A Lone Woman in Troubled Times, Plotting an Age of Prosperity

It's good to read. Although I'm a little disappointed that there are currently no female generals or other female characters that break the rules. However, I guess this book is a long one and I might be able to write about female generals and other characters in the future. The author's writing style is not trivial, and the characters in the play become more and more distinct in the later stages. The main emphasis is that the heroine is a perfect leader with a tough style, and all the people fighting under her are men. In the early stage, there are no distinctive female characters except the heroine. In the middle and later stages, the female characters begin to show their strength. Currently, the big progress is that they can also learn martial arts, and some of the best ones have become military doctors. Although it was really hard to see the female characters being talked about and ridiculed in the early stage and I wanted to give up. But after thinking about it later, I also felt that the awakening and liberation of the female characters in ancient cannibalism must be a step-by-step process... It is understandable if I think so. As of more than 270 chapters in, the heroine is finally about to advance from the king of the mountain (PS: actually the leader of the village) to the leader of a county. I am so moved. Right, right! This author is super productive! Two chapters are updated every day, and a big boss rewarded me with adding three chapters. In short, all five chapters have been updated daily recently, and I just enjoy it! If I want to talk about shortcomings, maybe it is that the heroine expresses too little... From time to time, some people want to express their doubts about the heroine. Mainly those people have a roof over their heads and food to survive because of the heroine. Sometimes it is very unpleasant to watch. The heroine is also always tough, only asking for execution without any explanation. It can be said that it is very consistent with the character... Even if the heroine is really provoked, the heroine can really kill people. In short, I think there are very few good writings on this subject, especially without cp! Those who like to eat without CP are in luck! But I beg the author not to stop updating, oh Negai, Watasi can do anything! As of Chapter 384, there is a big problem for me! The description of expressions and actions in this book is really a bit stiff. The author prefers to use repeated adjectives. I feel like I have seen countless idioms such as "almost imperceptible". I specifically used the full-text search to check it, and it was used more than fifty times. There are also "compassion" and "softness", etc. These words may only be used a dozen times in the whole text, which does not seem to be much. But when you see these words, most of the application scenarios are describing the heroine, and even the sentence structure is very similar. A certain character looks at the heroine's face and feels that she is as compassionate as a Bodhisattva. After the heroine has a serious conversation with Wen Qing or a child, the heroine's eyes suddenly soften when she looks at them. A large number of repeated words ruins the reading experience. Not only does it not make me feel that the characters are well-shaped, but it makes me feel that the characters are very rigid, like robots. As a result, I feel that the heroine's personality charm goes up and down. I think the most attractive moment for the heroine is when she encounters various difficulties and practical problems without panic, and solves them calmly and methodically. At this time, there are not so many adjectives and descriptions, and it is just a clean and neat dialogue to discuss the problem. Just like before and after Chapter 384, the heroine and Wen Qing discussed how to properly resettle soldiers killed or seriously injured in battle and their families, which also led to the distribution of fields, ownership of fields, recognition of women's personal ownership of land farming, education, etc. I can feel the character's charm from this dialogue, but the "barely noticeable" and "soft eyes" that appeared immediately afterwards pulled the character into a rigid stereotype. I hope this book will get better as time goes by, so I point out some of the problems I think it has. All in all, I hope the author writes better and better!

I have reached chapter 437 and will continue to pursue it. The author's outline and overall context are good. It is still very readable on Tomato and there are no obvious bugs. It slightly affects reading (personal opinion). The author likes to describe details, and he likes to use adjectives and repeat words when constructing sentences, which seems a little cumbersome. For example, describing the dress, steps, eyes, and tone. When getting along with children on a daily basis or discussing matters with peers without any disputes, the previous paragraph just described the calm eyes and steady steps, and the next paragraph will repeat ("eyes are still calm", "steps are still steady");... I hope the author can write more excellent works

In fact, I just want to silently urge the update, but it seems that not many people are watching it, so I would like to support it and hope that the author will not give up his efforts to update [Blowing Kiss]. It is very interesting. At the beginning, I had nothing but myself, so it developed slowly and gradually. The heroine is a very charming person, very determined, and it seems that nothing can shake or defeat her. She brings a sense of security and faith to people who are struggling to survive in troubled times and have no human dignity. Then I felt that maybe the title of the book was a bit bland and not eye-catching, but I didn't have any good ideas. To be honest, there are very few articles that I can persist in following. This one somehow made me read it every day. It's quite good, but the author writes about many people and things in too detail. Maybe he's too pursuit of perfection and thoroughness and wants to explain everything clearly. In the end, I felt like I'd read a lot of words, but when I took a closer look, Look, the city is still not in complete order. The people in the city haven't realized that the city lord is a woman, and they haven't gotten used to the heroine's set of rules. The development is really slow. The troubled times seem to be isolated from the land outside Yunzhong City, so the people of Yunzhong City don't know how to say, are they arrogant because of favor? Anyway, it doesn't look very pleasant.

