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Overall, it's good, but I feel that the plot is a bit delayed, and the updates are a bit slow. The most important thing is that the main line of raising a baby is a bit too much. How can I put it, it feels like there are a lot of unnecessary places, and many places are emphasized repeatedly. However, I still like this kind of group portrait writing. Everyone in Class S feels that the portrayal is good, and I can feel that they have souls. For an entertainment story, the frequency of his sister's appearance is too high, and it's annoying.

It's a good read to read. You have to raise a baby and have your own career. However, when the author writes about raising a baby, it's easy to become ruthless and forget your feelings (I don't care about this, I like to read them all, and the author's introduction also mentions that raising a baby is the main plot) The only two people who are a little bit sensual are Shen Buzhuo and Xie Que. They are a bit corrupt. I don't know what the author thinks. They don't have too many plots, but they will come out to sell them out of the blue [face covering] To be honest, this subject seems to have a bit of both male and female themes, and is more female-oriented, but if they really have signs, the author had better give a warning at the beginning, because some people don't like corruption in non-CP novels (like me) and people in the same class don't want their relationship to be classified as love. If they are too close, it feels like they are balancing literature (scratching their heads) Of course, some people like this kind of plot, and feel that it is good to have a bite while passing by. The author writes based on his own ideas, that is, if they are really serious, can they give a warning at the beginning? [Crying] They are really a pair. The author said that there are several pairs of deputy CPs [eating melon], but so far I can only see two pairs (scratching my head)

This book is very good, it is meant to be read in one go, and the plot is quite interesting. However, I think one of the author's biggest shortcomings is that there are too many words in each paragraph, which dazzles the reader, like a lot of twine. What you see in front of your eyes is your words. Sometimes there are too many. In fact, you can try to divide them into short paragraphs, which will make readers feel very comfortable. But in summary, it is a very good novel. My evaluation may not be too standard, but among the female videos I follow, this is a potential masterpiece. So in the end, I hope the author can suddenly explode and be even more surprised. I highly recommend this book. Although I know what I said, I know that I said too many words, and then divided it into short paragraphs. A small paragraph is a bit silly because I can't finish the sentence, but I just give some small suggestions, don't worry about it [please read carefully]

It's a very good book. There is no heroine, and there are no mixed feelings. It is just a simple career chapter. Friendship and family love are also written very delicately. Especially Zhouzhou. I think she is so cute and I like her very much. The interaction between the brother and sister is particularly poignant. I hope the author can continue his work and update it.

I see that it's going well so far, and getting along with my classmates and sister is quite natural. But after reading this, I want to ask the author, will the protagonist really give up Star Dome Academy for his sister later? If this is the case, can you please tell me that it is a good way to avoid lightning? Because I always think that the resources that a top university has access to are very top-notch. Not to mention anything else, those top composition teachers and so on must give priority to cooperation with top universities. Moreover, it was mentioned before that there are big differences between the two worlds, and a lot of knowledge needs to be mastered, so I think it is still necessary to go to the school. I just want to be more lenient in this situation and bring my sister with me.

It's a cool article, the family line is very warm, but some works require inspiration, and the protagonist is written directly without any foreshadowing, will others really not doubt it? But believe him without any brain 😔 This point needs to be changed. It is almost the same to become the center among classmates. You will be convinced after being crushed once or twice😵‍💫. Didn't that Sheng investigate the protagonist? There must be information about the protagonist before he traveled through time, right? Of course, if you read this article as a kind of heartwarming article about raising a girl and dominating the world, then you will think that I didn't say anything (because I am, but I still hope the author can write better)

This book is so good that I have to open a trumpet account to read it. There is a family relationship between brothers and sisters, and there is also a friendship between friends. Everyone's image is very smart and energetic. So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world beautiful I realized the meaning😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River🤤🤑

It's okay, the character of the main character won my heart. It's just that I think there are some unnecessary plot points in the article that are a bit redundant. Moreover, some of the plots are a bit stiff and feel like they were forced together. Overall not bad.

Only watched part of it. The problems discovered so far are: several psychological descriptions are very redundant. The author is trying hard to prove that Class S is excellent and group-like. When the character's behavior, dialogue, and expressions are enough to convey emotions, we readers will automatically complete the entire process of "empathy-inference-substitution". At this time, the author suddenly jumped out to add a psychological description. It was not a psychological supplement, but a "dumb version of instructions for use." This kind of redundant filler will interrupt the narrative rhythm and greatly affect the reader's perception. Only when the character's external behavior contradicts the inner reality is psychological description not repetitive but revealing. "Functional interaction" overwhelms "life-oriented interaction". The author wanted to write about the advanced feeling of Class S and the warm feeling of progressing with a few friends, but he used too much force, and the effect presented was: middle school, alienation, "acting" intimacy, as if he was trying to sell unfamiliar CB. This is also related to the previous question. Excessive psychological description will make the relationship appear "too full", with no blank space and not many detailed descriptions. The most important "ineffective interaction" has not yet appeared. Regarding the sister, there is no need to delete the scene. It is rare to see a cub written without being offensive. I don't know if the author has the idea of ​​​​writing a cub article. Look forward to the author's progress later and continue to comment later. What does it mean? After I just evaluated these two shortcomings, the latter two problems appeared less often. It seemed like I was deliberately looking for trouble [smile] [cry]

From the perspective of readers with many years of entertainment experience, it can be seen that the writing style is still immature and the rhythm control also needs to be strengthened. However, the most basic sense of pleasure and the arrangement of life-oriented parts in slow-paced and refreshing articles are basically in place. I'm not saying it's necessarily a popular book, but it's still a readable book in today's world of entertainment online articles. You can see the innovation, and the attractive points are not sacrificed because of innovation. I can feel some reference to classic entertainment online articles, but I don't think I am disgusted. I can only say that I hope the author will have new ideas and new guidelines based on this. I rarely write reviews since I read the book, and even less often I open a small book like this and read it straight through. Novels such as "Wenyu Wenzhaogong" have special meaning to me, so I will just think about them above.