nothing to criticize in the plot. The overall rhythm is fast, and the description and expression of the drama are also on point. However, the heroine's relationship can be properly followed up. There are now more than 40 chapters. The sweetness is appropriate and not excessive. The author's skills are still acceptable. Then there is the plot. The heroine is a social animal after being suppressed by society, so she has a strong receptive ability. This One point is very good, the audience will not have any drama when watching it, and the second is the heroine's sister, that is, the daughter. The heroine's only worry is her. In terms of follow-up, the asthma can be cured as soon as possible. After all, it is not for the elderly, this can still be done. Overall, my evaluation is that the book is better than the same type. The rhythm is also better than the same type. The plot is moderate. The author can basically give it a rating of 7.8 Or above. After all, there are not many people who read this type of book on Tomato, so stick with it.

Turning into a big sister and teasing Xiao Chunan, turning into a heroine, she should be a strong big sister who understands men best than men [laughter]

Among the novels I read about the marriage-changing genre, it was the best. It was very simple, not procrastinating, plain and sweet. It was as good as another novel I read in which the male and female protagonists exchange locked relationships, get married and have children. I like sweets more, and I can accept both the opening knife and the middle knife, but the ending must leave no regrets. It is very good. Keep it up [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's super good-looking, with a straight female protagonist and a young male protagonist. I wonder if the male protagonist will become darker later on [laughs]. It seems that the author has experienced society (beating), so the content has a sense of reality, not like some children playing house. Five Star Smecta

This is my first book review. By the way, the first time I went to another place was Jiangmen. It was the first time I saw such a mature and charming transformation heroine. Little Momo must be happy [crying]