Wangwangda's Ninth Book

It's okay, but the author probably hasn't lost weight.

I don't have any problem, but if I don't write about telekinesis control, I will definitely get negative reviews. Of course, it may be me, the Crimson King, because I only passed it once, so I may not have seen it. Furthermore, if it is always a dull daily life, it will definitely not work. You need to introduce some changes and have surprises. From what I can see so far, it is still relatively daily, and it may not be spread out yet.

Not youthful at all, I'm sure this is indeed an adult traveling to a different world

It doesn't feel like reading a novel, it feels like playing a game. Everyone is communicating with each other, but the protagonist doesn't know. Various supporting characters will come out to provide information or hints when needed.

Come on, the author, he must be a new author. It seems that he is relatively young. Many of the female protagonists' portrayals are shallow, but they are not too bad. I hope that the follow-up can make the characters more vivid. Secondly, if there is no plot to write before the weight loss is successful, the time span can be larger and the pace faster, such as a week later, a month later, etc. At the same time, you can also write about the male protagonist's feelings during the exercise, such as push-up breakthroughs and other details.