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Although it's only a little bit written, the storyline, writing style, rhetoric, scene descriptions, and visual composition are clearly not those of a novice. This typical plot of someone being rich, buying things, and incidentally attracting girls is handled with ease. Looking forward to the unfolding story! 🤔🤔🤔 [Requesting more updates!]

The writing is very immersive and realistic, making the reader feel as if they are there – a testament to good writing. The character, having acquired wealth, doesn't squander it but instead uses the improved circumstances to do good deeds for others – a commendable value. However, the excessive number of female admirers and romantic entanglements makes it a bit awkward to read.

I read about a hundred chapters before commenting. The first few chapters were decent, but the later ones were really good, especially the sections on business development and interpersonal relationships. I feel like the author must have experience in these areas in real life. I hope the author can maintain this level of writing quality. Also, please update more often; one update a day isn't enough! Keep it up! 👍

Two days later, I read the latest chapter. So far, there are three major turning points: first, the initial cautiousness and tentative exploration after obtaining the system; second, the recklessness and actions after acquiring a large sum of money, doing what every man wants to do but dares not; and third, the actions taken to realize the idea of ​​benefiting the people after establishing a…

…The first few chapters were pretty good; the author seems worldly-wise, not some poor loser writing wish-fulfillment novels on a 3,000 yuan a month 😂. So far, the writing is acceptable; I need to read further to see what comes next.

The first few pages seemed average, but it gradually picked up some substance later on. The logic was clear, and the writing was decent! Objectively speaking, I'd give it 4 stars. Keep it up!

Is it possible that after the protagonist starved to death, his parents burned paper money for him? The reason these tasks are so simple is because he had unfulfilled wishes and remained in the mortal world, and those tasks were all to dispel his resentment so that he could be sent into reincarnation, which is why the story in this book was created.

Not overly arrogant, the character is well-developed.

The beginning was a simple, lighthearted read, which I initially skimmed, but the later business intrigue really drew me in. The writing was flawless, but I wasn't entirely convinced by the emotional aspects. To quote a review from the book: "A good book whose title doesn't do it justice. A very exciting business war, with clear thinking and rich theory.

It's quite good. Although it's a light novel with a focus on enjoyment, it's not mindlessly entertaining.