Transmigration: I'm Born Under a Peach Blossom Curse

The previous article is very good. The descriptions of martial arts and the harem are very attractive. However, I don't know what the author's mental state is when he wants to write a cuckold plot. I can't resist it. It's worth reading if you like martial arts and cuckolds.

Very pretty. On the bright side, it tastes like a swordsman in the snow, but on the deeper level, it smells like Jin Yong. There are a few character names that are quite interesting. Lu Fang is Lu Fangweng. If Liu Yuxi is used, will he have a more Taoist image? The name Xie Lingyun, the most beautiful woman in the world, cannot conjure up the image of a beauty in her mind. All she can think of is the image of the old man 'Da Xie'.

See Fu Yaoqin there. The writing is first-rate, with a lot of literary talent, and the logic is also online. It is not the type of mindless fun. It's just that the imagination is not very good, the plot arrangement is not intense enough, there is a lack of bright lines, almost no hidden lines, and the plot sparks cannot burst out. The character of the protagonist is not bad, although he started out as a lewd thief, but later became a slut after studying medicine. However, shortcomings in the plot are hard to make up for with literary talent. Fantasy novels pay attention to the law and land of wealthy couples, supplemented by the six arts of cultivating immortals. The author highlights one couple, but the couple is also written very plainly. The wealth is more than 7,000 taels, and it was looted from a black shop. On the Tomato platform Even though he is poor, his skills are not brilliant enough... Originally, the story about studying medicine was quite good, but before he got too far into it, he arranged for the protagonist to learn swordsmanship, and the weapons were just gifts... Only the author's literary talents and logic + the imagination of fantasy novels can create a hit work. Four-star medium grade. Mark

If this book was mainly about Xie Xiaoyi, it would be okay. If it is bad, it should be more thorough. It would be too fragmented to make this person dare not do anything but rely on his conscience. The idea is good, but I feel that you worry too much, the author. In fact, dark literature is more suitable for your idea. Write boldly.

Dear author, the plot you wrote is very attractive, but can you add AI-generated pictures at the end of each chapter that match the female character in your mind? Nowadays, many AI-generated images are free, but it will take more time.

The character's angle is tricky, and the protagonist's background is used to greatly enhance the conflict of the story, which is very interesting. I'm just a little worried that if there are too many women, the story will be greatly reduced. After all, strong branches and weak trunks will be weak.

I haven't seen this kind of writing in a long time. The storyline is compact and the plot is endearing

It's very exciting, martial arts, not a stud, not pornographic, just right. Update quickly The poem goes well with Wen Chao Gong.

You can cheer up fellow Taoists, just don't be a virgin and a sweet dog. It's worth pursuing me all the time. The protagonist will definitely become popular if he continues with the idea of ​​dual cultivation to become an immortal.

The book is very beautiful, the writing is brilliant, the characters have rich inner descriptions, and the content is ups and downs.