Surviving in the Forest: A Mushroom Encyclopedia from the Start

It can be seen that AI has been used for polishing. I don't particularly hate AI writing, but AI's narrative method that fails to grasp the key points and its tendency to preach and define descriptions is very annoying. I suggest that you polish some of the more obvious plots by yourself. It is indeed a big poisonous point to give out free fruits that can increase attributes. It is because I felt warm after receiving small gifts from others. I especially wanted to be willful (show off my wealth? I personally understand), so I gave them all according to the friend list, and because the protagonist did not know how to face the other party's reply, he turned off the chat? ? ? Even if you directly give away the resources, you can at least write down your friends' reactions and gratitude. It's a bit of positive feedback, okay? Valuable resources were thrown away without even a splash? Even if it is a foreshadowing, it is not buried like this. Moreover, there is no causal relationship between the change between the protagonist giving away valuable things and the protagonist not being clear about his collection decision and then recording it carefully. I can only say that I will pay attention to it later. Except for these two aspects, everything else is okay. It is a relatively classic and qualified system survival article.

I originally wanted to give it four stars to encourage you, but the author hasn't rated it yet, so I give it to you with five stars. Please update! If I write more, I will follow up in detail. (It looks good now. The heroine has a good personality, sober, kind and independent. There is no absolute self-interest. She looks very comfortable. In my own words, I quite like this kind of slow-paced article that describes the infrastructure construction process in detail. However, I have a small suggestion here. It also has magical elements. Can you make the tree house more fantasy? (ˊ˘ˋ*) ♡ It's just a small suggestion. It doesn't matter if you don't adopt it. I will also like it if the author writes according to his own wishes. Come on!)

About Mushrooms: This is a full-length novel. Every few chapters, a book about mushrooms in the real world will be introduced, with pictures in the paragraphs. Regarding infrastructure: Starting from a small wooden house, there will be magic elements in the later stage. There will be various functional rooms, and different mushrooms will be involved. Even the map and trees will change. It is a more detailed and slow pace. Regarding the exchange of materials: There will be some materials left in hand and there is no rush to exchange them because the protagonist will soon surpass the version of materials. There are rarely items of the same value for sale in the market. It is a waste of time to trade in the market. Regarding the character of the protagonist: The protagonist is a girl born in a peaceful era. No one has taught her how to survive in the world of survival. She has a process of exploration and a spiral. She will not be decisive from the beginning, nor will she be cold-blooded and self-interested. I allow the protagonist to make some harmless mistakes. Regarding the narrative rhythm: There will be various events interspersed, which feels like a bit of a surprise. I don't want to write it so that I know what the next five chapters will be after reading the first chapter. I hope everyone will follow the sequence of events without having to worry about it. About giving book reviews: I hope readers who feel something is inappropriate can post a review first to complain about it and give me a chance to explain. If you feel bad after reading only a few chapters, just quit reading and just quit reading. If you don't encourage me, don't hit me. New authors are working hard to learn.

The writing is very good, but there are too few updates at the moment. I hope it will be a full-length novel. In addition, mushrooms and other plants, minerals and animals do not need to be limited to reality, they can be unique to the survival world. My hands are too loose and I have no vigilance. I started giving away just after a little while. I have been slacking off since the early days of survival. If I don't quickly trade my precious resources into other things that can improve my strength, I will give them all away. I have just met ordinary friends in the survival game. Have I become familiar with them for a long time? If someone says a few nice words to me, I will be in the sky.

There should be less descriptive sentences, especially one or two sentences that can be explained clearly. Write a lot. The heroine will reflect on this and that from time to time, and she will reflect on what she has reflected on before and then again. I read the comments and said that this is written by AI... It really feels like the heroine is pretending, and her smile is clear... Yun Danfengqing... Is this still the case in survival games?

When I saw Chapter 46, it was really interesting. I can't say that the protagonist was floating. She was almost shoulder to shoulder with the sun. Yes, she was happy. The author also said that it was for the change of mentality later on. I turned over and read it. Two sentences of reflection and no self-blame. Is this the change that the protagonist exchanged for her most valuable material? That's it, 4 stars should be considered as encouragement to the author

It would be nice if there was less AI polishing.

Chasing serials is no less than a big gamble. Please don't give up. My child can't afford to lose. Please, please🙏🙏🙏

This book is very well written, but no one has read it. . I give it five stars, because the writing style is relatively mature, and the cool points of the survival novel are well nailed, and it won't be blown away, which is quite enjoyable. And I prefer to read female characters, and there are many female characters in this book. Survival novels are considered high-quality in terms of quality, not trivial writing. Come on, author!

Very nice! Chase it all in one go! ! The heroine is a very good baby, kind but not overbearing. She expresses kindness within her ability and makes friends carefully. Many fungi have popular science pictures, and the empowerment is also very interesting! The author's baby is also very good! Reader comments will be explained carefully. Don't let this author baby go! Come and see them all! Please update Kuku hahahaha! !