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Although I have only written a little bit, the story line, rhetoric, scene description, and picture structure are not new to me at all. This typical plot of being rich and then buying things to attract girls can be said to be easy to follow. I look forward to the plot unfolding later [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Please update]

The writing is very immersive and real, as if you were on the scene. This is good writing. When you have money, you don't spend it randomly. After your life improves, you start to do things that will benefit others. This kind of value is also very rare. There are just too many beauties and too many peach blossoms, which makes it look a bit awkward. It doesn't have to be about a beauty. You can also write about a confidant who understands you, a teacher who inspires you, or a righteous friend who helped you after you accidentally fell into trouble. Human emotions are diverse and should not be limited to men and women. It's a casual and refreshing article with fairly positive energy.

I have read about a hundred chapters before commenting. The first few chapters are quite satisfactory, but the latter chapters are really good, especially on business development and interpersonal relationships. I feel that the author should have done this in real life. I hope I can keep writing at this level. There should be more chapters. One chapter a day is not enough. Come on [Like]

Two days later, I read the latest chapter. There are three major turning points so far. The first is the trial and caution when I first got the system. The second turning point is the wanton behavior after having a large amount and doing what every man wants to do but dare not do. The third turning point is the action of realizing the idea of benefiting the people after having a career. The three heroines in the article each have their own direction. Because they have different starting points and different situations, Qu Waner has more of a gentle and gentle sister-like feeling. Ya, wait is a girl who has her own ideas and moves forward bravely for her dreams. Song Yuanyuan started out as a girl who had no ideas and just wanted to be loved. Although she didn't understand what love was, later she found her own direction due to the brief separation from the male protagonist and the guidance, and became a girl who can accompany the male protagonist to a higher level. So far, this book has broken the template of the powerful novels I have read for a long time. The characters are vividly portrayed. The author please don't be unfinished and the writing is really good! ! @ Continuing to follow up on the review, I don't know how many outlines the author has. At present, the short-term plot of the story should be the struggle with overseas capital. The business methods are clear and make people have the desire to keep looking forward to it. However, this plot is a bit too complicated. I feel that the confrontation with overseas capital is over within 10 chapters. Come on, author.

... I read the first few chapters well. I have seen the world, and I am not the kind of poor loser who earns 3,000 yuan a month to write cool novels [laughing]. So far, the writing style is acceptable. I need to read more.

The first few pictures looked very ordinary, but slowly something started to pick up in the later ones. The logic was clear and the writing was okay! Objectively speaking, give it a 4 stars, cheers!

Is it possible that after the protagonist died of starvation, his parents burned him paper money? The reason why these tasks are so simple is because he has a last wish that has not yet been completed, so he stayed in the earthly world, and these are all to dispel his resentment and send him to reincarnation, which is why the story in this book was created.

It's not overly bloated, and the characters are well developed.

It's pretty good-looking. Although it's a cool article, it's not mindless.

In the early stage, it was a simple and refreshing article. I originally read it casually, but when I saw the business war at the end, I was a little attracted to it. It was really good, but I didn't agree with it emotionally. To quote a passage from the book: A good book that was delayed by the title. It is an exciting business battle with clear ideas and rich theories. The characters are well drawn, and the pace of the article is compact but reasonable. The dual lines of love and career are vividly depicted. Big cheers for the author, good books will not be buried. Is there a bunch of bugs in the back that the AI ​​will not fix after they run out? ?