The Deep-Freeze Train: My Mobile Survival Fortress

To write this book, I pored over diesel engine manuals, plant factory technical guides, apocalyptic medical plans, and even studied recipes from polar expeditions. But I also romanticized it: for example, in reality, such a train may require 20 people to maintain, but the book condenses it into a seven-person team; the real-time scanning of the 'Dawn' system is not technically feasible yet, but I hope it will become a symbol of 'knowledge projection'. Balancing reality and fantasy is like walking on ice, scary but full of fun. Thank you for joining me on this adventure.

The author writes it with care, and it's OK. He put a lot of effort into it. There are various pictures of characters and sample pictures of train warehouses. The post-apocalyptic survival story is pretty good. I think the low rating is because the writing process is a bit dull. After all, this platform is free, and most people want fast pace and passion. At present, the plot of this book is rather dull. Let us look at it from a God's perspective, diary after diary, recording what the protagonist woman does every day. The protagonist relies on the system to supplement, then repairs the car and explores the unknown. It is also possible that the author is burying the thread, for example, two Shen Nian, the protagonist's system has different voices, in the protagonist's dream, the team is destroyed by unknown creatures in the cave, the protagonist repairs the train and suddenly discovers a special code-named item that he encountered before, why can the protagonist be reborn? These are definitely clues that the author is burying, and they are all very good, but the plot cannot always be dull and has to have ups and downs. This is the main reason why I personally think the score is low. There is another big pitfall. The author emphasizes that there is no superpower, so how does the protagonist get reborn? What is the basis for the system radar to automatically scan the surroundings? The protagonist and Shen Nian looked at each other in the dream, from the air. What was the reason? This is also a pitfall, and it depends on how the author comes around. If he doesn't write about superpowers, these pitfalls will be huge. At least hundreds of extra chapters will have to be written about various technological developments and layouts. Why did the upper management choose the protagonist? What advantages does the protagonist have over others? I think the protagonist's plug-in should be opened a little larger, so that the content will be richer, the writability will be diversified, it will be easier to resist unknown risks, and the book will be easier to write. Of course, the author must have his own considerations, and may have already decided what the ending will be like when writing. This is only my personal opinion. Look at it so far, because I have recently seen that the author cares about the ratings, and I have also seen the author actively replying to various questions about the book in the reader's comment area. This shows that the author is still very hard at writing. Although the current rating of the book is low, I still gave it five stars. After all, in 🍅, an author who writes a book with heart is not brainless. , Do background work, make the research data surface reasonable, create various pictures and illustrations to increase the reading experience, actively respond to various voices in the comment area, and insist on updating chapters even if the ratings are low, you are already surpassing most creators. We should support and encourage such authors, so that more and more creators will write books for us to read. It can be seen that the author wrote this book with great care. Book lovers who want to change their taste can read it. There are no surprises. The above is just my personal opinion. I hope the author sticks to his original intention and comes out with his own style. Come on [like].

He did a good job in the survival process and material research, and he was inspired to learn something;. It feels like the protagonist is like the protagonist of Ring World [laughs evilly], and the six girls are the protagonist's favorite villains.

It is really best to have an extremely cold underground fortress, and there is also underground water to solve the energy problem. Planting and breeding also require a lot of water. It is much safer than other trains.

Five stars for this. The author has something and he has really studied it. Although there are some small flaws in some places, the flaws are not concealed. The character creation is okay. As long as you read it, each character has his own style. It is not an inferior product with a background board. Good review. I hope the author will not cut it and keep writing.

The writing is very good, the details are flesh-and-blood, and the pictures are full of sense. The author's writing skills are very strong and there is an outline. Now I see that this book is biased towards a realistic style. Apart from a high-latitude system, there are no other science fiction elements. I just don't know if it will be unfinished. After adding this book, the update is very slow. I would like to support it with five stars.

A very unique book, the train concept is very detailed, and the characters are also good. The plot can be roughly divided into three stages, the preparation stage, the searching stage, and the survival stage. There are some controversial issues in the details of the first two stages, but the general direction can still be grasped. Relatively speaking, the back is not so attractive. The author's writing style is not too commercial. Those who can catch the radio waves will be able to read it, but those who cannot catch the radio waves will not be able to watch it. Give it 4 stars for encouragement.

I am currently reading Chapter 14, which is still in the preparation stage before the end of the world. Maybe for those who are used to eating fast food and refreshing articles, the foreshadowing is a bit lengthy. There will be some who don't have the patience to read on. But how can I put it, AI has come to divide the market, and the author who can write a book so seriously must be a five-star author. It's hard to explain, maybe I'll read it to the end, or maybe I won't be able to finish it in the middle. But I can't wait to comment on the author's serious attitude towards the work!

I feel that the writing is still very good. At least many details are relatively rigorous, which shows that a lot of effort has been put into it. I personally like this book very much and hope that it can reach the end. After reading the author's concerns about the ratings and data, I personally think that the first reason may be that the plot of this book may be a bit bland and more life-oriented. I like it very much, but it may not be in line with the trend. Most people prefer adventurous plots when reading novels such as apocalyptic novels. The second is that there are not many exciting points. Most books either rely on fighting or H to retain readers. Obviously, there are not many such plots in the book and there are even very few copies. Traveling to various places to save teammates in the early stage actually has a lot of room for description. I know this may be the author's style or he wants to create an apocalyptic novel in his mind, but the reality is before us. If we don't change, we may not be able to achieve the results the author wants.

The author definitely put his heart into it, his ideas are good, and his knowledge is quite strong. Some small suggestions are that the scene connection transition sometimes feels a bit abrupt, the system settings are too anthropomorphic, and some descriptions are too detailed. I look forward to continuing to work hard.