I have read the latest chapter, it is very well written, step by step, from escaping to establishing a stronghold, internal management and external expansion are written in great detail. It took more than 400 chapters to conquer the first county. It is a bit slow but very reasonable. The heroine is strong, wise and omnipotent (she woke up in the mass grave and lost her memory, so a lot of modern knowledge is probably from time travel). I don't know why the score is so low. It is probably because of the serialization. Start high and go low, the rest of the writing is too long-winded, with more than 500 chapters, and it still stops at the first city to measure and divide the fields (which took a lot of space). The author likes to narrate from the perspective of important characters and small people around him, reflecting every political situation. The subtle influence of the policy, especially on those girls breaking free from the shackles of traditional thinking, is obvious. The idea is good, but writing too much is really long-winded and tests the reader's patience. According to this progress, I suspect it will take at least several thousand chapters to complete.

The heroine's calm personality is similar to that of a group portrait. She starts from scratch and plans to build infrastructure at the same time. The progress is fast but detailed. She does not stop step by step. After finishing this and that, she has never been idle. There is no woman pretending to be a man. She picks up a few people at the beginning and builds a stronghold to rob the city and becomes the city lord. The heroine has a high IQ and strong infrastructure ability. She is also the best in martial arts. She is an all-rounder who can do medicine, farming and military affairs. She is very good-looking and not bad at all. She is on par with those few Empress novels. The most funny thing is not the Golden Finger Sand Glyphs, she relies on her brain step by step. I stopped watching it after reading it for more than 300 chapters. Suddenly I saw someone who had recommended it and commented that it was good and I came back to read it. I have reached 600 chapters. There are more and more female characters in the later chapters. Every arrangement is very reasonable and there is no role reduction. I hope there can be more infrastructure.

The heroine is calm and decisive, and builds her power step by step, from a few people to a stronghold, and from a stronghold to a city. It's wonderful to witness their growth step by step, and I really like this steady pace of improvement.

It's really good-looking. The heroine has both iron-blooded methods and a compassionate heart. She accumulates strength bit by bit at the beginning, recruits refugees, develops the base, and also fights wits and courage with the enemy. It is not only the development of infrastructure, but also depicts the darkness of human nature. Each character is well written and the characterization is interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard,

I have read more than 200 chapters. So far, the author has written in great detail, and the shortcomings do not hide the good points. (There are only a few minor flaws. There are fewer female supporting characters in the early stage, but there will be more and more in the future.) The territory of power is also expanding step by step, and the rhythm is well controlled. It perfectly meets the characteristics of the article I am looking for, including women without women, troubled times, infrastructure farming, and the article about the founding female emperor who slowly developed from scratch to something. I hope Rainbow Dash will have many, many female bodyguards in the future. The author is very nice, I feel very sincere, and he will respond to comments very seriously. The updates are also super stable. I feel that the more I write, the smoother it becomes. The more I write, the more attractive the plot becomes. The creation of different characters makes me feel the charm of group portraits. Nice! I will keep following it! Come on, come on, come on! Tied! It's getting prettier from behind! I am very happy and touched to see more and more women showing up [almost crying] When I read the chapters about Su He, I was moved by this resolute and brave girl. The future general is still a little girl who blushes nervously when seeing the city lord. The Lord of the City sparkled in her eyes, which also fascinated me. I am moved by the growth of every woman. They cherish each other, are not afraid of hardship, are not afraid of tiredness, are happy, shy, tearful, and aggrieved. Each word describes a different, but vivid and specific woman, calamus, Su He, Tian Sui, Mo Heng, Xin Yi, Yunyao, Ye Zhi, Orchid Grass, Huixin, Xia Mu, Qiu Ye... Wu Wu Wu, it makes people's hearts soften when they read it. Highly recommended! Come on, come on! What you wrote is really great. I feel so wise [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The heroine Yun Huaijin is a very calm and smart person, capable of fighting and planning, and she doesn't talk nonsense and just kills people. It's very refreshing [Adoration] The beginning of the story is a bit slow, but starting from Yunzhai and becoming stable, Yun Huaijin's vision has gradually expanded! I hope the author will update it soon [Ai Mu][Ai Mu][Ai Mu] The power backgrounds are all based on history. I feel that the situation is very big [Thinking]

The rating of 7.8 Actually allowed me to find a treasure book. I don't know how this rating came about. Such a beautiful and exciting book does not even have a rating of 9. I am very speechless. If it were a normal rating, I would be too lazy to read it. Fortunately, the title of the book attracted me, otherwise I would really miss a top-notch book. The author's writing is very good, and the plot Thrilling, tense and exciting, the heroine is decisive and strategic, her IQ is online, her force value is super high, she is a real heroine, and the most important thing is that she has no CP. You don't have to watch those embarrassing and boring emotional scenes. Anyway, everything hits my point. I am disappointed that there is no score above 9.4. Come on, the author, the writing is great👍