Creating Nod-Krai, Starting with Demon Slayer

Okay, okay, I would rather watch Muzan's side about Teyvat. The plot of Demon Slayer Squad is relatively uninteresting and makes people want to skip it. There are also some "small problems" that I don't know if it is a private device or a typo. If it is a private device, there is no explanation for the existence of the "small problems" afterwards, which feels a bit suffocating. But overall it's pretty good.

A new and eye-catching theme, you can basically see the whole part of the Demon Slayer fandom at a glance, training, killing ghosts, making up for the regrets of the original work, and finally defeating them without any misfortune, the finale.

Note that the protagonist is not without misfortune. She has her own personality and ideological and moral values. As long as you can accept this, then this book will be quite good. I hereby give you five stars to express your encouragement.

Logically speaking, the Demon Slayer Squad, including Tanjiro, should all be Japanese. The reason why people kill ghosts is firstly because they want revenge, and secondly because they don't want more people to be eaten by ghosts. After dealing with the ghost-related matters, they should go back to their respective homes just like in the original work. Even if the author intends for the protagonist to arrange a mission for the Demon Slayer Squad to fight against the Abyss, fighting into the Abyss is not the same as exploring the continent of Teyvat, because they can understand Teyvat through books and other methods. The main character's system mission is to increase Teyvat's exposure, so all areas should be equally exposed to rain and dew. However, Teyvat is so big, with so many settings, characters, and forces, and there are many "side missions" that can better increase the authenticity of the world view and are extremely exciting. Without "traveling" to various regions, these are completely impossible to show. These are the charms of the Teyvat continent! The author is behind, how do you want the protagonist to arrange the protagonist group and others, so that they can have "motivations and reasons" to explore the world view of Teyvat?

Luna became Wu Ke. It can be said that Hong Yue was shattered and polluted by the abyss, and had to be reincarnated into Wu Ke. Because the erosion of the abyss turned her into the personality of a ghost king, and the curse was also the erosion of the abyss.

The two chefs are ecstatic, Tongmo Longchang Enlightenment is so well written, author, come on [blowing kisses]

Personally, I suggest that the protagonist could add a setting in the remake: the moon was originally shattered, and the fragments fell into the world, which is the source of ghosts, the influence of ghosts on the world, the hatred of the victims for ghosts and the ghost king, and the obsession to truly call for the return of the moon, so the moon must wash away sins. It's quite interesting that the God of love returns because he harms people.

The teacher wrote well. When I read what the teacher said about the follow-up arrangements for the Immortal River's family, I was thinking about the two Immortal River brothers looking at the girlish Wuhan. They took out their mother from a pile of moon spirits and gave them a bunch of little carrot heads for their younger brothers and sisters. Then they pulled out a deer or a bird with a strange neck and said it was the father. The two of them looked confused, which I thought was beautiful😄

"So, you have always guided us, but never served as a leader." Nosaka recalled some of Luna's remarks. "Yeah, I'm just providing you with this theory, the creator is someone else. The human world should be built and created by humans themselves. If I take action, the world will become what Moon God Luna wants, instead of writing your future through human will. I am just a guide, and I don't like to be a new authoritarian who is above all human beings. " I like this sentence very much

Yes, yes, this work is the best fanfic I have ever read so far. The writing is excellent and not brainless. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] But what I have to say is—— Author, when will you remember that this is a work that you haven't updated for months? ! ! Not enough! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]